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Sumana123

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ohkaay Behena ...Read all the 6 chapters in one go ...Nice and Cute Story I must say ...Maanvi an independent gal and Viraat a responsible boy nice Jodi. I m really touched by both the characters. Aww Jia and ankur ...So cute ;) ...2nd Chapter Maanvi calls Viraat a Hooligan LMAOOO ...But then their subsequent conversation was very sweet. This is what mostly happens in Arranged Marriages ..people are very apprehensive initially but later their lives take new turns ..Here Maanvi act very practically which I liked ...Chapter 3 aww They had a small date ❤️. Chapter 4 Mannu slapped Jia 😭...Naaahiii why ...Though I m convinced by what Maanvi said on her action but still she shouldn't have slapped well I wont lecture on it more cause Maanvi has got lectured twice on that by Sunaina and Viraat so I will shut my mouth. Chapter 5 : Short Update ...Chapter 6 was indeed a cute one ..aww they enjoy some more time together

Best thing of this FF is you are exactly writing the way AM relations are formed ...so Kudos to you for that. ANother very nice thing which I noted is you are not stretching on situations and I liked it ...

But one thing keep updating regularly Sis ...Waiting for chapter 7

Love

Sumana

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AngelicDesires

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Look who's back!!?? Well this time I am absolutely ready for all the Chappals and tamatars.. I was just being lazy with my writing skills going down the drain.. I was very low on inspiration.. and High on using Photoshop.. 😆 But here I am with a promo of what you can expect in the upcoming updates.. And most probably 1 more FF coming up in a few days.. So read ahead and post your views and I will get back to you with the next update soon!!

"Viraat, Its a very important project for my company. I have no option other than attend this meeting" said Maanvi caressing Viraat

"Oh, How I wish I could stop you my doll! None the less, I wish you all the luck and will miss you a lot for all these days.. I so wish, I had a time machine" Viraat collected his tears for Manvi's happiness and hugged her.

"Will miss you a lot Viraat! Thanks a lot for all the good memories that I can take along with me" Maanvi tightened the hug and whispered into his ears!

Guys, You can contact me here too My Page. I am quite active here!

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vamps1996

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Posted: 13 years ago

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read all the updates in a go wre damm awsomeee and beautifully written thnx to fb got to know about it

will be gald if u pm me the furure updates

have sent u buddy

eagerly waiting for the next update

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AngelicDesires

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sumana123
Ohkaay Behena ...Read all the 6 chapters in one go ...Nice and Cute Story I must say ...Maanvi an independent gal and Viraat a responsible boy nice Jodi. I m really touched by both the characters. Aww Jia and ankur ...So cute ;) ...2nd Chapter Maanvi calls Viraat a Hooligan LMAOOO ...But then their subsequent conversation was very sweet. This is what mostly happens in Arranged Marriages ..people are very apprehensive initially but later their lives take new turns ..Here Maanvi act very practically which I liked ...Chapter 3 aww They had a small date ❤️. Chapter 4 Mannu slapped Jia 😭...Naaahiii why ...Though I m convinced by what Maanvi said on her action but still she shouldn't have slapped well I wont lecture on it more cause Maanvi has got lectured twice on that by Sunaina and Viraat so I will shut my mouth. Chapter 5 : Short Update ...Chapter 6 was indeed a cute one ..aww they enjoy some more time together

Best thing of this FF is you are exactly writing the way AM relations are formed ...so Kudos to you for that. ANother very nice thing which I noted is you are not stretching on situations and I liked it ...

But one thing keep updating regularly Sis ...Waiting for chapter 7

Love
Sumana

Did I tell you how much I love you?? Nahi bataya to please reminder laga lo.. 😆 Thanks for this comment! It means a lot to me!!

Ahaha bichari Maanvi ko bohot lecture mila hai.. chod do nanhi si jaan ko :p There were short updates since I was typing on phone and it really was one of the most difficult tasks I have ever done..
I really can't promise on updating regularly coz I am just too lazy and this has started bothering me too.. But I can't find a solution.. :p
Thank you for loving the FF, I hope you'll love the upcoming chapters too!
❤️

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Sumana123

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: AngelicDesires

Did I tell you how much I love you?? Nahi bataya to please reminder laga lo.. 😆 Thanks for this comment! It means a lot to me!!
Ahaha bichari Maanvi ko bohot lecture mila hai.. chod do nanhi si jaan ko :p There were short updates since I was typing on phone and it really was one of the most difficult tasks I have ever done..
I really can't promise on updating regularly coz I am just too lazy and this has started bothering me too.. But I can't find a solution.. :p
Thank you for loving the FF, I hope you'll love the upcoming chapters too!
❤️

Do I even need to tell how much I love you ...you know that already ...Ohkayy Mannu pein no more lectures ...But Keep Updating ...Don't be lazy ,...Get up 😆