SwaRon OS- My World Falls In Your Arms

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Hey, A new OS on SwaRon...
Its Of mainly Sharon's POV...
Its on current track with Previous scenes with some of my touch...
Enjoy...!!



I just can't forget that moment'National Dance Camp incident'

Our Promise..which I could not fulfilled' but He did'



That incident always roam in my mind..The day we reached there..we all were ready..for our Solo.
He and I promised each other that we will win in Our Solo's' It was my turn..
The gang was shouting my name'but he was only smiling and hooted once'
which made me cheer'I started Dancing' it was my bad luck'
I was not well..still I had to make him proud..by winning the Trophy..but unfortunately'
I fell down while Dancing'what happened next I don't know..



I was unconscious' when I opened my eyes..I was in Medical Room..resting and
He was in front of me with his eyes concerned, the love, the care..could be clearly seen'
Just by seeing him..tears flowed down my eyes'



He helped me in getting straight..sit upright..I mouthed him Sorry'
but he is the one..who blamed himself for making me Promise..
he asked me why I did so'and the true reason I told that I wanted to fulfill his given promise'
as he is important to me'I knew that he won't believe'
he asked me'and I replied many times that YES..He is REALLY important to me'



He pulled me in a Bone-Crashing hug'which was so much needed'I needed it..his touch'his soothing arms..were everything to me'I liked him very very much'I mouthed it'to him'and reply I got which he carved from my mouth since long..That He Loves Me'"I Love You"' I cried while hugging him' I felt his tears'and could sense that he was smiling through tears..



We were not in a Relationship..I didn't want to lose him'My ego always came over my heart's decision..but he, his eyes , his arms, the hug'my feelings revolted my mind'Emotions flowed.. were so immense'so needed'.that I had to say'

"Relationship khatm hone se Feelings aur Emotions to khatm nahi hote"



That day I had to leave him'for some days'rather Months'.
Some harsh came between us'made us go more far away then before'



I returned but didn't even had courage to face him'. I had to leave my Passion'DANCE'

Dance bind us...it was the one who kept us close'to each other'
but then Dance was not with me so how could I think of being with him'
this thought was enough to make me go far from him'which was really hard'



He knew something was wrong with me..how can I leave Dance'or live without Dance'
He asked me but just to avoid him I did shout on him and showed my so-called Ego.
He was heartbroken..could easily see'



I didn't wanted him to leave Dance just for me..that's why I was not revealing out the harsh reality'

I cried , I wanted to Dance but my health always came over my Passion'
His concern , the care , the eagerness of him , finally made me to reveal him the truth'.
I opted the way which bind us..the way which is my Passion..and our Promise'DANCE'



End of the dance only led to the truth to come out'that I suffer from Asthama'
which was a deadly shock for him'
He didn't even had words which consoled me'.
he had that intense Love of his for me which could console me'
but I..I had to go away from him'.
I told him that I can come out from this Problem my own..which was Lie'
He , as he always say and follow'"Your wish is my command" ,
then also followed that quote , he , just for my Happiness'.
Left me there'but from his heart he was with me'



Days passed harder'but then something had to happen'and it was Friendship' which was not to be there..

His care for me, my health was so much that It forced me to follow what he said..that to 'Dance''
as it will be a fighter against Asthama'

He was true'he is always true'



I just can't believe how can anyone be so caring so loving so hearty so selfless'
These words match or rather are apt for HIM only'no one change this..
Even if sometimes This quality come forward as an recessive character still no one can deny
That the qualities above are definition of HIM'



What to think next'I think of him every now and then'Day and Night , in Dreams and of course Reality'

Just a day or two before'



We all gathered in the Rehearsal Hall..for the Rehearsals Of Semis..He was also there near me'
Not to forget some stupid gang members fight was going on..which resulted in collision'a bad one'.

He fell on floor due to a push ! Caused Sprain in his Shoulder'



I rushed to him'and could not control and burst out my anger on the boys..who created nuisance'

I was feeling bad for him'why shouldn't I..I liked him.or say ki it was more than a mere Like..



He went to the Medical Room'

I also reached there..and asked him about his health..
I knew he would be happy as he was expecting this'he smiled and nodded !!



Day after'.al were there for practicing for Lifts..
means he had to lift me up which indeed was difficult for him'for it could cause more damage..

