THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1 - Page 95

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi u updated..y no pm! Did u clear ur pm list? Nyways superb update! Poor Dev! Dadi is a genius! update soon! Well written..do pm me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated on 139..
sorry for being late...
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Posted: 12 years ago
am I too early...
waiting for update 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
kisine aapke title pe nazar dali hai 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

kisineaapke title pe nazar dali hai 😆



Samjhi nahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
duffer writer 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love sunday afternoons. Did I tell you? What a great day, where i sat back catching up with one of my favorite stories?

Bliss.

This is such a story which always throws me off guard. Always. At one update the story goes in a sweet pace, telling the story of two persons whose love was silent and more giving... The sweetness makes me sigh, makes me starry eyed...

And the next update has two people with ego as tall as china wall...clash of egos, fighting with feelings, running away from each other, and all the fun. The realism makes me grin and squeal, making me shift sides each time...

How am I to tell you I was almost breathless when Maan helped her with her Jhumka and said "Hi"

That Hi took my breath away.

"He doesn't even tell me a HI" she said to her friend and see...

... as if to clear her doubts, as if to resolve her questions, he gave her the very word she quoted...


Those shayris, I tell you. I am going to kiss Naureen's hands.

And while the sweetness of the love between Maan and Geet makes me misty eyed, there comes my hero and heroine.

I star and Dev.

Dev's brilliance always robs me off my speech. I like intelligent guys so you know what to look for when you are ought to search a guy for me 😆

And then there is Tara, her taking to running or her closing door on his face...she was as much fighting this with herself as she is with him...

Every moment between them makes me crave for more. I mean it when I say it Avi. You are bloody brilliant! Can I kiss your hands or would it sound too simpletonish?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

I love sunday afternoons. Did I tell you? What a great day, where i sat back catching up with one of my favorite stories?

Bliss.

This is such a story which always throws me off guard. Always. At one update the story goes in a sweet pace, telling the story of two persons whose love was silent and more giving... The sweetness makes me sigh, makes me starry eyed...

And the next update has two people with ego as tall as china wall...clash of egos, fighting with feelings, running away from each other, and all the fun. The realism makes me grin and squeal, making me shift sides each time...

How am I to tell you I was almost breathless when Maan helped her with her Jhumka and said "Hi"

That Hi took my breath away.

"He doesn't even tell me a HI" she said to her friend and see...

... as if to clear her doubts, as if to resolve her questions, he gave her the very word she quoted...


Those shayris, I tell you. I am going to kiss Naureen's hands.

And while the sweetness of the love between Maan and Geet makes me misty eyed, there comes my hero and heroine.

I star and Dev.

Dev's brilliance always robs me off my speech. I like intelligent guys so you know what to look for when you are ought to search a guy for me 😆

And then there is Tara, her taking to running or her closing door on his face...she was as much fighting this with herself as she is with him...

Every moment between them makes me crave for more. I mean it when I say it Avi. You are bloody brilliant! Can I kiss your hands or would it sound too simpletonish?

Saare jahan se judaaa...
aisa mera pyaar hai...
Pehla pehla pyaar hai...
pehli pehli baar hai...
❤️
Since you never get it when I post lyrics for you, I'll spell it out... that was for you...❤️
Chalo Avi no longer roothing from you...🤗
What is the penchant for Greek Goddesses here...
Dev and I-star more to come... I like him too.. but she has my heart...
Thanks for taking the time when I know how swamped you are right now...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Greek mythology goes over my head but the characteristics of a certain Goddess resembles mine, or so had the poll I took spoke LOL.

I may be late but can never leave anything you write behind Avi. Me lubs you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited comment on page 133... 😊

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