SOME RELATIONS YET TO BE REVEALED

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GUYS i know i m continuing wid aishq vishq pyaar vyaar bt shobi n i got a new topic so thought of writing n sharing it wid u ppl do comment shud v continue this topic on IF or not..b free to comment ur view gud or bad...

SOME RELATIONS YET TO B REVEALED

here is d cs n 1st part

CHARACTER SKETCH

TAANI SHERGILL :: A cute ,bubbly girl ,,THE DANCING DIVA stays in delhi wid her mom ,,
seriously moved by her mom's death,,n hates her father,,nt swayam's
sis (a very big reason behind it) ,,going to b gf of rey...

REYAANSH SINGHANIA: Hot hunk of the college as in d3 no pasts (kriya ) waiting 4 his angel t5o come bff of swayam n sharon n d best dancer of d college,,

SHARON RAI PRAKASH: DANCING DIVA OF ST.LOUIS ,,has a crush on swayam,,wants him to b her bf,,bff of rey,,1 big thing to b revealed (secret)

SWAYAM SHIKHAWAT: NOT d bro of taani,,another dancer,,has a crush on " NOONE" YA GUYS (SHARON HAS A CRUSH NT SWAYAM) bff of rey,


chapter 1


IN DELHI

Dance competition of d delhi university n everybody strats shouting in unison DANCING DIVA DIVA DIVA

the anchor announced her name twice bt to der surprise none is coming

scene shifts to backstage

a girl is walking to and fro ...

a girl in blue anarkali enters

girl : tu yahan kya kar rahi..tera name announce ho chuka hai

she turned...a girl with deep brown eyes,,excitement+worry on her face,looking at her beauty it seemed as if angel has stepped on earth(yes she waqs none other than our taani)

(she was all set for her dance)

taani (to d girl): shivani ma nahi aayi abhi tak

shivani: aunty aa jayenge..tera name announce ho chuka hai jaldi kar...

taani: par main to ma ke wishes ke bina ek bhi dance perform nahi karti

shivani: dekh taani aunty ko office mein kaam aa gaya hoga ya phir delhi ka traffic to tu jaanti hai na

taani : ha lekin...

shivani: lekin vekin kuch nahi aunty aa jayenge tu chal

(they both leave)

taani come to stage bt her angellic eyes were searching for someone bt she didnt find her mom n her dance started

after her dance she got many applauses from d audience bt still she wasnt happy coz her eyes still didnt find her mom ...she gets down from d stage

shivani hugs her

shivani: wow taani kya dance tha...superb yaar dekhna competition to tuhi jeetegi

taani: shivani dekh na ma nhi aayi

shivani: bola na busy hongi

taani: itni busy ki apni beti ka performance na dekhe

shivani: dekh taani aunty tera koi bhi performance miss nhi karti na

taani: kabhi nhi

shivani: to tu hi soch aunty ne aaj tera performance miss kiya to iska matlab hai ki aunty seriously busy honge

taani: phir b dekh aaj mein maa se baat hi nhi karungi

shivani: chal results announce hone wale hai

(dey both go n d results r declared ...taani is d winner)

shivani n taani hug each other n taani receives d trophy n comes backstage

shivani: wow taani finally college ka dance competition bhi tu hi jeet gayi

taani:vo to hona hi tha par jaldi ghar chal aur sunn

shivani: ab kya

taani:mom ko tu batana as u know i m nt talking to her

shivani: ok ab chal

(dey went ot taani's home taani searches 4 her mom everywhere bt cant find her
so c gets worried)

taani: shivani mom kaha hogi

shivani : tu tension mat le mai meri mom se puch kar dekhti hu shayad unhe koi idea ho (she calls her mom)

sumana malhotra:(mom of shivani,taani ki mom ki best friend n a doctor) : shivani taani hai vaha

shivani: ha hai par ...

sumana: jaldi usse phone de(shivani handles her phone to aani)

sumana: hello taani tum jaldii city hospital aa jao tumhari mom tumhe aakhri baar dekhna chaahti hai

taani: aunty lekin hua kya starts crying badly m...eri... m.o...m.( her words starts breaking)

suman: taani dekho time bahut kam hai jaldi aavo beta

(she hangs up d call)

taani n shivani reaches d hospital

sumana: taani ur mom is breathing last breather c is suffering from 3rd stage of cancer jst go n meet her...

taani: bt mom ne mujhe...

