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Posted: 12 years ago
I read os : Desires Revealed just now..

Beautiful os!
Loved d way u discribed dier feelings after d dance.. The moment they shared at swayam's home was amazing! Liked the way sharon confessed her feelings beautifully penned down.. d morning part was cute.. swayam askg for second chance😃

ur just perfect and an amazing writer ⭐️..
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Posted: 12 years ago
You woman will one day kill me with these writings of yours.
Superb. =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am back with another OS...this was also a challenge given to me by Anmol (shantanu.swayam)...this challenge given to me was:

Situations:
1. Swimming.
2. Hat.
3. Dog.
4. Seduction.
5. Chocolate.

Anmol dear I really tried by best i hope u will like it. Here you go. enjoy:

DISCLAIMER: There are some parts which are suitable for mature reader...recommended for above 15. The writer does not want to offend the feelings of anymore.

When siren goes off!

Sharon walked through different stalls on the street and stopped in front of one. She picked up a bracelet and wore it then after examining for a few seconds she grinned happily at swayam who was standing next to her. She silently asked for his opinion and he made a face after looking at the bracelet. She pouted like a child and placed the bracelet back at its place and walked over to the next stall while swayam chuckled inwardly and followed her quietly with his hands in his pockets. Sharon and swayam had come to Goa to spend some quality time with each other. These last two months swayam had been busy with his office while Sharon was also busy with her dancing academy. Both of them hardly had time for each other and after finishing their respective works decided to take a break and spend some days filled with love just like old days.

Sharon had been shopping for almost an hour now or it would be more correct she had been window shopping for an hour. She hadn't bought anything yet simply because anything she liked she asked for his opinion and he just for the fun of it never gave her a satisfactory response and now he could see her getting annoyed. It was not his fault. Well, it was kind of his fault, some things were pretty darn nice but he simply shook his head and she didn't bought them thinking they don't look good on her. He never even wanted to come shopping heck he didn't even wanted to let her get out of bed but she wanted to go shopping and also claimed that today the weather was pleasant for a nice long walk. It was, but in the morning but now it was so hot that swayam had bought a hat to save himself from the blazing heat while she didn't even had her sunglasses on and he could see her turning pink due to sun burn.

He came and rested his chin on her shoulder and asked "wanna go back angel?" she shook her head in negative adamant to buy something good before heading back to the hotel. He chuckled beside her and she turned around looking at him with narrowed eyes. He couldn't help but grin at her while her eyes widened in realization for a second and then she said angrily "YOU!" he made an innocent face and replied "Yes, me?" She smacked him on his arm attracting the attention of a few bystanders while he rubbed his arm and said "ouch, siren no need to be so brutal….I am telling we will go home straight after this…geez" he said the last line out loud making those attentive by standers grin and shake their heads thinking "another one of those newlywed couples madly in love" Sharon turned red as she looked at the curious looks coming from people around her and one of them even winked at her making her lower her head and turn even more red. Swayam grinned and placed a hand around her shoulder. Then waved off the curious by standers saying "u know how it is like in the start" while Sharon just wished for the ground to open so that she can fall in it. Then swayam took her away from there as soon as there was gained some distance she slapped his arm away which was wrapped around her shoulders and turned around glaring at him only to him biting his lower lip to burst out from laughing. She jabbed her finger against his chest and said "you r so shameless swayam…how could u put me in a situation like that" he simply let go of his controlled laughter in reply while she grabbed the collar of his shirt and pulled him closer suddenly making him stop laughing and said "so u wanna be center of attention han!" he didn't reply as his mind went blank when she pulled him more and more closer and stood on her toes, tilted her face sideways and almost crashed her lips against his. her hot breath danced against his lips as she said "better luck next time" then she took off the hat he was wearing and moved back placing it on her head. While swayam then noticed the number of people standing around him while one of them patted his back and said "smart girl...try your charm on another one" he turned red and simply made his way out of there after nodding sheepishly.

