FF:Cindrella:A Love Saga - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lucy the romance and passion set the whole update on fire. Even the love and hate angle is good. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was waiting for this update

nice couple names

poor kashi had to cover up for mud pots

loving their love hate relation
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loving the updates Moni. thnx for pm.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome update lucy!

thnx for pm.. cont soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Fun with you...


Gyaneshwari- why this girl is so late?

Mohini- mother I think she intentionally does this.

Shakti-yes mother, punish her when she comes home.

Gyaneshwari-oh I will do this, surely '.

Suddenly a knock happened on the door.

Gyaneshwari- oh look, the princess came, now she will get a good treatment from me'.she evil smiled.

As she opened the door, she saw kamakshi with a moustached man.

Gyaneshwari- who is he?

Kamakshi-ah..he is a census officer, he was looking for our house, that's why I got late mother.

Som- yes..(in a tough voice) let me in'..

Gyaneshwari scared..-yes yes sir please come'kamakshi smirked'.

Officer looked in very angry mood''

Gyaneshwari-go kamakshi, bring him some water.

Som- why her??you go, you are the master of the house.

Gyaneshwari- but she is slave that's'

Som-shut up(loudly)'do as I say'

Gyaneshwari-yes sir, I bring it'

Som-you'(to shakti)(very loudly) shakti scared'.

Som-come her'

Shakti came very scared'

Shakti-yyy'.yes'..

Som-what is your name?

Shakti-sh'sh'sh..

Som-what is this sh sh?tell me your full name'.

Shakti-shakti sir'

Shakti-hmm'shakti'''.

Som-you'.(to mohini)

Mohini scared- mohini'..

Som-what?

Mohini-my name is mohini..

Som-hmm''''''''.

Gyaneshwari brought water'.

Som drank it'.

Som-you..(to kamakshi) show me your house'.

Kamakshi-sure..sir'.

Kamakshi and som went upstairs,they entered in her room. It was a very small room'.

Som thinks- this is ridiculous, such a sweet soul lives in this dungeon. She does not deserve it'.she needs to live in a big house, not a big house but a palace, she is amazing and so beautiful..

Kamakshi- oh damn som'you are amazing'you scared them like dogs..oh I so love you'

Som-what????

Kamakshi-ah I meant in a friendly way, whosoever hates them is my friend.

Som-you are very weird kamakshi..

Kamakshi-oh yes I am'.he he'well som sit'''..

Som-no I want to enquire something from your mother'he went downstairs.

Kamakshi thinks-what he wants to discuss?(confused)

kashi entered the prison.

shakal-prince, prince i haven't done anything...

kashi- then what is this?

shakal got shocked seeing the ring, he felt very much betrayed.

pali was crying in the home in her room. suddenly kali came...

kali-pali why are you crying?

pali- brother, prince imprisoned our father.

kali shocked...

Edited by lucymoni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lucy thanks for another update. Nice one again.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one kamakshi is very smart i like it

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