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H2 - 25




Rahul took his car and rush , HERE Maan was going to airport to leave to London,




Maan saw some car following him, he know who it Is, he signal his BGS to not to stop tat car, Rahul drove te car fats and stop in front of Maan ki car with a rage




He got out from his car, Maan too got down from his car,


Rahul is roaring : Maan I wont leave u, ur end came, u think ur hell for others , but now ur hell is standing in front of u,



saying tis he took his gun and pointed towards him, Maan was smirking at him and eyed his BGS to stop

Here Geet came out of te airport , rushing outside , she took a taxi

Driver : were u have to go madam



Geet didt know were she have too go: hmm ahan km

Driver look at her worn state

Geet : pls bhaiya take me fast

Taxi was driving, Geet was continues praying holding her chain


Here Rahul stared at him, Maan smirk at him and took his gun and pointed at him,




Geet who was passing te airport saw Maan , and she was happy , at once she try to open te door



Driver stop te car : madam wat u doing

Geet : rush out : Maanji Maanji,

Geet rush towards Maan, Maan was shock to se her , Rahul saw Geet , he at once holds her


Rahul : see Maan now too god is with me, wen I killed ur parents tat time too he was with me, and started to laugh




Geet was shocked and scared, te way Rahul holding her neck with one hand and placing te gun on her forehead, Maan closed his eyes

Rahul : now u place ur gum down Maan, or else ur beautiful wife life will be spoiled,


Maan closed his fist tight and open his eyes and laugh at him, Rahul was shock


Maan learned on te bonnet : wat u think, u can threaten me with tis girl ahan, if u want u can kill her


At once tis words came from Maan, Geet stop her wriggle and staring at him, Maan stares at her saying he is there, she at once bit Rahul ki hand and Maan shot him on his shoulder , Geet rush to Maan ,




Rahul : no ,

he at once shot Maan on his shoulder, spreading te blood on Geet ki face . Geet was shocked and shouted



Geet shouts : Maan





Maan was shock to look at her wen she called him, they were looking at each other, but they were snap, wen Maan ki BGS started to shot Rahul , and Rahul was flying in air, Mann hugs Geet and hiding inside him to avoid her looking at Rahul


Rahul : Maan ur real HELL AND DIED


Maan saw him, Geet is holding him, suddenly Maan started to collapse on te ground



Geet : Maan Maan , wat happen, some one help me, pls she started to cry holding Maan, like holding her life


BGS place Maan in te car and Geet sat with him, they took him to hospital, BGS informed ADI


Geet was waking him : Maanji pls wake up pls, Maanji I cant live with u, pls,

She holding him tightly , burying his face in her chest, continous chanting his name, they reached te hospital, driver, and BGS took him inside te hospital and Geet is shouting for doctor and rushing inside pushing everyone



Geet : dr dr, pls , save my Maan , pls,

Nurse : who are

Geet : pls SAVE him, pls

Nurse : wat relation u have with him

Geet holds her chain in front of her : mera pati woh , meri pati hei, pls save him




Tat time Adi rush : Geet

Geet saw him and fall on his legs, before tat Adi holds her

Geet : Adi bhaiya My Maanji, Maanji

Adi : I informed te dr Geet , cum lets go, before going he glared at te nurse




Adi took Geet towards te operating threatre , they were standing out, Ani and Dadi rush to hospital and hearing wat happen, Dadi sat on te chair holding her heart , Anni consoles her,


Geet was watching te OT door without blinking, she stood numb, after some time drs came out




Adi : dr how is Maan sir

Dr : we removed te bullet but te bullet pierce his heart, so lot of blood loss , we are trying, wat ever after 24 hrs only we can say anything

Dadi and Anni started to cry, Geet stood numb seeing te door, dr left them

Adi : dadi nothing will happen to him, he will cum back




Anni look at Geet : why u standing here Geet, see now u don't need to wear tis colour dress anymore, u can go to ur white , u don't need to live as married woman, till now u are living as widow , now it is going to be tr , before she completes




Geet slapped her and shouted on her : ANNI, ANNI

Anni , Dadi was shock to see her,

Adi holds Anni , Geet runs out

Geet runs out and started to walk in te rain, and started to cry , falling on te road




Geet : why why , she suddenly saw a temple, she went inside , she staring at god, took te fire in her in front of god,


Geet (st) : ur laughing at me, till now u took my everything , but tis time u wont win, u understand u wont win, u cant take my Maan from me, u cant, she fall on te knees, and te priest came and hold and gave her water



Priest : beti have faith on ur god , he wont live u

Geet looks at him

Adi who came behind Geet saw her I temple

Adi : Geet r u mad, watt is, if u hurt urself Maan will get cure, now we have to be his support, so control urself