I warned him'but no'He was the one like..everything is fine with him'



He lifted me up'.and within a second cried in pain..and left me'down'
and landed straight on floor holding his shoulder'

He was immediately taken to Medical..

All were busy in talks when I got a chance an went to him..



He was sitting in black'buttons opened..revealing his shoulder'chest...
and a hot bag on his shoulder for relief'I saw him'I couldn't see him in so much pain'

I called him'he looked at me'and covered his shoulder back'
he told me that he is Okay..but I could feel his pain..
I went behind him..took the hot bag and opened his shirt'and massaged the injured part'
My touch sent shivers to him'he winced in pain'which reflected in my eyes'

I couldn't see him in pain'.so hurt'tears formed in my eyes'

He was controlling himself'.I removed his hairs a side when he got up'

I came in front of him'..held his hand'.and moved it in up down so that it becomes free'

Still he was looking at me'not even blinking his eyelids'. His watery eyes'.



We didn't needed words to contact..our eyes ,
our hearts were enough to convey what we want to say to each other'.



I slid my one hand under his shirt on the shoulder part'to sooth it'he winced..
I was unable to control myself from not soothing him as what he carved for'.I immediately hugged him' He too responded'.

That hug was so intense that I could feel'My touch , my hug was a best medicine for his Any injury'

We shared a passionate hug'a eternal hug filled with so many emotions'
Emotion of Pain' Emotion of care'.which was flowing continuously'
Emotion of Togetherness'.which was carved for ages' Emotion of Love'OUR LOVE'.



Something was in his mind..he retraced himself..he broke the hug'and
looked at me with moist eyes..holding me with my shoulders..

I could not see him like this.. I held his hands(palms) and kissed on its back'
he was amazed , shocked..I gave in , came inches close to him'still his hands with mine'my eyes closed'.

He came out of this trance..and moved back' nothing he spoke'.



Just took his bag and left me'alone there'

I was unable to believe what happened to him'..
Does his love for me is Vanished'he doesn't Love me any more ?? If not..then why he left me ???


Hona laga hai mujhe ye ehsaas

Ki ruk jayegi tumhari bina ab yeh saas

Nahi reh sakti ab ek bhi din tumhare bina

Rehna chahti hu sath me tumhara sada

Kehti hu me tumse ye aaj

Ki tumhari bahoon me guzaar dungi me apni zindagi puri ab

Bas ab yahi hai mere fariyaad


I without saying anything ran to home..
I sat on the floor thinking about what happened few minutes ago'was it all just nothing'???

I had one choice to calm myself down that was DANCE' I on the Music player'

The song played was "Sunn raha hai na tu..Ro rahi hun mein" (Female) (Aashiqui2)



Manzile'rusva hai'.

Khoya hai Raasta'.

Aaye le jaye..

Itni si iltezaa'




It was true..I was confused what to do..the path , LOVE , was now on critical spot'

My destination was him'I wanted him..but he was not there with me'.

I took me first step..to dance'when I slipped down' I wanted him..to hold me , take me to him'

I stood up and flowed to the music'



Ye meri Zamaanat hai'

Tu meri Amaanat hai'

Aa'aa'.



I was dancing and dancing'sliding on floor'

I was not able to digest the fact that he left me..!
I was worried for him'I thought to go to him'but'.



Mujh ko irade de'.

Kasme de vaade de'.

Meri duaaon ke isharon ko sahare de'



I twirled around'on one leg'.swayed on the song lyrics'

They were the perfect ones for my situation'.



Dil ko thikaane de'.

Naye bahaane de'.

Khwabon ki barishon ko'

Mausam ke paimaane de'




I walked to my room'.opened my cupboard , looked at his pics stuck on my wall'
moved my hands on them one by one'.and took one out'.



Apne karam ki kar adayein..

Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein..

Sunn Raha hai na tu'.

Ro rahi hoon mein'


Kissed that pic..of his'my eyes became moist'.
i was pleading to the pic'to come to me'.and grab me in his arms'



Sunn raha hai na tu'

Kyun ro rahi hoon mein'



I hugged that pic and twirled'begging him to come !! And sat on the floor'
almost laying on it'



Waqt bhi thehra hai'

Khoya hai raasta'

Kaash tu aise aaye'

Jaise koi dua'.



