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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: htgcute

When will u update this ff anni...


Waiting eagerly...


i will try to update asap😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Straight up I luved it <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Livroop_Bieber

Straight up I luved it <3


thank you
and i am waiting for ur ss
plzz update 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
comment edited on page 11 nd sry for late edit...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

sorry for the res board...😭😭😭

Hunh iam still there..i had a feeling that Vijay's suicide would be a prank bcoz he don't have that s guts lol... But Then Uday met with an accident..how and whats that puzzle which is still unclear in the whole story has he left her path just for her to get back her riyasat..was it augustia's evil plan??? and how could Ujjini say all those abt uday..really felt bad for him😕..
continue soon and thanks for pm..once again sorry for unres it late


hah we all know him soo well
we never know which mud is wet and which is dried
hmm angry young girl but she will not regret saying this
it ok twino no sorry😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

nice update...manveer meeting on the way...


thank you so much😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.

Update soonnn puff pastryyy


i am trying my hunney bunnye

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Posted: 12 years ago
writter note: gargi jiji this one for teasing me
ps please do not mind me i am just jocking so please don't take it seriously😭
CHAPTER 3

She entered the room , while ujjani stood at the door steps turning her face the other way , the errie silence and the darkness made her footsteps sound loud . ten different instruments beeped and LED flickered at regular intervals . cables from the instruments disappeared into the man whom she loved more than anything and no matter what she would always be by his side even when he tells her to leave , they did divorce but she never missed a karva chuat or never took off her magalsutra or did sindoor , this signified her loyalty towards her marriage and towards her husband , she noticed him , his spiky hair , his tan complexion turned white due to blood loss and his lips were thin due to the medicines , manyata eyes were flooded with tears as he looked at her helpless , she headed toward him and knelled in front of his bed , she took his hands and showered down her tears as she cried , she forgot everything her past the revenge to her only uday mattered she was ready to forgive him but was he willing to start afresh he dragged his hands off hers and started to scream at her

UDAY:what the heck? Why are you here?

She stood up though she was completely scattered the sound of her broken heart brought tear in her eyes , she looked at him all pleddingly and could manage to say

MANYATA:I ca….me to see you

She noticed fire balls in his eyes as with a bit of struggle he sat on his bed and grabbed her hand piercing his nails in her soft skin and roughly pulled her close to him , he could feel her breath on his neck as her tear drops fell on his chest but he had turned into a merciless devil as he screamed

UDAY:to see what that I am alive or dead I am so sorry but I am alive

MANYATA:uday why are you like this I do not know why are you so angry on me I do not even know what is my fault but I am sorry please forgive me I really need you please

She begged him as he lossen his grip and a signature smirk was plastered to his face and said clamly

UDAY:but I have nothing to do with you I have moved on and it is better if you do the same

MANYATA:I can't cause my heart stuck on you I love you please uday please

UDAY:see manyata I do not care there is no need of all this begging I will not melt ok and do not ever come back to me ever because I do not even want to see your face

MANYATA:why are you doing like this uday don't you love me where are the promises you made me ?

UDAY:promises are meant to be broken sweet heart and moreover I am getting married to rajkumari gargi

Manyata was scattered , she could not believe her ears as she stood immobile and asked him

MANYATA:how can you get married to another girl when you are already committed to me ? and what about our child ? what about your daughter uday?

UDAY:huh haha she is your daughter manyata not mine okay so don't you drag her in this and yes I hope you remember we got divorce so no strings attached now please leave gargi maybe coming anytime ok

Manyata just opened her mouth to speak just as there she heard a footsteps she turned to see a it was gargi and an evil grin plastered to her face as she passed manyata and went and sat beside uday caressing his check and said

GARGI:awn poor baby I was so worried how did this happen?