Sharon ran back towards the hotel all the while remembering his flushed face. He looked so darn cute blushing like that but soon she heard him yell behind her "wait siren! I am gonna get you for this han" she giggled in return and replied back "What happened? You didn't like the attention you were getting?" He was soon catching up to her and she was getting short of breath finally she saw the hotel and willed herself to go forward but before she could increase her pace a hand wrapped around her waist and pulled her closer. Her back bumped in his chest and she struggled to get free but he didn't let go of her and turned her around with much difficulty. She said "sorry, sorry…let go plz" but he slammed her against the tree and trapped her within the tree and his body. She finally stopped struggling and waited to catch her breath while he also took labored breaths. After catching his breath he whispered "I am not gonna let you go so easily" She looked at him with a puppy dog face while he chuckled at her antics and said "yeah, ur puppy dog face is not gonna work on me" she tried pushing him back but he just crashed his lips upon her and soon she also gave in knocking both of them short of breath once again. They finally stopped to fill their lungs with air and she pushed him back. She was pressed against the tree hard and straightened her clothes mumbling "I would prefer something more comfortable next time" while he giggle and pulled her closer to him before walking back towards the hotel saying "well that can be arranged within minutes" making her hit him playfully.

Sharon opened the door to their room and found patch her dog barking after looking at her. Swayam had no idea why she decided to bring that dog along. He didn't hate dogs in particular but he hated patch when Sharon would give him more attention. That dog had destroyed so many of their romances and once even came and slept in between them on the bed. Gosh he hated that thing when it snuggled closer to his Sharon. As long as it stayed in its limits and outside his sight it was tolerable but with it barking all the time in this one room really made him furious. Sharon picked patch up in her arms and cradled him like a child making swayam snort and all the romance evaporate from the atmosphere. Sharon sat on the bed and started combing patch's hair and he had lots of hair as he was a Persian dog. Swayam picked up a magazine and waited for Sharon to notice him but an hour had passed and Sharon was now playing dress up with patch. Swayam felt like throwing that thing down the balcony. Finally Sharon stood up and swayam thought maybe she would notice him now but she just went pass him into the bathroom making him more annoyed. Swayam glared at patch who came and snuggled at his feet while he kicked it in anger and patch went flying across the room and landed in front of the dust bin making a loud and vulnerable sound. Sharon immediately shouted from the bathroom "what happened? Is patch okay?" swayam was even more pissed now she was worried about that fluff ball but not him. He glared at patch once again and picked him up ready to send him on a flying trip down the balcony but then decided against it and threw him in the dust bin. Then he closed the lid of the bin and placed a heavy flower pot on it. swayam was satisfied with his work when Sharon came out of the bathroom and started looking here and there for patch. He was nowhere to be found so she marched up to swayam and asked him "where is he?" swayam replied in an innocent voice "he who?" Sharon looked at him with narrowed eyes and said "patch? Who else?" swayam replied shrugging "I opened the door and he just ran outside" sharon's eyes widened as she said "what do mean he ran outside??? I heard him….he sounded so vulnerable" swayam snorted again and replied "yeah right! Patch might be in trouble you should go and save him" suddenly some sounds came from dustbin and as they were standing next to it they heard them loud and clear. Sharon gasped and then quickly removed the pot then opened the cover and patch jumped out in her arms. swayam stared at everything in disbelief. That perverted dog! Always running in his sharon's arms. Sharon turned towards swayam and yelled "he could have died of suffocation!" while swayam yelled back "what the hell Sharon! All u care about it is this….this perverted dog" she glared at him and replied "well that's because u r always trying to kill him" swayam replied shocked "what??? I am trying to kill HIM? he is the one is destroying my vacation here" Sharon "is not" swayam stared at Sharon for a while and then said throwing his hands up in air exhausted "you know what you should make sure that ur patch does not gets into trouble and leave me alone" then he took off his shirt and shorts, he was wearing swimming trunks underneath and went outside slamming the door shut behind him and making Sharon curse all those girls who would get to see his naked chiseled torso. Then she looked at patch and then at the clock and realized that she had been ignoring her poor husband for some time.

Sharon looked at herself in the mirror and seemed satisfied with herself. She wore a backless black colored one piece swimming suite which stick to her figure like second skin. She tied the Sarong around her waist and threw a towel around her shoulders before walking out of the room towards the pools. When she reached the poolside her eyes almost fell out of her sockets. Swayam was stretching before going for a dive and all of the girls present there were drooling over him and one of them standing next to Sharon even said to hook up with him for tonight making Sharon step on her feet and send her death glares. While swayam made a perfect flawless dive earning a few squeals of appreciation and words of praises from some girls as well as boys. Swayam made his way out of the pool and went and laid on one of the chairs completely ignoring Sharon who wanted to drown every other girl present there.