I stood up'.took that pic and stuck it in the place where it was'
His Corner'.I saw him'.coming towards me'open arms'

I ran and hugged him'but this was all dream'.i was imagining , it was not him'
I got hurt in my head'as I banged to the Pillar'.



Tu rooh ki raahat hai

Tu meri ibaadat hai..Aa aaa..

I touched where I got hurt'blood was coming out..it led a deep scar'.on my forehead'

It pained..but this pain was nothing in front of pain that I felt'that He was not with me'



Apne karam ki kar adaayein'

Kar de idhar bhi tu nighahein..

Sunn raha hai na tu'.

Ro rahi hoon mein..




I let the blood flow out'I cried'tears were not stopping'
I wanted to be in his arms ! I wanted him so badly'

I was in Love with him'.I Love Him'.I started my floor steps once again'



I shouted'.ki I Love Him So Much'.



Sunn raha hai na tu'

Kyun ro rahi hoon mein..

Yaara..




I sat on floor hugging my knees..



Kara tha mene tumhe khud se alag

Nahi pata tha ki sirf reh jayegi mere pass tumhare pass hone ki jhalak

Nahi hoti mujhse ab ye duri bardash

Bhar le mujhe apni bahoon me tu aaj

Chahti hu tujhko me dilo jaan se

Ab nahi reh sakti tere bin yahi meri hai aas


The song ended'..but still my Emotions didn't stop'
so without wasting time I decide to go to his place'



Now'at present being in his arms'his embrace is like I am in heaven'.
I am so blessed ki I now have my Love with me'and me resting my head on his chest'
his arms around me'..

I so confessed my true feelings to him'.

I can so feel togetherness'completeness'my world is he..his presence'



It happened like I went to his place'I without wasting any time'went to his room..
he was sitting covering his face with his hands'

He jerked when I called his name'

He looked at me'I was all pale..tear stained face..scar on head'bloody forehead'.



He ran to me'and cupped my face'

He asked.."What happened..to you..?"

and ran his hands on my forehead'I winced in pain'

He pulled me in a hug'.

I hugged him back'and then broke the hug'.



He asked me what Happened'.but I didn't spoke a word'he shook me'
I wanted to bark out questions that why he left me alone'and all'but I didn't had courage to speak so'

I just said- "You fulfilled your Promise.."

He was confused'I nodded my head..and said'

Your eyes'who cares for me'
which always has a sign of Love for me..
your arms who when takes me In sent shovers to me..shivers of pleasure'completeness'

I feel the belonging..when I am with you'I so want you..to be with me always..

When I am in your arms..in your embrace'I feel like living..My heart Lives'MY LIFE LIVES'

'My World Is You'

"I Love You'I Love You'Swayam.."



Rehti thi me tumse dur hamesha

Nahi chahti thi tumse banana koi rishta

Dar lagta tha mujhe pyaar se tumhare

Nahi lagta tha ki bhar paungi zindagi me khushiya tumhare

Tumse dur rehke,tumhe khoke jaana hai mene ki kya ho tum mere

Karna chahti hu tumse me aaj izhaar

Ki karti hu me tumse tumhare jitna pyaar


His eyes were happily amazed'his eyes glowed'

He took me in his embrace'we shared a hug'so passionate'a never ending one'

He said while hugging- I Love you too My Siren Sharon'..

We broke the hug and he placed his lips on mine'it was a kiss'which I carved for..which he wanted'

He picked me up.. in his arms'and twirled me'
I could see the glint in his eyes'the Love..The Care'The completeness'The Belonging'everything !

It was a bless to us that we were now ONE'

'Swayam Sharon as SwaRon'



I hugged him while I was in his arms'I loved to be there'.it was the safest place..yet the most suitable place for me'.
It was like my heart was beating in sync with his'

We sat on the Floor'I resting my head on his chest'his arms wrapped around me'

'.His Arms'The Place Where My World Falls'.



...Your touch send me Shiver'

...Wrap your arms around me..for ever'

'Your Love..Your Embrace..Your hug..never harms'

'Cause'My World Lies In Your Arms'


How was this Super Lame OS..????
Hope it was readable...
I just wanted to write some different...So
I posted...
Hope u like it..do give response...
PS- CREDIT to Shayaris (hindi) goes to Sadiya...
Thanks to you...Love u Shishya..
Deepu Di..thanks to u also..for help...Love u..

For Pms Add -SwaRonWorksPm- to ur buddy list..

