FF:Cindrella:A Love Saga

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Posted: 12 years ago
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FF:Cindrella:A love Saga

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LQDu-24gGcc[/YOUTUBE]
This is the Fanfiction i always wanted to write but i didn't because i wanted it save for the best time.I don't want it to stretch too long.
Story:
The story is of ancient times in India.
CHARACTER SKETCH
SONARIKA BHADORIA as KAMAKSHI (CINDRELLA)
MOHIT RAINA as SOMESHWAR(PRINCE CHARMING)


I don't want to reveal the story yet.I guess it will be interesting to read it with beginning and surprises.No supernatural elements at all.😆

MORE CHARACTERS

pali-daughter of SHAKAL.
Kashi-Friend of Someshwar.Lives with him in the palace.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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and i wish no Mouni at all😆
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Woww Moharika FF😃
Continue soon dear👍🏼
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ROYAL INVITATION

On the wide roads of kailashpur,people were wandering in afternoon doing their regular chores.
a vegetable seller-come,come here ,buy these vegetables at very reasonable price,come people come...
a beautiful girl's attention got distracted hearing his pleadings...
girl-at reasonable price?hmm..better should check it,if i don't save pennies...step mother will think i stole the money and then she will scold me.(she thought with a scared expression in her eyes).the girl was wearing servant's clothes but her face was no less than beautiful princess.she was beauty personified.
girl-how much these tomatoes cost?
seller-3 pennies maam
girl-three pennies?😲thats too much.
seller-if you don't have money then don't waste my time...go away.😡
girl-hey i have money...give me these tomatoes...
seller gave her tomatoes.
girl-oh no...step mother is going to scold me today.
suddenly a royal cart came and men standing on it started beating drums..
royal man-listen,listen...today the royal court is having free dinner for everyone...the whole kingdom is invited...(kailashpur is unthinkably rich kingdom).the king himself has invited.the poor people are invited in backyard of the court and aristocrats will be invited by invitations.
girl-hmm...that means mother surely will get an invitation.(the girl's step mother and her two daughters were aristrocrats.that made that girl an aristocrat as well...but she was not treated well by her step mother and two step sisters whose names were SHAKTI AND MOHINI)
Step mother(name-gyaneshwari devi)
gyaneshwari-thank you(to the royal servant)and she closed the door.
the mother read the letter and was in high spirits.
gyaneshwari-girls...come down...come down...
shakti was a little fat and sleeping...
shakti-what the hell?why she is trying to wake me up?
mohini was doing the make up.
they both came downstairs.
mohini-what happened mother?
gyaneshwari-shup up and listen.royal kingdom has organized a big treat of dinner and we aristocrats are invited personally by the king's right hand SHAKAL.
mohini-shakal?isn't he the highest noble of the kingdom?
gyaneshwari-yes,he has invited us,the king is organizing the food and stuff and shakal is the manager of everything.i am so excited.
shakti-wow...i wish i can see the prince there,what if he sees me and we fall in love.i will be the queen then.
mohini-shut up,if prince is gonna marry someone,it will be me and only me.
the girls started fighting...
gyaneshwari-oof...and where is kamakshi?that stupid girl must have arrived by now.😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice start lucy , waiting for next part
Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept and a very nice start too...Continue soon and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh I'm Sooo Glad To See You Back !!! Outstanding Concept Update, And I Hope You Are Not Going To Disappear Again !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept...will surely read it and I do miss yours previous ffs, will you update that too?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser

Nice concept...will surely read it and I do miss yours previous ffs, will you update that too?


i am only writing this ff,this is my childhood along with ufo baby.
i don't think i can pull off ufo baby,that ff needs a very strong writer which i am not,when they cry...ahm...maybe next year.

@radhi i am happy to see you dear.love you.

thanks readers for commenting.
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ok do continue dear don't abandon it this time..lovely starting

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