Sharon came and sat next to swayam who took a sip of his drink and ignored her. she placed her hand on his knee and said "sorry swayam…..I completely ignored you" he didn't reply just looked away while Sharon moved up a little and flattened her palm against his chest while he took in sharp breath but didn't reply. Then she drew patterns on his chest with her thumb and index finger and said "why don't we go for a swim love?" he locked gaze with her for a second but then looked away again and crossed his arms under his head to stop himself from pulling her hard against him. She trailed her finger upwards all the way to his collar bone and then placed her hand on his face. she bent over him so that upper part of her body brushed against his chest and her hot breath danced on his face as she whispered "won't you forgive me baby?" he turned his face sideways so that the distance between their lips could increase and said "you should go! Ur patch might be in danger" she made a face and replied "swayam I said I am sorry nah" before he could reply a girl came and grabbed his arm pulling him up making him almost knock into Sharon who was still bending over him and said "would you like to have a swim with me?" swayam looked at Sharon who warned him through her eyes and then turned towards the girl with a huge grin plastered over his face and said "yeah sure why not"

Sharon's jaw hit the floor as the girl removed her sarong. She was wearing a tight fitting two piece bikini and small would be a small word for it. Though swayam barely looked at her Sharon felt jealous to the core of her existence. How dare she hold her husband's hand! Then both swayam and the girl jumped into the pool and she heard her yell "lets race to the other end if I win then I get a kiss!" before swayam or Sharon had time to react she was already sprinting off towards the other end of the pool. Sharon waited a heartbeat and then swayam followed her swimming so flawlessly that she could stand there and stare him all day. His perfect muscles more visible as he stroked across the pool and before she herself could figure out the outcome of her actions Sharon removed her sarong and jumped into the pool. She waited only for a second before making the perfect butterfly stroke and earning quiet some looks from boys around her. But she was too focused to notice and she was one hell of a swimmer. That bit** was gonna pay. Sharon caught up to her in no time and when she was passing through the area where there were some more people present Sharon held her breath and went under water only to grab her feet and pulled her under the water too. The girl waved her hands in air like a maniac and tried to get herself free but Sharon gave her a good scare before letting go of her and then the life boy took her out of the pool and Sharon found swayam eyeing her not even trying to hide his grin while she looked away fuming.

Quiet some people were present in that area and some more even jumped in to help her so Sharon cleanly and slyly made her way out feigning she was trying to help her too. She made her way out of the pool not liking the way other boys were looking at her and wanted to get out of this swim suit as soon as possible but then as she was looking for swayam she saw him with that girl again. Ugh the audacity of that girl! Sharon marched up to them and heard only the last part of the conversation "well I do deserve that kiss I was totally wining" and once again before swayam had time to react she was against his mouth. Sharon would have killed her right their but the kiss only lasted a few seconds before swayam himself threw her back and found Sharon on the verge of tears and furious. It was one of her traits her tear ducts were connected with the wrong part of her brain and whenever she was extremely mad tears would make their way out of her eyes and she hated it because it made her look weak. Exactly the same thing was happening right now and she turned around before anyone could see her cry.

She slammed the door shut behind her and the long walk back to her room and also the cold air as she was wet and hadn't even bothered to tie the sarong back or get a towel made her control her temper and she was sure she would not cry now. Sharon looked for patch and found him sleeping peacefully on the balcony. She didn't want to wake him so she just had to sulk on her own and quietly. Even though she had locked the door she heard it opened after five minutes. Swayam had his key on him she was hoping he would have to spend the night out at the pools today. She glared at him with her jaw set tight while he noticed for the first time how looked incredibly alluring she looked right now. Her cheeks puffed due to anger, the wet swim suite hugging her delicate form and outlining all of her curves for him, her wet hair clinging to her face and small water drops slowly making their way down from the wet hair and disappearing in her the neck line of her suite. She turned her back towards him and he saw her back almost naked as she was wearing backless. He mentally slapped himself for ignoring her earlier and slowly made his way to her.

He stopped a few inches from her and placed his hands on her shoulders while she shrugged free saying "don't touch me!" he sighed and said "siren you know I didn't kiss her back" she replied while taking a step forward to create some distance between them and replied "yeah but you led her on" he raised his hand and trailed his lone finger along the curve of her back knocking her short of breath and saying "I am sorry for that" she turned around with her face a soft shade of red and managed to say "I said don't touch me" but he didn't listen and took a step forward while she placed her hands on his bare chest as he was still wearing his swimming trunks only to push him back but he grabbed the wrists of both of her hands and pulled her closer trapping her hands between their bodies and wrapped his own hands around her waist. Their lack of clothing exploded like a bomb on her senses and she felt her skin burn with desire where it was pressed flush against his exposed skin. She gulped and but her lower lip while he pressed his lips against her taking her in for a sweet and soft kiss. She responded back instantly and when she felt smile against her lips she mustered up all of her courage and pushed him back while he smirked at her and she glared at him.

