1. You have multiple story lines which is great but goes halfway and then depth is lost
2. Nandu mentions Kumud called him in Dubai and told him how Saras feels... when did that happen? Gun mentions to Saras - about him and Kumud being in love...(this is before he proposes) when did she realise that? since only Dugba seemed to be a witness most times
3. Today Saras is running behind the bus, Kumud sees him , asks the driver to stop - look at the gall of the driver who dares to disobey a teacher and keeps driving - maybe driver wanted to test Saras's running skills!!!
4. Guman - how did she follow Kumari today - car? where was it? walked with her heels , ran with them and followed the idiot with kumari on his bike?
5. The new Vidyachatoor is too held back.. there is something missing... why the change... anyways that can happen due to n number of reasons... but I wish the character brought passion back
6. Dugba who always suspects guman for everything does not think it funny that Guman still has not unpacked after she has been a guest here for so long and lurking in every corridor ?????? how come she didnt follow her?
7. The PMS scene was the most tepid ever... Didnt know that so much furor would be raised for a scene that is only being referred to
8. Too many small details constantly missed...
CV's please dont hurry up with the story, you are in a new time slot and TRP's will rise due to a great story not because u r in a major hurry and changing story lines without building a basis.
Please stick to your story, write dialogues that are not always corny... SLB- TV is a different medium... so do not leave too many loose ends!!