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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update. hope geets will realise her love for maan and go back before anything bad happens. precap is so scary
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Posted: 12 years ago
datz an awesome update dear
loved it
like sam so much
want maaneet moments
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
loved it alot...
geet loves maan bt not admitting due to her past...
scary precap...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear
I loved it
but precap is scary
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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H2 - 24



Delhi

Maan was in his farm house,



Adi came

Adi : sir Rahul have planed to keep bomb in our sites



Maan : hmm how many sites

Adi : 6,

Maan smirks : let him keep, let it be I one site, other site before it burst , police should arrive

Adi : yes sir

Maan : I want prove for him



Adi : yes sir, he left

Maan : hmm so Rahul, started his game, lest see who win



Rahul mansion

Rahul was enjoying for his victory



Rahul : now Maan khurana, I have trapped him, in both, in his business and his family, his lovely sister.

Assi : we have won sir

Rahul : no till he see his defeat, his name should not exist in tis world, hmm he is bacha who don't know how to play with Rahul Khanna, first his father, now his son, started to laugh


Assi too join him

Rahul : lets give him some dose, call him

Rahul called Maan

Maan saw te caller and smirks (st): so Rahul wants to celebrate his victory with me



Maan : hello

Rahul started to laugh : hello, tis is ur last hello

Maan : wat u mean

Rahul : I mean u will not see 2mor sun

Maan : hmm

Rahul : u have played with fire , now u have to burn in tis, ready for lose my son

Maan was silent which irritates Rahul

Rahul : wat u became silent, u got scared for ur defeat, ahan


Maan , saw adi, Adi showed his thumbs up


Maan : so Mr.Rahul, u think u won te game



Rahul : any doubt

Maan : but I didt think so

Rahul : wat

Now Maan started to laugh

Rahul : r u became mad


Maan : no one can burn me, im te HELL, who make others to bur in my HELL, I already said Rahul, u have became old, so try new ideas to trap me, but u didt listen




Rahul got confused

Maan : u got confused, wat is tis, keeping bombs, tis all old trend, do u want new trend, then on ur tv

Rahul shouts at his Assi to on te tv


TV NEWS


REP : MR.RAHUL KHANNA, RETURNS TO INDIA TO TAKE REVENGE FROM KHURANAS, FIRST HE KILLED YEASH KHURANA, NOW HE TRY TO KILL MAA SINGH KHURANA, BUT POLICE TRAPPED HIM


REP2: THEY GOT PROOF AGAINST RAHUL,


SOME PICTURES WERE RAHUL WITH GOONS, AND HIS RECORDER VOICE WITH MAAN SINGH KHURANA, HOW HE THREATEN HIM AND SAID TAT HE IS TE ONE WHO KILLED YASH KHURANA


REP : SO NOW WE WILL ASK TE COMMISSIONER ABT TIS


COMMISSIONER : WE HAVE GOT ENOUGH PROOF AGANST RAHUL, WE ARE SEARCHING HIM, SOON HE WILL BE ARRESTED, AND WE HAVE GIVEN FULL PROTECTION FOR MAAN SINGH KHURANA



Rahul broke te tv,

Maan started to laugh : Rahul why u showing my angry on tat tv, hmm

Rahul : I wont leave u

Maan : try some thing else, he cuts te call


Rahul was pacing , fuming in his angry


Rahul : now I want te Anni under our custody and te cd

Assi : yes sir


Maan ki farm house


Commissioner : Mr. Khurana, u have to be careful , we have arranged A grade security for u

Maan : I have my own BGS



Comm.: but tis is our duty, if Rahul try to harm, they have given permission to shot

Maan : hmm

Comm.: ok Mr.Khurana im leaving anything else u can call me

Maan: hmm

After Commissioner left

Maan : so count ur days Rahul

GOA,

Geet was sitting in te church, from morning, Father came and saw her



Father : Gee twat happened , why u sitting heer from morning

Geet : Father . I don't know, but I feel some kind of fear, tat some thing bad is going to happen

Father smiles : did u saw some dream

Geet : yes but it is not abt it, I feel , for Maanji , she hugs him and started to cry


Father caress her hair: don't worry beta everything will be fine, if u want call them