sumana: she didnt wanted u 2 b heartbroken bt go now c needs u

taani enters d room
n took her mom's hands in her n started sobbing badly
meanwhile her mom opened her eyes

taani's mom(tm): beta tum jeet gayi na

taani : par mom aapko kaise...

tm: tum meri beti ho na to jeetna to tumhe tha hi

taani: par mom ye aapko...

tm: beta suno ..mujhe tumhe tumhare dad ke baare mein batana tha...beta he was a dancer...ek din tum jab 5 years ki thi tab tum bahut bimaar thi n ur dad had a big dance event in london
he had to choose btw u n dance dat time he chose dance
so hamare relation tut gaye n i bought u here in delhi wid some amount that i had i managed to start a business n manged to bring u up as a single mom
taani i know now i wont survive so i want u to go to mumbai n i hav told sumana she will explain u everything(she felt short of breath )

taani : mom main abhi doc ko bulati hu

tm: suna tumhare dad ka name his name was

taani: mom main aapko kuch nhi hone dungi mom

tm: g..autam...

taani: mom

tm: rai...(bt b4 she cud complete she breath last) taani broke in tears shivani n sumana entered d room n tried to control taani

few days passed still taani was in shock...sumana came to taani..

sumana:dekho bete tumhari mom ki last wish thi ki tum apni aage ki studies mumbai mein karo ...so ye lo mumbai ki afternoon ki train ki tickets n mere mumbai wale flat mein tum shift ho jaana n ha maine servant ko bol diya hai gaadi tumhe stn. se pick karne aa jayegi n ha ab ye rona dhona bandh karo tumhari mom ko ye zara bhi pasandh nhi tha ab roogi to unko hurt hoga

taani stops crying n thnx sumana n packs her bag as it was her mom's last wish
reaches d stn. after sometime

precap:rey's entry ..taarey 1st meet

god tired of writing such a badu chapter hands r aching

chalo likes n comments karo ,,,accha response to hi next chp plz tell shall v continue or nt


credits: siddhi datz me n shobi


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Posted: 12 years ago
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u should definetly continue yaar

its amazing

plss update d nxt part asap waiting 4 it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww, poor taani!!! I feel soo bad for her.. Looking forward to her in Mumbai tough, n waiting for reys entry, n pls do pm me when u continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great concept
plz post soon
i think taani is the sister of Sharon
thnx4 the pm
plz post soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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as i already said...
pls update soon nd continue dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb concept di
It was lil emotional
N I think taani is sis of sharon
Anyways update soon n PM me bcoz I want u to continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chp.2 SOME RELATIONS YET TO B REVEALED

Taani gets ready for d stn. n while leaving sumana gave her a photo

sumana: ye lo taani tumhari mom ne kaha tha tumhe apne dad ki photo tumhe de du

taani: aunty i hate him mujhe nhi chahiye unki photo

sumana: plz bete mujhe tumhari mom ne kaha so meri duty hai ye...(she takes d photo n was abt to see it wen shivani comes)

shivani: chal taani teri train chut jayegi(taani widout seeing d photo puts in d bag n hurries)

taani: chalo aunty bye main chalti hu

shivani: chal ab

taani: tu bhi chal rhi hai kya??

shivani: oye idiot !!!!! tujhe stn. drop karne chalti hu

sumana: taani tumhara admission maine vaha ke st.louis college mein karva diya hai n driver aajayega stn. par theek hai dhyan rakhna apna bete

taani : ok aunty pahuchte hi aapko phone kar dungi

(taani leaves wid shivani n dey reach d stn. n d train is abt to leave)

shivani : dekh taani kaha tha na tujhe ab jaldi ja varna teri train to miss honi hi hai

(taani gets in train )

taani: chal bye shivani main tujhe bahut miss karungi

shivani: taani tu to aise bol rhi hai ki main to tujhe miss hi nhi karungi jaldi pahunch ke mujhe call karna n hum skype pe chat karenge ok

taani: ha ha or fb n twitter bhi to hai

shivani: o social networking sites ke name lena bandh kar (suddenly train starts)
chal bye miss u

taani: miss u 2 dear chal bye tc

(taani sits in d train n gonna reach mumbsi very soon)

scene shifts

someone is talking to himself aaj phirse late avp na aaj tera gala hi kat dalegi swear man she is gonna kill me today

(he picks his bag n reaches college n goes to d projector room)

guy: sry mam vo mein...

