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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 33: Part 3

"Is there anything I can do in parallel? I think I can manage more than analyzing phone records." Malvika asked crouching down and looking around the papers spread around her. Arnav looked up from the stack of papers on his lap and smirked.

"That's awesome Malvika, why don't you start working on our judiciary too." He was starting to act like six year old in a candy shop. "Everyone has started to think that Supreme Court is a government controlled body which isn't true actually." There was blinding emotion in his voice. Before Malvika could dissect it, he added lightly "Let's show our public who is the real daddy here." He winked audaciously at her. Malvika looked at him blankly for a moment and turned to look and Khushi hoping she would provide her with more details.

"One of the primary complaints in this country is the delay in legal proceedings. There are cases where in due to pressure from government, courts have worked in record speed and ruled a judgment while there are cases - let me give you an example. A woman was in jail for 19 years because she couldn't raise a bail for a small sum of ten thousand rupees. She got lost in the system over the years and it simply continued. From humanitarian perspective, it is barbaric. If I shed my humanity for a moment and talk in terms of numbers: it would have been probably cheaper to let her go than incarcerate her for two decades." Khushi stopped for a moment to clear her throat. Being a lawyer, she say many cases which had all possibility of ending in a settlement but for the pencil pushing attitude of the administrators which prolonged process more than necessary.

"Get it done Malvika. I don't care how you get the nine people I want reinstated but it has to happen in three weeks. Use whatever mode necessary to attain your goal." There was no emotion in Arnav's voice.

"Can I kill someone in the process of attaining my goal?" Malvika asked snidely pocketing a sheet of paper with names written on it.

Arnav's voice was flippant. "Don't be silly Malvika. It should never come to homicide. However if it is inevitable, let me know. I know people who will do that job for you."

Malvika hadn't remotely anticipated this reply from Arnav. She had signed up for bringing about change in the country. She wasn't nave to believe that there wasn't going to be any collateral damage. But the sheer detachment with which Arnav spoke about it sent chills in her spine.

Shukla stood up suddenly, papers on his lap fluttering around him. Arnav, Khushi and Malvika looked at him and saw him rush towards television.

"I just came to know." He said and increased the volume.

Prasenjit Sarkar, Krishna Kumar and Bhanu Pratap were standing on a podium and a massive garland ran across their neck collectively.

Arnav and Khushi looked at each other. The practiced calmness held them together while Shukla and Malvika merely looked on with interest.

The games had begun. The three had beaten Arnav and Khushi to it.

"Shukla, find out if Bhanu Pratap is on this alone or is the party with him. And I want to know why I didn't hear whispers about this publicized coalition. Malvika, you and Payal need to find something for us to hold the fort against the second wave." Arnav rattled.

"What is the second wave?" Malvika asked, standing up.

"It's unfortunate that we aren't even considered as players in this game Malvika," Arnav said chuckling mirthlessly. "It will be these three against Akash while the rest of the country is going to be bystanders, including us."

"What's Rathore's involvement in this?" Malvika asked the question that's been running in his mind the moment he started suspecting Bhanu Pratap.

"If there wasn't any till now, there will be going forward. It's a given that the current coalition will break up into a million pieces and the major party will have difficulty in forming new government. Only they can tip the balance but for that they will have to win a lot of seats." Arnav said calculating the number of seats and performing a quick exit poll in his mind.

Shukla and Malvika left the apartment to work on their respective jobs.

Once they were gone, Arnav let out a loud growl and threw the phone in his hand to the nearest wall. His composure was failing and anger was taking over. Khushi knew that she had to be the person now to ground him.

"We saw this coming Arnav," Khushi said. "This was expected but it happened earlier than we anticipated, that's all. We will have to move forward quickly and..."

"It's not going to be easy Khushi. Let's face it: they upped one on us. They have already announced their intentions and the possible coalition while we are trying to fix the problem holistically with the assumption that the coalition will come after the elections. This changes the game completely!" Arnav yelled the last part.

Khushi agreed he had a good point. This was unanticipated and a major setback from them.

"Give the orders. Let the scandals begin." Khushi shrugged. Arnav gaped at her.

"It's not going to help anymore Khushi." Arnav sounded tired.

"Arnav, that has always been a possibility. What we are orchestrating here is like rigging a board election in a big organization. We are trying to fight corruption by corrupting the concept of democracy and hoping that the end product has a better moral standard than the current one." Khushi placed her hand on his shoulder and squeezed it hard. "We are already in it knee deep. Let's drown in this mess." She said lightly.

Arnav smiled sincerely at her.

"What do you want to do now?" Khushi asked seeing Arnav pace.

"I first want Bhanu Pratap to lose control and break that trio. I cannot have Rathore supporting the two. Second, I want Supreme Court to give ruling on the pending scandals. I don't want the current government to even think of being elected next time. And let's have some good old fashioned IT raids." Arnav counted in his fingers.

"IT raids? Why?" Khushi looked surprised.

"Honestly? I just want to see those people shaking." Arnav said callously. "What do you want?" Arnav asked Khushi.

Khushi looked at him for one full moment and smiled. "A civil war."

Arnav's eyes widened at her declaration.

"That will be the death of democracy." A voice spoke from the door.