Geet : hmm, but still she have some fear In her


Geet call to km,

Dadi took te call : hello


Geet : hello Dadi,

Dadi : Geet beta how r u



Geet : im fine , Dadi how r um how is Anni, and

Dadi know wat she wants to ask : all are fine , and Maan also fine

Geet didt say respond : were is Anni

Dadi : wait I will call her

Dadi : Anni, Anni Get is on te line

Anni came and took te receiver: hello Geet im angry on u, u left me naa, go I wont talk with u

Geet : u cum here after ur exams



Anni : but bhai said he will take me to goa after sometimes

Geet : hmm, why he is taking u some were

Anni :no Geet, he is busy in his new project , so he said wen he finished he will take me

Geet : oh , so u getting bored , ask ur brother to take u for shopping atleast

Anni : if he stay here only I can say naa

Geetw ant to know abt Maan so she trying to aks Anni: were he is

Anni : he is staying in farm house

Geet : hmm

They chatted for some time and cut te call geet : why Maanji staying in farmhouse


Maan ki farmhouse


Adi : sir Rahul ki plan success

Maan : give him appointment here



Adi : ok sir

Rahul called Maan , but Adi took te call

Adi : hello

Rahul : I want to speak to Maa

Adi : u can say me

Rahul : I want to meet him

Adi : but sir is busy

Rahul shouted : I said I want to meet him

Adi : ok then u have to cum to his farm house alone, 2mor

Rahul : ok

Rahul smirks : now u will see ur Hell Maan

GOA,


Geet got up from her sleep and saw te time it is 3 clock, te same dream



Geet : no it cant happen, I wont let anything happens to my Maanji , nothing,

She started to cry, she rush to Father

Father was shock to see Geet like tis : Geet beta wat happen

Geet started to cry loudly : I want to go to Delhi, Father , I want to go to delhi

Father : delhi but why

Geet : pls father don't aks me anything I want to go to delhi

Father : ok beta but 2mor morning we will go

Geet : no father I want to go now pls, send me pls I beg u, she fall down on his legs and started to cry



Father cant see her like tis : ok get ready we will go

Geet : im ready, cum we will go, like a baby

Father smiles at her : hmm atleast take ur bag



Geet : no need


Father took Geet to airport, but they luck no tickets available


Father : beta see no tickets we will go 2mor

Geet : no I want to go now,

Geet went inside te counter : I want one ticket pls onely one ticket for delhi

Counter : but mam it is full

Geet fall on they legs: pls send me to delhi , pls I want to go there pls , she started to cry




Father holds her : Geet beta control urself

Geet : no I want to go to delhi, she started to shout, I want to go to delhi


Tat time one of te passengers seeing Geet felt sad for her and came came to father : sir take my ticket give to her, I will take te morning flight


Father : thanku son, thanku so much

Geet was happy and fold her hands in front of him



Father : but Geet only one ticket how u will go alone

Geet : I will go father pls

Father : Geet beta , only one ticket is available , so wait till morning I will arrange some thing else

Geet : no father I want to go now

Father : but how can u go alone

Geet : pls father I want to go

Father : ok then after u reach there u call me, then u didt bring ur bags too, take it , he gave some money in her hand

Geet : hmm , ok father

Father : take care my child, he kissed her on her forehead

Geet went inside , seated in her seat, she is praying




Maan ki farm house,


Rahul enter, BGS didt stop him

Rahul : Maan

Maan sitting on his usual style and looking at him



Rahul : wat u think u can defeat me, never, which u father cant do , u cant do

Maan was silenty watching him



Rahul : now be ready to see ur sister ki condition

Maan closed his fist tighty wen he said abt Anni, but kept quiet


Rahul open his lap top and on te screen, a girl lying nude and screaming, five mens all surrounding her,


Rahul laughs : see ur sister Maan, waris of khurana lying nude in front of other mens, still now they didt do anything to her, but one call from me they will taste her, see them they are craving to touch her


Maan didt react anything but staring at te screen




Rahul smirks : why u so silent Maan, after seeing ur sister like tis u cant speak, how can, no brother in tis world can see his sister like tis, but I have a solution,


Maan looks at him

Rahul : i will give u one more chance as ur my old friend ki son, so u will get a chance

Maan stares at him


Rahul : u fall on my legs and beg for ur life and then u shot urself , I will leave ur sister


Rahul saw Maan : wat r u ready or u want to see ur sister ki sr with so many mens, who will get tat chance, hmm


Maan didt say anything and respond , Rahul got irritated


Rahul : I gave u a option but I think u didt need t, so wait to see ur sister ki sr,

