PS: I am really sorry about not reviewing these days. I am a bit busy will soon comment on the other works as well. Sorry đ
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 24
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PS: I am really sorry about not reviewing these days. I am a bit busy will soon comment on the other works as well. Sorry đ
Part 8
Days passed Swayam tried hard to avoid any type of contact with Ganga as he was confused. He didn't know why he cared for her and helped her. He couldn't understand the strange feelings he feel around her. He used to eat three times at home as he couldn't ignore the delicious food Ganga cooks. Apart from that he would either spend his time in collage, with friends or in clubs. In the beginning Ganga tried hard to talk to him and thank him but he ignored her always so due to irritation she also stopped talking to him. She spends her days while cooking or cleaning the house.
On one fine evening, Sharon's phone rings and she picks it up seeing Rey's name. "How are you and where are you?" he asked concerned in his voice was apparent. "Chill Rey, I am fine and standing outside the club and about to step in" she said with a smirk. "Are you out of your mind you are going to club alone?" he almost yelled through phone. Sharon got irritated even though she knew that he cares for her but still she is DIVA so she replies "Relax I am a big girl now and can take care of myself. You go enjoy with your girlfriend. And dare not to call me, I will call you when I reach hotel." She cuts the call and smiles at herself and says "it was easy now he will not disturb me, so Sharon lets enjoy."
She walks in the club and it was a classy club with many rich people in it. She goes to DJ and asks him to play her song and the DJ announces "hey all the people in the club. We have a beautiful and sexy girl in the club and I am going to play her song. So welcome her on the dance floor." Swayam and his friends enter and they hear the announcement. He didn't care so he went to the bar and sits their while his friends go to check the new girl out. The lights go dimmer and the flashlight fall on a beautiful figure. Everyone starts whistling, clapping and falling here and there which forced Swayam who was facing the other side turns around to look the girl. He couldn't see the girl as her back was facing everyone but her figure was apparent she had a perfect figure. Swayam looked at her from top to bottom but just ignored her due to all chaos in his brain and turned around and took a drink and started drinking it. The music begins and Sharon moves on the music as smoothly as a wind blowing smoothly.
Leja Leja Re Haay Haay Leja
Ni Muiye Ni Muiye Ni Muiye
She starts her dance while facing her back to all the people in the club. Boys just wanted to see her face her figure from back was breathtaking and now they were craving to look her face and her beauty.
Leja Leja Re Mehki Raat Mein Churake Saare Rang Leja
Raati Raati Main Bheegun Saath Mein Tu Aisi Mulakaat Deja
She turns around and everyone starts falling on floor and on each other. Swayam also glances at her and he gets lost in her beauty but soon composes himself and continues drinking. She does the steps asking to take all he wants. And then she turns around with extended arms like she is enjoying the rain.
Ni Muiye Maila Mann Mera, Kya Karna Aisa Rang Gora, Jo Piya Na Rijhaye
She moves to the other side of the club and dances like her beauty of no use as she doesn't get who she wants.
Ni Muiye Mann Maila, Mann Maila Kya Karna, Hai Aisa
Na Bhaye Piya Ko, Tann Gora Kya Karna, Hai Aisa
Leja Leja Churake Saare Rang Leja
Raati Raati Main Bheegun Saath Mein Tu Aisi Mulakaat Leja
She again changes her place and then she moves her hand around her face showing her beauty and makes gestures that she isn't liked by anyone despite of her beauty.
Leja Leja Leja Leja Re Leja Leja Haan Re
Chahoon Paas Paas Aana, Koi Dhoondh Ke Bahana, Tumhe Apna Aana
Chahe Ruthe Ye Jamana, Chahe Maare Jag Taana, Tumko Hai Pana
Each time she changes her spot, she is just going towards Swayam unknowingly. She dances thinking about Swayam and remembers him rejecting her. She pushes that thought away and goes towards the bar.
Ni Muiye Saari Raaton Ki, Kahani Koi To Hogi
Jo Jaage Taare Raaton Ko, Ya Jaage Jogi
Now she dances by the bar and Swayam keeps glancing at her unwantedly all this time long and now she was really nearby him. So he couldn't resist but to look at her and her wonderful dance.
Hoo Ni Muiye Haay
Ni Muiye Hoti Hia, Kucch Batein Hoti Hai, Raaton Mein
Jo Jaage Hai Jogi Ya Taare Jage Hai, Raaton Mein
Leja Leja Re Mehki Raat Mein Churake Saare Rang Leja
Raati Raati Main Bheegun
She is standing next to him and does steps making actions of Jogis and pointing towards stars and dances and again twirls around as if she is enjoying the imaginary rain.
Ni Muiye Ni Muiye Leja Leja Re
Bheegun Re Haai
Ni Muiye Ni Muiye Ni Muiye
Leja Leja Aa Re
She ended her dance and was about to move but her dress gets stuck in a nail and she was about to fell but Swayam stops her from falling. He circles his arms around her waist and she holds him by his shoulder with her eyes closed. He makes her stand up and smiles at her as her eyes were still closed. He comes close to her ear and says with a smirk on his face "you can open your eyes, people are looking at you." She opens her eyes and her jaw drops seeing Swayam standing in front of him. She has seen his pics few years old. He didn't change much but only became more hot and handsome. She had tears in her eyes but she hid it. They were looking at each other and was distracted by a group of boys and girls.
"Hey you dance well" a boy commented and Sharon replied "thanks". Another boy says "want to join us we are planning fun." Sharon was confused but she wanted to leave Swayam so she says "okay count me in" and walks towards them but felt a grip on her hand. She turns around and to her shock Swayam was holding her hand and he says "you shouldn't trust them." Sharon looks at his hold on her hand and then replies with attitude "well I don't know you either so why should I trust u? And leave my hand." Swayam leaves her hand and says "fine as you wish." She gives him a last look and leaves and he does the same thing and goes to the bar again. But this time not to drink but keep an eye on this new attitude girl and the group.
*Part 8 Ends*
I know I know I m ready now attack đ sowwy you guys I know u want to beat me up but I can't write entire meet in one go then baad mein kya karo gay huh đ˛??? So relax will update soon đ
So till then stay tuned and stay excited, confused and guessing what is about to happen next đđ
Love
TaSha
Originally posted by: ChaitraJoshi
hmmm so this is ur adhoori swaron meetđĄ how mean yađľ pehle toh itna wait karati hai nd uska baad mila toh adhoori meetingđ˛uparse chota update..not fair tashađĽş
but anyways it was a good update nicely writtenđbut ek baat samajh nahi aayi if am not wrong sharon stays in delhi nd swayam in mumbai toh sharon mumbai kaise pohoch gayi??đ i dont knw tumne iske baare mein mention nahi kiya or main hi bhool gayiđ¤ but am too lazy to read all over again toh please tumhi batado...đłaur ab confuse hokar waiting for next update and really excited for itbut am very bad at guessing so cant help but wait for next updateis baar toh jaldi de dođł
Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks
awesome update... 1st swaron meet.. sharon swayam's attitude girl... Its getting more n more interesting...đđBtw ty for the pm...N one query... Swayam goa kaise n kab gaya? wo to Mumbai me tha na? N Sharon goa mai? So dono ek hi club me kaise mile?đ
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