Love,
Sakshi..













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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Swthrt...🤗


WOW..WOW..WOW...the 1st part was nostalgic ...u summarized whole swaron journey😳...the hug...the emotions...the longing ...the love was beautifully portrayed..


We shared a passionate hug'a eternal hug filled with so many emotions'
Emotion of Pain' Emotion of care'.which was flowing continuously'
Emotion of Togetherness'.which was carved for ages' Emotion of Love'OUR LOVE'.

.her questions were natural...does he still love her...

She let out her pain...through her dance...the part when she imagined him was beautiful...awww..the choice of song was apt...


loved the way she expressed her love...the hug...the kiss..the love...loved the OS...


beautiful lines...

...Your touch send me Shiver'

...Wrap your arms around me..for ever'

'Your Love..Your Embrace..Your hug..never harms'

'Cause'My World Lies In Your Arms'


Luv
Ur Di


Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Strawberry 🤗

Wow...simply wow...i mean you seriously make me speechless every single time, dunno how you manage to write such beautiful stuff, I was totally lost while reading the OS, the way you penned it down the whole OS was simply mind blowing...Specially loved that the OS was written from Sharon's POV, which made the OS more special because the only thing that was missing in show was Sharon monologue...Flawless OS... 🤗 ❤️


You began with the dance camp hug instead of just starting with the medical room hug was fabulous...the dance camp hug and the medical room hug both are very special and this OS contained both hugs that to from Sharon's POV, which was just PERFECT.


Then you reflected on some special swaron memories, reading all this made me feel quite nostalgic. and then comes Sharon's dance every move was brialliantly penned down and i liked the song you choosed for that dance "Sun raha hai nah tu" I liked the way you have shown that Sharon has expressed her every emotion through dance..CARE...PAIN..LOVE...CONCERN...you have done full justice to emotions


Finally comes the super se upar wala confession scene was fantastically written anf yeah not to forget the hindi & english poems/shayari were beautifull ❤️

This OS was simple yet beautifull

You everytime manage to make me smile with your lovely piece of writting...n i juz luv u for dat 🤗 ❤️


Your eyes'who cares for me'

which always has a sign of Love for me..

your arms who when takes me In sent shovers to me..shivers of pleasure'completeness'

I feel the belonging..when I am with you'I so want you..to be with me always..

When I am in your arms..in your embrace'I feel like living..My heart Lives'MY LIFE LIVES'

'My World Is You'

"I Love You'I Love You'Swayam.."


This were the best lines of the OS loved it ❤️


And what did you say?? LAME Haan?? seriously?? you must be joking me...how can you say this OS was Lame...goshh you r seriously crazy, i mean such a beautiful OS and you call it lame... 😡 DON'T YOU DARE SAY DAT HUH!! my Strawberry's work can never be lame and for you kind info...this OS was just out of the world so stop saying it was lame...samjhi??


This OS was something very different which had all best Swaron memories and some new scenes which all Swaronians must have dreamed of eg: confession 😳 and dat too written by the best writer...which made this OS a very special one...loved it...thnku thnku very much strawberry for writing such a amazing OS...loved it to the core ❤️


Okay!! ab mein aur nahi bolungi tu bhi padhte padhte takk gayi hogi 😛 so lemme stop now so all in all fanatabulous OS...loved it fully...and and and last line toh bhol du 😛 KEEP WRITTING MORE 😳

Luv u...muaahhhzz 🤗 ❤️ ❤️

Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome choti...lovd it...thnx for d PM...
but lenghty
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was nice.good i loved the realization of sharon.ending could have been better.but over all nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is superbly amazing,
i so much wantd this to happen in show..
The pov's is all that missing there..
This story made me feel more close to that scene..
Great job
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS..
loved the sharon's point of view...😊
Thnx for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sakshiii :D :D
that was just awesum..
i m blown away by this Os.👏
simply amazing...
Loved it..❤️
And the Song...
Perfect
Thanks For the Pm.
Love,Mini ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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God !! it was what we always wanted... Sharon 's monologue... it was superb... The whole swaron saga after dance camp flew into my mind.. it was indeed lovely.. thanks for pm.. keep writing such wonderful os's...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!! it was completly beautiful and different aswell!
awesome is all I can say!!
u wrote it so amizingly!! great work!! 👏
loved it a lot 😃
thank u for the PM dear 🤗

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