Rahul took his phone to dial, Maan holds him

Rahul : so u r ready


Maan laughs loudly which echoed te whole house, rahul was shocked to see him




Maan smirks : I already said u became old , so try new trends, but u, wat u think ah I will beg in front of u, MAAN SINGH KHUARAN WONT tilt his head in front of any one, even to god


Maan : no one can be MSK, before u bring tis cd u didt play once, how can, u became old so ur brain stop its functioning

Rahul glares at him

Maan : u know , my sister happily sleeping in my house

Rahul was shock


Maan : u thinking who is tis cd, u urself see it,




He turn te screen towards Rahul , he waS shock to see te screen , his heart will cum out any time


Rahul shouted : SAMEERA


MAAN : hmm Sameera ur daughter , yes ur correct, who will get to see they daughter ki sr with other mens, aha Rahul, so u enjoy it


Rahul holds his collar : Maan




Maan pushed him: wat u think u will be thinking to destroy me, I will look at it keeping nipple in my mouth , hmm. Yes my father didt do anything to u, coz he is heaven, but im HELL, who will burn others, u don't need to plan, if my enemy think to touch me, he will became ashes, but u killed my parents and separate my siblings from me, and now trying to touch my sister,how can I leave u, forgive is not in my dictiontary, I know only to destroy


Rahul fuming and stares at him


Maan : now call and ask ur me to finish wat they started


Rahul cant hear any more words


Maan : but I have to say u daughter is not like she want to feac te punishment for ur sins, so she changed te photo which u send , u think I wil be quiet wen u planning against me, but tis time, ur daughter got trapped, yes Rahul ur blood got trapped in ur game, so now enjoy it




Rahul try to call

Maan : did u forgot ur one call, they wil taste her body

Rahul : I wont leave u, he barged out to save his daughter

Maan smirks, Adi was watching all these but didt say anything



Rahul rush to his godown, : Sameera Sameera

Assi : wat sir

Rahul : how dare u kidnap my daughter

Assi : wat Sameera was kidnap


Both rush inside, rahul fall down seeing his daughter like tat in front of everyone



Assi cleared all of them and went out

Rahul took a cover and closed her and hugs her

Sam : dad im so happy today

Rahul : Sameera

Sam : yes dad if mom was there she will feel proud, but why u didt tis to them dad why

Rahul: sam

Sam pushed him: see dad wat I got for ur sin

Rahul closed his eyes


Sam : im felt ashamed to be ur daughter , Anni also same age as me, dad how cn u think to do to her, ahan , chi till now I thought u r te best dad in te world, but now im saying u ar not a human being, u r monster , but don't wory Rahul khanna I wont burden u anymore, u can do wat ever u want saying tis, she took a gun and shot herself


Rahul was shocked : Sameera , holds her lifeless body in his arms and crying

Rahul : I wont leave u MAAN , I wont leave and started to cry


Rahul calls his assi . he came and shock to see Sam, they both took her body and did te last ritual


Rahul : were is he

Assi : sir he is on te way to airport, he is going to london

Rahul : hmmm

Assi : sir our mens are trapped by them

Rahul : I don't need anyone

He too te car and rush




PRECAP : MAAN -- GEET -- RAHUL AT ONE POINT

Next part-25,PG121



Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ME FIRST YUPIII
MSK BACK WOOO
ye rahul kabhi nahi sudrega .maan se badla lene ki chakkar mein khud ki beti ko kho diya.ye hota hamesha😡😡

sam ne apni dost ke liya khud ki jaan ke li dost ho tho asia 👏👏
ye rahul kasia admi hay kaise kisi aur larki ke sath asia kar satha hay chi !!! chi!!!

geet missing maan.wanna knw how he is
dadi understand geet very well
geet ko bura sapna aya.now she want to go to delhi
geet going to delhi maan going to london
rahul want to kill maan abb kya hoga 😲😲
Edited by sumaiyariya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow poor sam got punishment of her father deed now geet all alone going to delhi
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago



Geet is returning back and Maan is going to London...

and Rahul is coming to airport to get Maan...

Sameera shot herself and her words also didn't make him realize his mistake...and why he is gathering all his property now...who is there to enjoy that...his only daughter killed herself...

awesome update...

I know u will send pm so thanx in advance...


Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
poor sam sge got punishment for her father's deed...

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