UDAY:I am sorry princess the jeep race turned really bad for me

The word princess rang like an alarm in her ear she realished she was replaced he had moved on leaving her far behind as that gargi continued

GARGI:it ok baby I will give you a special body message and my baby will be totally fine

He smirked at her while manyata witnessed the whole incident , she was rooted to the ground as tears flooded from her eyes and suddenly gargi glared at her and said

GARGI:I hope you do not need an invitation the door behind you so LEAVE gosh baby I must say your x wife a chewing gum

UDAY:can 't help princess she is addicted to me

They broke into a laughter , and poor manyata could no longer take this and she rushed out of the cabin with tears on her eyes and here asap uday saw her going gargi got away and sat on the stool as uday took the teardrop and kissed it , his eyes were too flooded with tears as he said

UDAY:I love you too princess how unlucky dad I am did 'nt even get a glance of my own daughter?

GARGI:why don't you tell her the truth?

UDAY:if id do she will loose everything all over again I cannot see her breaking

GARGI:but today you was really cruel to her you should have not done this uday

UDAY:the more harsh I am the better for her by the way thank you so much for helping ,me

GARGI:anything for you by the way I am leaving for states today evening

UDAY:ok well best of luck for your marriage

GARGI:thank you btw what are you gonna say manyata

UDAY:after what I did she will never turn back to me she has decided to move on and I know my princess

They shared a warm hug while this all was noticed by a pair of eyes , yes a little three year old girl noticed everything it was ujjani she now knew her father was innocent as tears swelled in her eyes and she said to herself

UJJANI:oh no that mean uday still loves mumma but maybe the reason of there separation is me I have to tell mumma wait no I cannot if I tell her then she will go back to uday and leave me all alone I cannot let that happen he had made mumma cry and he will pay for each of her tear drops and I promise uday I will make you pay you said mumma is addicted to you an so see I will get a better guy for him

Saying this she stomped out of the hospital to find her mother sitting in the car , without any futher argument she went and sat as manyata drove towards the rajmahal , the whole way she was quite just tears droped her cheek , finally on reaching she stomped to her room and ignoring all the questions on her way she locked herself and crumbled down on the cold floor crying out her heart as she said in middle of her cry

MANYATA:I love you uday pelase come back I need you please please udya I love you

She cried and soon found it difficult to breath her eyes felt heavy as she fainted while they got a gist of the incident from ujani the whole family fumed in anger as they pitied manyata they wanted uday to pay for his deeds but first they needed to consoul manyata as unnati said

UNNATI:do not worry dad today I and vijay will take her out and refreshen her mood we will get the old bubbly manyata back

KOMAL:and I shall take ujjani out poor kid I cannot even imagine what must be going inside her after seeing her parents like that

BRIDGRAAJ:cannot even believe uday could stoop so low he is remarring

GIRIRAAG:it all my fault I could not grow him up to a good person I am sorry vasundra I am a bad father

DADISABH:there is nothing wrong with you giriraaj as your another child unnati is also been looked over by you so don't blame yourself poor manyata I pity her

Suddenly a voice rang from behind they turned there she stood at the stair case all composed and her face was glowing with an unknown spark there was no sindoor in her forehead and no magalsutra in her neck she had even taken off her engagement ring and unlike like everyday she was not in a grey shade inside she looked bright and all so colourfull in a western red summer outfit one could never say she was a mother of a three year girl she walked down and headed toward the dustbin there was a sag bag which she threw away as ds asked

DADISABH:what was that beta?

MANYATA:marriage material my ring , magalsutra , sindoor and my wedding dress if the marriage do not exit then there is no place for this thing in my life no more and unnzie lets go clubbing tonight I am bored

She said with a smile that hide her million tears as every body was overjoyed by her new avator she had finaly moved on but just to be dragged to her past again

DONE WITH THIS CHAPPY😛

DO HIT THE LIKE😊

SORRY FOR MY MISTAKES😭

PM SEND ONLY TO THOSE WHO LIEKD MY PREVIOUS UPDATES😆

NO RES BOX😡

OR SS DISCONTINUED😡


Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Anni that was a fab update..👏
And I am happy again to comment first..😃
I wonder what is the reason behind manveer separation...
Well this ujjani is seriously like her j maasi in the show...
But yeah she is also right in her place can't help it atlast she is too young...
And of getting manyata a new hubby OMG this ujjani is a small packet big dhamaka for sure...
Well poor manveer has to suffer a lot...
Don't know wat uday is hiding hope we get manveer back...
Uday knows so well his princess...
Well plz... continue asap plz...

Hugzzz...🤗
Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago

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