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Posted: 18 years ago
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chapter 11/door not opening

it had been a few days since kt's wrist had broke tulsi had not found out yes they were getting ready 4 pari's merridge!

tulsi was calling kt too get somthing out of the basment but she never came so then tulsi asks laksh then he goes and gets it when he is opening the door it wont open because u can only open it from the outside
then kt comes in and sees laksh trying to grab the door but he couldn't and the door shut

l:ky what the hell the door will not open from the inside only the outside!!!!
kt:noooooooo what but i need to get pari's hair ready for her date this can not happen!
l:well it just did
kt:so brake the door open
l:i am not crazy theres no use of trying
kt:so negative

it started to get realy hot in the basment because some 1 turned the heat up to high and laksh and kt started to sweat
laksh's hair was wet with sweat he looked realy hot and kt's shirt was all wet she even ripped the sleaves of

laksh stood by the door yelling
kt had sat down on the coldish floor

pari asked archita th get her ready cause kt was no where in site and they never saw laksh eather
p:archita do u think laksh and kt r togeather
a:who knows but i want to find out lets go see if there at the park
so they left and mostly every1 was out of the house except 4 kt and laksh

kt tied her hair up to a pony tail as laksh just slowly slowly banged on the door when they saw a bottel of whater then they look at eachother and both at the same time"thats my water"
they both run to it bau laksh gets it first then kt just sits back down whiping her sweat of her face with the ripped sleave of her shirt laksh soon took of his shirt

kt wached in amazment how mucely his body was (dont worry he shaved it 😛 )

kt would take of her shirt too but laksh was thare
kt:plz laksh give me some of that water
l:i will
kt:realy
l:but
kt:but what
l:u have to do somthing
kt:what!
laksh walked up to her and pucered his lips and touched her lips with his finger and with that same finger put it on his lips
l:a kiss
kt:what the hell laksh i am better thirsy
kt just moved away
and they sat on eather side of the walls facing eacother sweating like hell but then laksh realized her still had some water left he was about to drink it when he saw kt close her eyes and sigh.........she looked so preaty to laksh like that the way she was sitting the way her hair was tied up the way her hand was moving across her face to get the sweat of laksh felt sorry 4 her and walked up to her without her noticing and he spilled all the water on her kt looked up at him and she was so refreashed
kt:thank u
l:no problem
laksh sat right beside her kt looked at his sexy eyes and then kt realix=zed that she loved this man and her heart would be broken if some girl had gone after him and she though he was upset bout not giving him that kiss!

kt leaned closer and then laksh looked at her and then kt held the back of his head and pushed it toward her lips then laksh got hold of her waist and he puled her closer and than kt kissed him on the lips 4 about 10 seconds then kt backed off and laskh still held her waist and laksh looked at her and pulled her closer...................................................... ............................................................ ............................................................ ..........................................and he puy his head on kt's shoulder and and pressed a kiss on her lips then kt felt a shuder it quickly got cold in the room kt cuddeled upp to laksh and laksh hugged her verry tifgt it was cold since some1 turned of the heat so some1 was in the house then they heard the door nob turn then laksh let go of kt and kt quicklt got of of him before the door opened it was manthan and rani they quickly got out and thanked manthan and they went up to change there clothes
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
I just read it 2 times, and it's really good. What are your plans for another update?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
promo/chapter 12

laksh thinks of kt nonstop
nucel thinks kt is hot
eklovia telling nuckel not to
interfear with laks ang kt' love
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
You have a really good mind. Brainstorming and writing.
I think it's really hard to do that, and you have a skill on it 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great job plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊


I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


love
angel00 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
man i love laksh so much
dont know why i siad that 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: measha

man i love laksh so much
dont know why i siad that 😆

nice part..just a question so manthan doesn't have any feeling for kt?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

nice part..just a question so manthan doesn't have any feeling for kt?

no he dosent he fell in love with rani they r just realy good friends
Edited by measha - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
chapter 12

kt and laksh had both taken a shower then kt changed into a white pyjami suit with a realy nice pencile heel

kt went to go sit with baa and laksh was there
b:come sit kt
kt:i am commin
l:hi kt
kt:hi
laksh gave her a realy cute smile and then he blinked at her 😉
then kt just smiled
they sat down and chatted then kt's phone rang it was prem
kt:escuse me
then she walked out

kt:prem r u ok
p:yup kt i am fine just wanted to tell u we r shifting bussnes's close to ur house
kt:realy thats great tell mukti toget my clothes ok
p:yeah shure just to tell u mukti is pregnet
kt:congrats

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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
I LIKE THIS STORELINE BUT ITS FUNNY HOW U SAID kt:realy thats great tell mukti toget my clothes ok
I MEAN WHO SAY THAT... NOT RICH PEOPLE... THEY FREAKEN DON'T CARE ABOUT THEIR OLD KAPRAS.... BUT STILL THIS IS GOOD STORELINE.... U SHOULD TAKE OVER EKTA PLACE...

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