She turned around and grabbed another towel to wrap it around her body. His intense stare was playing havoc on her senses but before she could do it he snatch the towel from her hand and tossed it aside. She turned around facing him once again mouthing "what the!" while he smirked at her and replied while starring right in her eyes "the lesser the clothes the easier it will be to take'em off" she turned red and said in a matter of fact tone while raising her finger at him "you are coming anywhere near me tonight or for the rest of the vacation got it!" he shook his head in negative and she tried going pass him to grab a new pair of clothes but he stood in her way and said "what about that swim together?" she snapped back "yeah, not happening" swayam took slow steps towards her while she took steps backwards constantly telling him to stay away. Finally he had trapped her against the wall and brought his face close to hers saying "sorry angel please…..let's have dinner together…I know u r hungry….u skipped lunch" she closed her eyes and felt her knees go weak as he pulled her hair over her left shoulder and she tiled her head sideways to give him more access. He kissed her on her pulse point and then moved along her collar bone while his hands travelled down her valley and stopped on her stomach only to press his palm flat against her navel and then drew patterns on her stomach with his thumb while his mouth continued to leave a trail of feathery kisses till the end of her shoulder. Sharon had her hands closed in fists by her side so tightly that he nails were digging badly in her skin. But she couldn't control anymore and placed her hands on his sides just above his waist line and then pulled him closer crashing her body against his and hiding his face in her shoulder where he kissed her a little hard and then sucked on the spot to prevent it from hurting. He mouthed against her skin when he felt her run her one hand along the length of his back while the other one grabbed handful of his damp hair "forgave me yet princess?" "No" was all she could manage to say and then pushed him back with all her strength but he didn't budge an inch from his spot and instead grabbed her arm and turned her around so that her back was facing him.

Before she could respond he placed his hand on her shoulders and started massaging them. His fingers worked their magic and he loosened all the tight muscles making her close her eyes and moan his name. After turning her shoulder into jello he kissed her on the nape of her neck and she felt her stomach also turning into liquid. She was in a dream like state his massage always did that to her and she didn't want to move, just lay down in his arms. she was leaning against the wall for support as he made his way down kissing her along the curve of her back and just as he reached the mid of her back her knees gave away and she landed on her knees on the floor with a soft thud making swayam smirk. She said breathless "swayam….plz stop" but he grabbed her shoulder and finished what he started and when he kissed her at the end of her back she was sure she was in heaven she turned around in his arms and without wasting a second crashed her lips against his. His back hit the floor hard due to the sudden impact of the kiss and she came and sat on top of him kissing him for the first time dominating him and her hands working their magic also on his chest making his knees weak this time. She stopped breathless and moved up in a sitting position and looked at his swollen lips. He was grinning back at her and felt herself blush.

Her stomach growled at that time she bit her lower lip embarrassed while he chuckled and said "you sure get hungry at the wrong time dear….there is a chocolate in the upper drawer" she reached her hand forward and opened the drawer to find a huge bar of chocolate sitting their uneaten. Her eyes lit up and she quickly grabbed it. Without bothering to get up from him she tore its wrapper and started eating. The chocolate melted in her mouth and the delicious taste made her close her eyes and say "mummm….yummy" swayam shook his head and made a mental note to never allow her to eat chocolate in front of anyone else. He disturbed her train of thoughts of living in a world made of chocolate as he said "mind sharing?" Sharon looked at him with a puppy dog face and said "I don't share chocolate" swayam knew that damn well so he just smiled sweetly at her and said while moving in a sitting position himself so that he was dangerously close to her as she was know sitting in his lap with her legs wrapped around his waist "But I just wanna taste" Sharon replied in a firm voice "NO!" which made him smile and before she could decipher the meaning behind his dangerous smile he pressed his lips against hers taking her in for another kiss. He could taste the chocolate in her mouth and she understood what he meant by he only wanna taste. She wrapped her arms around his neck and stood up by slamming his back against the cupboard and taking its support to stand up as his eyes were closed and she was still wrapped around him. His hands wrapped around her waist to hold her in place and he carried her to the bed while the chocolate which had fallen out of sharon's hands remained there melting as the temperature of the room kept rising with every passing second.

