*Love Letter* :Asya os

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Hello!!Today i was watching a movie and a scene was struck in my mind..So, based on that i wrote this os..Hope you guys enjoy it..here it goes...

Dilshaad:
Asad, how many times should i remind you to confess your feelings to zoya??

Remember one thing..those who can't express their feelings have no right to love. Do you

get that??

Asad: Ammi, i am trying to tell her

Dilshaad: Just trying won't do asad..i don't know how, but you should make zoya aware of

your feelings by tonight and thats final!!

Saying that Dilshaad left..Asad began to think deeply..and at last decided to write a love

letter to Zoya. He took a paper and pen..but he did not know what to write.. Then suddenly

an idea struck his mind.A grin appeared at the edge of his mouth and it turned in to a huge

smile as he completed writing the letter. He took the letter and went to Zoya's room..He

entered the room without knocking

Zoya: Allah miya!! Whats wrong with you Mr. Khan?? You'll give me lectures all the day

how to behave..Don't you even know that you have to knock before coming in to the

room and especially a girl's room??

Asad: I am sorry Ms.Farooqi, actually i came here for a very important work that i forgot

to knock the door

Zoya: Its ok, by the way may i know that important work??

Asad: Actually Ms.Farooqi, you know that i am emotionally challenged and i can't express

my feelings directly..Any how love and all these feelings are new to me..so i thought better

not express vocally and write down a letter

On hearing that Zoya was dumbstruck.She thought to herself, " Allah Miya!! Mr.Khan is

talking about love, and does it mean the letter in his hand is actually a love letter?😲

Zoya was lost in her thoughts..

Asad: Ms.Farooqi! Where are you lost?? Are you listening to me??

Zoya: Haan, Yes, yes i am li listening ( She stammered)

Asad knew the effect on her..he gave a smirk and continued...

Ms.Farooqi, actually i wrote this letter to Tannu..but you know, i am little uncomfortable

in giving it myself..So i thought why don't i take your help, any way i know you are an

expert in these things

Saying this, he closely observed Zoya's reactions..poor thing!! She was shocked to the hell

Then he continued

Actually Ms.Farooqi, i brought chocolate cake for you..after all you are going to help me a

lot..aren't you??

Zoya forgot to respond..she was staring at him open mouthed..Asad asked again

Ms.Farooqi, tell me..will you give it to TANNU (Specifying tannu)

With that, zoya got furious..she said

Yes Mr.Khan! I'll give it to your TANNU..happy?? Now you may leave..

Asad left the room..at last, he succeeded.Now, he was waiting for the outcome of his plan..

Zoya was fuming with anger..she can't believe that Mr.Khan actually wrote a love letter to

Tanveer..She wanted to see what he wrote.So, without thinking twice she opened the letter

and began reading

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Dear Tannu,
You know that i am not so comfortable in expressing myself directly.So, i am

writing this letter. Tannu, I have always imagined a life with you..Without you, my life

will be like train without engine, batsman without bat, poori without aalu. Infact it will be

like bread without jam!! Tannu , actually you are like my liver..confused?? Even heart

can be transplanted.But if liver gets damaged, it can't be replaced.A liver is as sensitive as a

flower. So, you are like my liver. Although i am writing this letter with reynolds ball point

pen, the refil is filled with my feelings.The ink is actually a link that connects us..Please

consider my request..I'll be waiting for you in the backyard at 5:00 in the evening..Ammi

and nazma are going to Darga..But i'll be waiting for you ..

And, not to forget, the reason why i sent this letter with Zoya is that she is the

only person whose body is grown, but brain is dumb.If you give her a chocolate cake, she

will even jump from the china wall😆 Please don't forget to get her a chocolate cake after

receiving the letter


yours Asad

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After reading the letter, Zoya's anger knew no limits.he called her dumb? and that too to

Tanveer!! How dare he?? Then she began reading the letter again.This time she was

unable to control her laugh seeing reading the lines. She thought to herself,

'Allah Miya!! Mr.Khan is the most wierd person!!Who the hell will describe some one as

their liver??And whats with that batsman without bat thing?? Any how, why does all this

matter to me?? He asked me to give this letter to tanveer and thats my only work'

But again she was reluctant to give it.She began to remember their romantic moments..