avp: vo main kya...mr. gs aap as usual u r late

guy: mam...

avp: a gs of d college shud b an idol 4 d students n u come late dat 2 in d students body meeting...rey u r pathetic

rey:sry mam bt actually abhi hume meeting par focus karna chahiye

avp: oh so now u will teach me

rey: no mam i was telling kyuki meri dance rehearsals hai

(meeting gets over n rey in rh)

rey: yaar mujhe to laga aaj avp mera suspension letter saath leke aayegi)

swaron: kash (both look at each other sharon very happy ki swayam is looking at her bt swayam turns his eyes over to rey)

rey: kya u wanted me to get suspended kya guys

swayam: aur nhi to kya roj late yaar ...tu kyu bhool jata hai ki tu college ka gs hai

rey: tera lecture nhi sunna mujhe already avp ke muh se sunkar aa rha hu ab tu shuru mat ho chal rehearsals shuru karte hai

(dey start rehearsing n take a break)

vicky : par kuch bhi bolo rey teri kismat bahut acchi hai hamesha bach jaata hai tu

(rey's phone starts ringing n rey sees it)

rey: par ab nhi bachunga...main kaise bhool sakta hu aaj granny ko chodne stn jaana tha ...mom ka phone (he cuts d call n rushes home)

rey's home

an old lady frowns

lady:ye ladka na meri train chut jayegi iski vajah se aur phone bhi nih utha raha

(rey comes at d door)

rey: mere hote granny aapki train kabhi nhi chutegi( he takes her luggage n takes her to d stn.)
scene shifts

taani reached mumbai n train is abt ot halt c cums near d door n at d same time rey's car stops in front of d stn. n rey takes her granny to d train n he feels something different around him
he feels some freshness in d air suddenly n feels as if someone (his angel) is near to him (guys samjho eletelephaty)

she gets down from d train n rey feels as if air is blowing aroung him n then rey was interrupted by her granny
granny:rey chalo train chali jayegi

rey takes her luggage keeps it in train n was abt to leave wen her granny says

granny:plz rey get me a bottle of water

rey: ya granny

(bt as he reached d canteen to bring water he saw d train started n den quickly he saw a girl drinking water he quickly takes d bottle 4m her n rushes to her granny n gives it 2 her) d girl ran behind him n d girl was none other than taani

taani: oye oye pakdo pakdo uss paani chor

(as rey gave d bottle he stopped running n staerted breathing heavily mean while she comes to him)

taani: oye mumbai wale tum apne aap ko bahut smart samjhte ho na paani chori karte waqt sharam nhi aati...

rey: hold on do u really think 4m my attire ki main tumhe paani chor lagta hu

taani : oye ye aatire vattire mere saamne nhi hamare teacher bachpan mein bola karte the dikhave pe mat jao apni akkal lagao n was continusly speaking

(rey was lost in her completely n he thought kitni baat karti hai par kitni cute lagti hai yaar )

rey: koi to roklo

taani: o god ab tum mujhe rokne ko kahoge

(he goes to d stall n buys 2 bottles of water)

rey: ye lo maine tumhari ek bottle li thi majburi thi n uske badle main tumhe 2 bottles deta hu happy

taani: tumhe kya lagta hai main yaha sirf tumhare paani ke liye khadi hu manners name ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai

rey: (his phone starts ringing name flashes sharon) sry tum se ye arguement bahut accha tha par will continue later coz meri best frnd ka call aya hai gtg bye

(n leaves)

taani: ajeeb log rehte hai yahan par arguement mein bhi inhe maja aata hai(she searches 4 d driver n finds him
they reach d sumana's flat n taani gets down 4m d car n opens d door wid d keys given to her by sumana n goes inside

taani : (to herself) chal taani aaj jitna rest karna hai karle kal se college

PRECAP : rey thinking abt taani n taani's first day in college

so guys plz comment howz it

accha response hoga to next update jaldi milega

credits: siddhi n shobi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!
first commenter
loved the update dear
thnx 4 the pm
can't wait 4 the next chapter
cant wait 4 taanis first day in college
plzzz post soon
😊
Edited by Taarey123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww, taarey's first meeting was adorable, I liked the whole paani chor thing lolll rofl!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar... i love these stories...
pls issme... koi tragedy mat laao at the ending...
i wud love to read love of taarey!
pls update soon!!

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