P.S: Hope u all like it...do leave ur feedback and hit the button if u like it and also guys thanks a ton for the comments on my previous OS they mean alot.

cheers

-Baz

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Swthrt 🤗

AMAZING OS like always...i loved the way u used all the elements so perfectly ...Siren and her majnu...hayeee...loved the OS...the naughty yet pure love...the teasing sensations ...yummy romance 😆

I loved the maajnu boy trying shift her attention from the shopping bags to her poor husband...loved the game of attention...amusing 😛

The Patch angle was hilarious..swayam getting jelous of a puppy was cute yet so funny

Poor dog..swayam put him in the dusbin😲😲

What happened in the swimming pool was fate...which girl can resist HIS charms😳

Loved the Jealous Siren...jealous siren is GOLD...😛

She almost drowned the poor girl😆😆😆

The chocolaty kiss was ☺️

When Siren Goes off..we get to read such AMAZING Oneshots...

Apt title swthrt

Luv
Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RESERVED! Deeepyyy ki bachhiii! Arghhh.. le lia na mera first res! 😛

EDITED.

Whoa, another rocking and amazing write up from my sweet Baz!? How do you manage to write so fast? But i love it when you write so fast because we get to read something amazing!

Loved this whole OS completely! It was amazing, the way you gave whole scenario and life in it was beautiful. It is my dream or it was dream in TanHa times so see SwaRon alone in Goa, the most amazing and actually romantic place for naughty lovers!

Loved how cute Swayam was in start and OMG our Sharon is no less than a devil who know how to turn on his lovely husband and than tease him! Awww! 🤣 Loved the patch in it! I have realized whenever you or anyone use dogs in their OS then the write up is not less anything cute and wonderful. I guess Dogs make SS more wild and naughty! 🤣 Loved the patch lover Siren and pet hater Majnu truly!

The intimate part was the far best written by you and believe me it was, at least for me! ☺️ Totally loved the back kissing scene! SIGH! It was one hell of an amazing thing to read and entertain yourself with grins, smiles and red cheeks! 😎

And yes that part when that bitch kissed Swayam so i was like beta tu ab gaya.. bachalai khud ko agar bacha sakai tu! 😆



Marium.
Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Api: yeh usne suggest nai kiya :P...usne dusre kiye the yeh maine khudi socha tha :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow another OS from ur side 😃
Res
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Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

@Api: yeh usne suggest nai kiya :P...usne dusre kiye the yeh maine khudi socha tha :P

haha...usne mujhe ye naam suggest kiya tha..i remember..well..great minds think alike😆😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

@Api: yeh usne suggest nai kiya :P...usne dusre kiye the yeh maine khudi socha tha :P


maine socha tha yeh...

lekin fir zara suit nhi huya toh... :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firstly, thank you for accepting my challenge.
I never mentioned this to you before, but you're one of my favourite writers on this forum.
That's why I challenged you.
And I think you're the best when it comes to writing about flirting and naughty seduction, that's why I included that in the situations.
Coming to the OS, I absolutely LOVE the title, "When Siren Goes Off!", so cheeky, I love it.
I liked the teasing and the light banter in the scene where they went shopping.
Loved the two dialogues, "It's like that in the beginning" and "Smart girl, try your charm on someone else"
Loved how Swayam cleverly rejected everything she planned to buy just because he wanted to sort of take revenge about her dragging him for shopping when he wanted to stay in bed all day.
Loved the way Sharon took away the hat, totally the way I had imagined it when I gave it to you in the situations.
I especially loved Swayam's dislike for Patch.
He put Patch in the dustbin, hahaha!
Loved the entire swimming scene!
From start to end, be it they way Sharon was jealous of others getting to see his bare torso, to Sharon trying to get him to forgive her, to the girls staring and him, and that girl racing with him.
Loved the condition of that race, "If I win I get a kiss."
Loved how Sharon smartly pulled the girl underwater, and made her lose purposely.
The seduction bit was so hot!
I all but had to fan myself.
And I loved how Sharon ate the chocolate like a little child and how Swayam cleverly tasted it, knowing that she wouldn't share it with him.
All in all, loved how you incorporated all the situations I gave you.
It was a delightful read!
Thank you once again for accepting my challenge and for completing it so fast!
Edited by shantanu.swayam - 12 years ago

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