Arnav and Khushi whirled around to see the person who had spoken - the person whose voice they could recognize anywhere, especially after spending months with him in isolation.

Akash was leaning on the doorjamb dressed in jeans and kurta just like Arnav was and smiling at the two.

To be continued.

Note:

The case Khushi talks about in the beginning of this chapter is a real one and was reported last week.

Here is the link: Indian Woman jailed for 19 years

Edited by RockBarbie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lalalalala

~Edit~

The first bottleneck was when Aakash abducted them. And now this is the second set back. I'm confident they will find a way out. Is Bhanu Pratap a more dangerous adversary than Aakash? Maybe, maybe not. But at least this time they have resources at their disposal to fight back.

Yes, if they can get the judiciary working in such a way that the public has faith in it, it would solve a lot of problem. But is that a step towards democracy? Its a paradox, they are playing with the idea of democracy to establish a successful one :D Do ends justify the means?

This FF always leaves me with a load of questions in my head. Some rhetorical, some just... weird.

Aakash is here. Does he know how they tricked him? What does he want? But, if Aakash teams up with them, then they can really solve this Bhanu Pratap problem. And fast. Now this a coalition that might actually change things for the better. And why must be worry about the conflicting moral stances? They are fighting against a group that has a politician, a communist and a religious leader!
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I havn't read yet.
You updated. Its been ages...
Thankz for d pm. Thank u thank u thank u..
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Posted: 12 years ago
the stage has been set...bhanu pratap it looks like he is the dangerous one of all and aakash is back...waiting to read what aakash wants now and what more does he know and where will his loyalty lie now.

the case about this woman raises a serious question about the prerogative of judicial system but with the pressure exerted by the political personalities and the one who holds money the decision are to be influenced.

It also raises a serious question on the plight of people below poverty line and how even the govt take their lives in an inconsequential way
Edited by dhakkanmaster - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good to see this updated after such a long time. :)
An idea like this seems so tempting, dismantling the people who have robbed us.
Collateral damage however, is an important hurdle.
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry I m going to go off topic here but just wanted to say that I had read abt the case "19 yrs in jail"few days ago online and also gave a piece of my mind to a woman coz she had written dat the son would have managed the bail money within a year as labourers in India earn rs.500 per day..wat a laugh! ..pretty much told her off and also the Indian Justice system isn't that fast while dealing with d poor ...most of the people here can't believe that no one cud afford her bail money($93 approx)so think the story is exaggerated and it is impossible that the Judicial system cud let someone languish in jail for 19 yrs for want of rs 5k...all this made me realise that how ignorant rest of the world is abt the plight of the poor in India especially wen dealing with the Judicial system...this update made me reflect more regarding the same matter...

the Constitution of India was framed by adopting principle from various countries' constitutions so that it cud address all aspects and sections of the society thereby declaring India to be a sovereign, socialist, secular, democratic republic, assuring its citizens of justice, equality, liberty and fraternity ...so is the present political scenario a slap to the Constitution?..is it mockery that we see of the Constitution by every section of the Government? ..in fact even by the common man but then he wud be just following by example and those examples being the corrupt,power hungry politicians..if brainwashing is so easy as proved by the neighbouring countries then i hope someday people who believe in the constitution and its true meaning comes along and brainwashes everyone into believing and following it...

I am not going to comment on her crime or innocence ...though i do know about the "innocent until proven guilty" funda and her case was never on trial...

are there people like Arnav and Khushi really out there?
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update let the war begin...hope akash's team wins over ...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read the last few parts of this story to get back into the groove.

Is Aakash going to team up with them?

I just read the article about the woman who ouldn't pay her bail

This tells us the kind of democracy we live in.

I'm do happy you updated this.

Just waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think I am commenting for the first time...
Nd I must say u r one of the most resourcful writers in IF
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vgedin

Lalalalala


~Edit~

The first bottleneck was when Aakash abducted them. And now this is the second set back. I'm confident they will find a way out. Is Bhanu Pratap a more dangerous adversary than Aakash? Maybe, maybe not. But at least this time they have resources at their disposal to fight back.

Yes, if they can get the judiciary working in such a way that the public has faith in it, it would solve a lot of problem. But is that a step towards democracy? Its a paradox, they are playing with the idea of democracy to establish a successful one :D Do ends justify the means?

This FF always leaves me with a load of questions in my head. Some rhetorical, some just... weird.

Aakash is here. Does he know how they tricked him? What does he want? But, if Aakash teams up with them, then they can really solve this Bhanu Pratap problem. And fast. Now this a coalition that might actually change things for the better. And why must be worry about the conflicting moral stances? They are fighting against a group that has a politician, a communist and a religious leader!



On what basis would Akash team up with them? Arnav and Khushi aren't interested in Akash's borrowed ideology nor his way of dealing things - by making elections a trading commodity.
All they are trying to do is give public a fair chance to vote by uncovering the truth that everyone is trying to hide.

An end would justify the means when the moral premise is intact and everyone acts within those boundaries. Since that's hardly the case, it doesn't matter.

There are decisions, there are actions and then there are people. How it all plays out is really dependent on the section that's targeted to.

- RB

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