Adi took her with him to hospital


Hospital, Maan was shifted to icu, Dadi and Anni was sitting outside , Anni saw Geet and went and hugs her

Anni : im sorry Geet im sory



Geet hugs her back : its ok Anni, but wat ever u said it is correct

Dadi : Geet beta cum here sit,


They waiting for Maan. Dadi sitting beside Maan, Anni was standing beside her, Geet was sitting on te floor near te door , looking at him without blinking, thinking if she blink for a sec too he will vanish , tears were pouring from her eyes, she was waiting for his one look,




Morning, Maan open his eyes , Adi rush to call ted r, dr ask everyone to go out, but Geet didt show any reaction nor got up from her place, urse holds her, but Adi snaps her , ask te drs to let her sit there



All were waiting outside , praying to god, drs came out after some time

Adi : wat happen dr

Dr : now he is out of danger , all god's grace , but he is little bit weak as he lost lot of blood, so he need rest, now u can and go see him

Dadi , adi : thanku dr, they rush inside to see him, Dadi went near him and caress his hair, Maan slowly open his eyes


Dadi : Maan beta



Maan In his chocked throat : Dadi ,

Dadi : ahan beta

Maan : Dadi now mumma papa will be happy, I have given punishment to tat Rahul

Dadi smiles with her tears and kiss him on his head : yes beta, ur parents will be proud to see u

Anni holds his hand : Bhai im so scared

Maan smiles at her

Then Maan look at Geet who was sitting still in te ground near te door, looking at him, Maan give her a accsusing look like why u came now, but in return he got only a blank look from Geet



Anni : Geet see Bhai was open his eyes, see Geet,

Dadi : bechari scared too much seing u like tis

Anni came near Geet and touch her, but Geet collasped on te ground

Maan : Geet

Dadi too came near

Adi called for dr, they took her to icu

Dr : she is so weak and over all she was i so much stress, now she wil be sleeping for her while



Dadi : bechari scared so much

Adi : she was running in te road and burning her hands

Dadi : burning her hands

Adi : yes dadi and he narrated wat he saw in te temple

Dadi : hmm having tis much love for Maan but hiding it, hmm


They went to see Maan, after some time Geet open her eyes,and searched for some thing , then she started to get down from te bed

Anni : wat u doing Geet

Geet : Anni Maanji

Anni : he is alright now sleeping u take rest

Geet : no I want to see him pls

Anni : but Geet dr

Geet holds her hand : pls Anni i want see him




Anni took Geet inside Maan ki room, Geet went near him, Maan was sleeping , she started to caress his head cuming down his arms, like she herself want to clarify tat Maan was in front of her, tears were pouring which falls on Maan




Anni started to cry seeing Geet : im sory Geet

Geet : why Anni

Anni : for accusing u, seeing bhai like tis I got scared

Geet : it is ok Anni but wat ever u said is correct coz of me only Maanji is like tis,


Dadi came there : for how long u will say tis Geet, ahan, coz of u only he is like tis, ahan, but coz of u only he is alive now, why u came to delhi, how u know he is In danger ahan, answer me Geet, why u slapped Anni wen she said tat words ahan, answer me



Dadi was shaking Geet, Geet was avoid looking at her

Dadi : why u burned ur hands , why u shouting in te reception he is pati, ahan

Geet started to cry hugging Dadi

Dadi : dont say u r te reason for everything

Geet : hmm

Dadi : now see he is alright, , she wipes her tears

Dadi : Geet see urself wat u done , cum let have some thing to eat

Geet : no Dadi im fine, im not hungry

Anni : if u didt have anything , we also wont eat

Geet : hmm ok

Adi came : Dadi u three go ad have something and cum, I look after Maan sir

Geet : adi bahiya thanku so much

Adi : geet u saying me bhaiya and saying thanks too, very bad, and he is my friend too

They went to km, to freshen , adi was sitting in te couch

Maan open his, eyes, he have been wake up wen he feel Geet ki tears in his hands , but he just want to know wat she doing, but wen Dadi talk he came to know wat she did




Maan (st) : till how long u will blame urself Geet, hmm now also u didt cum and hug me at once u saw me , now also u disappointed me Geet, I can feel ur love , but why stopping , ok let u be like tat, I wont cum behind u


After some time All three came , Maan was talking with adi, Dadi and Anni came inside , But Geet stood out, she is feeling guilty to face him

Dadi : how r u beta

Maan : fine Dadi , his eyes searched Geet

Anni : hare Geet why standing out cum inside, Anni drag Geet inside, Geet stood tilting her head down

