a verry cool kindastory update last part!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i want to make my own little version of kyunki saas so here it is

chapter 1

abir had reffused to marry bhoomi and kt was in bhoomis room and bhoomi was crying her heart out

kt:bhoomi come on u could do way better then him

b:shut up plz i cant live without him i will do suaside

kt:plz dont talk like that

kt hugs bhoomi and bhoomi hugs bakc

then kt walks out of the room but then she heares the door shut behind her (and u know like that see threw door it was that 1) shit!!!!!bhoomi open the door!!!!!!!!!!!!

then she sees bhoomi going like crazy kt finds like this chair and she smacks the door with it and it breaks.bhoomi had i nife in her hand

kt:no bhoomi dont

b:i want abir

kt walks taword her slowly and suddenly kt grabs the knife and her hand started to bleed she happened to knok it out of her hand then she kick it out of the room

kt:baaaaaaaa come chachu chachi

like the whole family rushges in and see that kt was trying to stop bhoomi from grabbing the knife and there was kts blood everywhere

karan and sahil come and stop bhoomi and cary her out of the room and every1 was stairing at kt and her blood soaked hand(ewwwww)

kt soon tells ever1 what happened and then ba calls the doctor to inspeact kts hand then he plasters it

kt was sitting in her room alone and then manthan comes in and starts to say what he always say garwar ladkhi and all this other shit

m:why do u care about my sister kt 1 day 1 day i will ki..........

bhoomi cut him off

b:manthan shut up

manthan makes a face at kt and leaves then bhoomi comes to sit beside kt

b:i am soory i realy hert that hand of urs

kt:no it all ok

bhoomi smiles at kt and leaves kt to be alone in her room then laksh comes in

he sits on a chair infront of kt

l:kt u saved kt u r so brave

kt smiles

laksh comes close and holds her hand

kt:ow

l:oh shit sorry...............kt i .......baa was screaming at kt to come down stairs

so the bothe went dosensatirs and there was a layer there

loyer=law

law:kt ur mom and dad have passes away and the have wrote in there will that when they die to give all the money to u and so here it is just sign this plz

kt signed it and law handed her a big briefcase

law:it is 5 lakh

every bodys faces lit up with happiness

abir happened to be listening to this and he said this in his mind

abirs thought..........

i could marry kt and get her money but how?pregnet.............

abir started to laugh

thats the end of chapter 1 plz leave comments if i should continue😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i liked this story it actualy has been in my mind 4 quite a while so i wrote it down 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i will write a chapter mybe 1 everyday
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great job but i dont like the lawyer ones drama sorry 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great story! You are a great writer. Maybe if you write updates/story every day, i will be tuned to i-f as soon as i come home from school! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: yashrajsinh

Great story! You are a great writer. Maybe if you write updates/story every day, i will be tuned to i-f as soon as i come home from school! 😆

i am going to update evryday like i am on this site 24/7😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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chapter 2/the plan

abir announced that the wedding was bakc on with bhoomi and he was ready and there was a party at the virani place.


the party

abir looked around and he saw no sign of kt his monney maker!
a:laksh do u know where kt is she should be at the party too!
l:yeah she is upstairs studying 4 a tes
a:ok ! shes a good girl and also smart!

2 hours later

every 1 was dancing on the dance floor so abir sneakly went upstairs and looked into kt's room
kt was looking out the window and combing her hair she was in a hot pink nighty with blakc lace and it was above her knees
abirs thought:wow she looks fine!!!!!!!!!!better then bhoomi

he walked in and shut the door and kt turned around and kt:ahhhhhhhhhh abir get out get out!!!!!!!!
she pulled her blanket on her so he couldn't see
a:kt its ok i saweveything!
kt:abir what the hell r u doing here
............................................................ ....................................................manthan came in and he saw that abir was on kt and kt was crying and she was pushing him
m:kt abir what the hell!!!!!!!!!!
a:oh my sorry i happened to fall on kt and i accidently sqweesed her arm (good save 👏 )
then he went out
manthan looked at kt he noticed she was looking verry hot in her nighty
m:wow kt u look hot
kt:errrrrrrrrrrrrr omg get out out out outtttttt!!!!!!!!!!
manthan cluthes the doornob but it dosent open
m:shit the door is jammed
kt:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhh
kt pulled the blanket to her chin


to be continued
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 3///kt's discomfort

recap:kt in room abir in room manthan in room door jammed

kt:ahhhhh manthan come on open the door i thought u were strong open it ahhh!!!

kt still had the blanket held up to her chin!
manthan smaked the door and he was also screaming but no 1 heard cause the music

m:kt u can atleast help!come and help me scream u seem to be good at it

kt:now i cant even change into proper clothes with u being heare in the room

manthan gave a sarcastic grin and went bakc to smakcing the door

kt:ok i will help but dont look at me

........................................................down sairs


tulsi and laksh were talking

l:we need to talk about kt
t:yes go ahead
l:i want to marry her 👏
t: 😡 oh i know why because she got the cash before u never said anything u should be ashamed of urself how could u!stay away from my kt u cash hungry monkey(lol,but realy sad)

laksh felt that some1 had punched him in the stomache he ran upstairs and into his room he took out a picture of kt that was in his dreaser he looked and cryed his ass of 😭 😭
laksh out loud:i will show kt and tulsi how much i love kt not just 4 the money

bakc in kt's room
....................................................

kt and manthan were banging on the door

m:what was abir actualy doing i know it wasn't a acceident!
kt shead some tears....................................................... ...................

write later 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh my god u write so good
u rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love
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chapter 4/manthan has feelings

kt shead some tears and manthan made a sad face

m:dont cry whats the problem................
kt:he.he....he.....pushed me on the bed and forced hislef on him 😭
m:what !!!!!!!!he.......he....cant marry my sister he will ruin her life !

he smaked the door even harder and harder
!!!!!!!!open the door antone please!!!!!!!

kt was still crying she got of the floor and looked out the window manthan looked at her she had her cellphone with her she phoned tulsi and told her that the door was jammed

they were waiting 4 tulsi to come and open the door manthan put a hand on kt's shoulder and she turned around manthan closed his eyes

m:kt don't woory i am not gonna let that abir take over my sis's life and he will soon pay 4 what he was doing to u!

kt:thank u manthan

kt looked in manthans eyes she had this feeling iside of her manthan also looked at her in the eyes he wiped her tears and then ....BAM!!!!!!BAMMMMMM!!!!
some1 broke the door down.......manthan walked out but then kt stopped him and kt told tulsi what abir did and manthan also saw thise so he was a eye witness

3 of them went downstairs and made an anouncement...............

t:this wedding is not going to happen because abir is going to jail 4 attempting to rape a innocent young women!

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