She thought, do they mean nothing to Mr.Khan?? She sat in her room biting her nails and

thinking what to do..at last she decided..

Scene:5:00pm, backyard


Asad was waiting in the backyard and then Zoya arrived..seeing her Asad kept a confused

face and asked her

Ms.Farooqi,. what are you doing here?

Zoya:Why can't i be here? Is it a restricted area?

Asad: I didn't say that. Its just that i wanted some privacy.

Zoya: Why? Is any one about to come??

Asad: Thats out of your concern..By the way, did yoyu give the letter? I wrote it with all

my heart..

Zoya: Did you write it with your heart or liver Mr.Khan? By the way i did not eat the

chocolate cake that you gave..

Asad:Ms.Farooqi, did you read the letter? Don't you know that you shouldn't read others'

personal letters??

Zoya: And don't you know that you should not mention about others in your personal

letter?? and yeah, what a great witter you are..pori without aalu, bread without jam,

etc,etc.,Let me show this to everybody..


saying that she began laughing and running..Asad ran behind her..at last Zoya hit a wall

and her way was blocked.Asad captured her in between the wall and himself.She was

unable to move as he placed his hands on the wall either side..They shared an intense

eyelock..Asad began inching towards Zoya..She was not able to bear that proximity and

gave the letter to Asad.He simply threw it away and began comming evem closer..Zoya

closed her eyes in anticipation.Asad slowly whispered' I LOVE YOU ZOYA.. WILL YOU

MARRY ME??in her ears. Zoya couldn't believe what she heard...Did he just propose her??

Asad left her and leaned against the wall waiting for her response..Slowly Zoya gathered herself

asked him

Then what about Tanveer? What about that letter??

Asad: Zoya, i wasn't able to tell you directly.So, i used reverse formula in your way..

Zoya: What if i had given that letter to tanveer??

Asad: I know very well about you Zoya, and i knew you wouldn't give it to tanveer..

With that, a sweet amile appeared on Zoyas lips..She silently went to Asad and hugged him..and

he got the answer that he needed..



Thats it!!So let me know how it is!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Poori without Aloo, pen without link, jam without bread 🤣 jammy without tannu like chicken toast widout chocolate sauce... Ewww i hate hate cocolate sauce with chicken toast...😆
ROFL Yr... 🤣 Kash Asad sach main ye likhta toh 🤣 Just imagine 🤣
Edited by AsyaManic - 12 years ago
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Thank you😊
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Thank you😊
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A really funny and cute piece...Awww a love letter... Asad miyan's gt brains in the matter of love too??? loved the reverse formula!!!!and for me the best line was "Zoya: Did you write it with your heart or liver Mr.Khan?" hilarious!!!! Aww he proposed her in the most AsYa way possible...
A lovely one shot...hope you keep writing...
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Originally posted by: AsyaManic

Poori without Aloo, pen without link, jam without bread 🤣 jammy without tannu like chicken toast widout chocolate sauce... Ewww i hate hate cocolate sauce with chicken toast...😆
ROFL Yr... 🤣 Kash Asad sach main ye likhta toh 🤣 Just imagine 🤣

lol!! Agar sachi mein asad aisa likhta toh i'll go mad laughing🤣 I
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Thank you😊
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Originally posted by: sheet_leher

A really funny and cute piece...Awww a love letter... Asad miyan's gt brains in the matter of love too??? loved the reverse formula!!!!and for me the best line was "Zoya: Did you write it with your heart or liver Mr.Khan?" hilarious!!!! Aww he proposed her in the most AsYa way possible...

A lovely one shot...hope you keep writing...

Thank you😊
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hey this is really nice! The letter is just...bwahahahaha! 🤣 aisa sachi mein to maza aa jata!
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Love letter was hillarious...i mean kaun aisa luv lettea likhta hai

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