Maan saw her pale face , her swollen eyes, and her bandaged hand, he got angry on her and turns his face

Geet saw his frustration and te way he turning his face, she thought he hate her , she try to go out, but



Dadi : hare Geet were u going cum sit beside me

Geet was sitting silently, Anni was sitting with Maan and talking with him, Maan eyes were only on Geet, who avoiding his look


At night , Dadi and Anni sleeping on te couch , Maan was sleeping , Geet sat beside him, staring at his face, she kiss him on his forehead, and then took his hands and kissed it,






Geet : im sory , she was crying, caressing his hairs

Holding him, she drifted to sleep ,



Maan woke up and saw Geet is sitting holding his hand, he saw her, and her bandaged hand and he caress her hand, Geet stir in her sleep , at once Maan took his hand and closed his eyes,


Geet wake up and saw him, place his hand on te bed and went out before he wakes up

After she went, Maan open his eyes and saw her retreating figure

Maan (st) : how long u will run from me Geet

Dr came to check him

Dadi : how is he dr

Dr : hmm he is fine now

Maan : dr get my discharge papers ready I want to go home

Geet glared at him,

Dr : but u have to stay some more time

Maan : I want to go tat is it

Dadi : Maan wat is tis, dr saying naa u have to rest



Maan : dadi I want to go home, or else I know how to get myself discharged, glaring at dr, dr was shivering with his look

Geet was murmuring : dust dhanav always he does wat he thinks, hmm



Maan know she is talking abt him but kept his face straight



Maan : dr r u getting or

Dr : no I will discharge

Maan : hmm good

Adi : dadi I will talk to dr and cum

Dadi : hmmm

Dadi: Maan wat is tis, ahan, u wont listen to anyone

Maan : dadi pls

Before Dadi speaks , Geet holds her hand and eyed her to cum out, they both went out

Geet : dadi let him cum home we will look after him

Dadi : hmm ok, tat is also good for him

They took Maan home, he got down from te car , before he enter Dadi stop him, she wants to take aarti


Maan : Dadi why all tis, u know I don't like tis things

Dadi : but for me u have to bear it


She took te aarti and gave it to nakul, wen Maan enter inside he slips, at once Geet holds him, Maan look at Geet and they both are staring at each other


Dadi : hare Maan beta wat happen,




They both came back to sense , at once Maan snap her hand , turn his face, Geet felt hurt but compose herself











PRECAP : MAAN AVOIDING GEET

Next part-26,PG 131


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me again 1st

maan in airport rahul bhi agyaa

geet so sad sad
geet saw maan become happy went to him
rahul catch her

oh god maan ko goli lagi

chalo geet somehow take maan in hospital
ani blame geet for this

geet went to mandir for maan .geet ne khud chot pocha dia
chalo maan is alrite geet taking care of him awee.

all r worried for geet maan also worried for her 😕😕.
maan gonna avoid geet
Edited by sumaiyariya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet came back sensing maan in danger
she was caught by rahul n maan killed him..
he was hurt badly..
geet screaming he is her pati..
atlast she realised..
ani taunting her
n dadi questioning her deeds
saying she loves maan..
oh no..now maan is avoiding geet..
this will make her realise
she needs him as much as he loves her..
ossum update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
at last rahul died
oh god this maan and geet.. when they talk to each other...
but loved this angry movements also
nice parts dear
please update the next part also, wants to see how they come to each other
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Posted: 12 years ago
Happening part tha buddy.

Total bolly wood Ishtyle climax tha when Rahul was aiming at Maan but Geet comes in between.Rahul makes Geet as shield but yet fails to avoid his death as Maan shoots him.


And after that the struggle to save Maan awesome.

But after loving each other both Maaneet are silent.


Waiting eagerly to see what happens next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear😊

geet saved maan👏

oh ho maan will avoid geet😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
finally maan took his revenge but omg got hurt in that...phewww i was so happy when doc said that now he is out of danger and i know that its not only because of doc but also because of geets immense love and pray for his well being.
hummm so maan now avoiding geet so that she herself feels her love for him and come to his arms with her own will...maan you are absolutely right, geet has already realized her love for you, now little bit of your avoiding her will do kuch kuch to her heart and very soon she will come flying in your arms.
sweety loved the update...and waiting alreadyfor the next one😃😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
atlast rahul part is over ! only maaneet and romance are left ! but both are misunderstanding eachother...waiting for the mu to clear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update thank god this villian rhul is not any more good ... geet show his love towards maan but taking care of him wholeheartedly hope she confess him soon...
maan babu now he will show his attitude lolz
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Posted: 12 years ago
aitng for next one please post soon

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