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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: puglet

Manav is at ChhanChhan's house for some marriage function and is waiting to take a part in it, before any guests have arrived. Although the sneezes are small and far in-between the audience knows the medicine is starting to wear off. The house is full of dogs running around. Dhyanchand see's Manav thinking about ChhanChhan and wants to "tease him" and licks his face. (Dhyanchand being the one who just got sick.)

Hospital, Tensions, anything-you-want-can-happen Result (recharacterization, changes in set/atmosphere, etc).



better yet, Dhyanchand bits him REALLY bad on the face so he is disfigured and they have to do plastic surgery! and they ask the family that a new dead body was brought in and they can trasplant the face if they want. and then the family give consent.😳
we her a NEW Manav at the end of the hospital stay!! 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessunara



better yet, Dhyanchand bits him REALLY bad on the face so he is disfigured and they have to do plastic surgery! and they ask the family that a new dead body was brought in and they can trasplant the face if they want. and then the family give consent.😳
we her a NEW Manav at the end of the hospital stay!! 😆



No no, nothing that harsh. I mean we have to reason with the established story.

But since I just figured out the second half of my story that I left hanging in my first post.. Manav gets sick with something viral and poisonous. Manav is in the hospital inside a tent hazmat area. One day later, with a little bit of fog maker, out walks the new Manav.

That could even be the new thing. UB has legal problems and ChhChh has hospital backstory related problem.
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