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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting promo
i think swayam friends will misbehave with ganga
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Swayam's friends' are doing something that even Swayam disapproves of😲
Waiting to see what they are up to
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Posted: 12 years ago
the story is really nice 😊

do pm me when u upgrade😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanayaluvzya

res
unres finally 😆
YAY ME 1ST, [LATE]
Woah! there, The Swayam...FURIOUS??????😲
Lol, i love possessive swayam😳
the promo is so interesting ❤️
i wonder whats going to happen next 😆
update soon hommie!!!!!


Ya first from down 😆
Well I like possessive swayam too ☺️ and as far as y he is like this n what happens next have to wait for the update for that 😃
N as far as "update soon" is considered look who is talking 😆
Will try to update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dollydua

the story is really nice 😊


do pm me when u upgrade😊

thanks dear and sure will pm you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys the update is here and sorry I didn't realize that I haven't mention Sharon at all in last part. So I have tried to put a small scene of her in the update for all those who missed her 😃

Part 7

Next morning Swayam goes and knocks Ganga's door as he was hungry and was ordering food and wanted to ask her if she needed something to eat. As he was knocking he smells food in the house and he follows the smell and reaches to the kitchen. He was shocked to see Ganga all ready and preparing breakfast. He felt bad for his behavior but his ego comes in the middle. He goes near her and asks in the firm tone "nashtay mein kitni dair hai." She gets scared as she didn't expect anybody there so she losses her balance and was about to fell but Swayam catches her by her waist. While Ganga holds him by his collars for support. And there we go; the same thing happens that happened at their first meet. He makes her stand and again she extends her hand and opens her fist showing the buttons in her hand. Swayam notices the buttons and then looks at his shirt's collar and gets irritated. "Why do you always break my buttons?" he said in an angry tone while holding part of his shirt that no longer had buttons. "maaf kar di jiye mei nei jaan booch k nahi kiya" she says with an innocent face and then continues "bas do minute aur."

He goes out and sits on the dining table still irritated and waits for the bf to get ready. She comes with a plate and takes out one paratha and keeps it in his plate and pours some sauces. He looks at it and makes a disgusted face and say "mei yah khao ga? Mujhe nahi khana." He stands up and was about to go but he felt a grip on his hand he turns around to find Ganga holding his hand as tightly as possible for her. He was shocked at first and then was numb fully after what he hears "baith (sit down) jaiye" she says in a firm tone. "maine kaha baith jaiye" she says it again and pulls him downwards to make him sit on his chair and then continues "khanay ka apmaan (insult) nahi karna chahiye". "Mu (mouth) kholiye" she says and makes a sound of opening mouth 'aaa'. He smiles at her cuteness though he couldn't see her face but it wasn't hard to feel her cuteness due to her actions and words. Unknowingly he opens his mouth and she puts one small piece of paratha with chutney (sauce) in his mouth. He then realizes what happened and was about to yell at her back but the taste of food stopped him. "Meray anay se pehle yeh sara paratha khatam ho jana chahiye samjhay?" she says and leaves as soon as she realizes what she had done in rage hiding her guilt in her angry tone. She goes and hides in kitchen while peeking out to see his reaction.

Swayam turns around and sees if she is there or not. When he doesn't find her, he starts eating the paratha with all the sauces she brought. He was enjoying it a lot which was apparent as he was making sound of hmmm and licking his fingers like he is going to eat them too. She was seeing with a big smile on her face. She went in the kitchen and started cleaning the kitchen. He comes and says "mei ja raha hoon duphair (afternoon) ka khana ghar pr khao ga aur meray kuch dost bhi aye gay toh khana zayada kar k banana theek hai?" "Ji" she replies and he notices that she didn't call him sahaab. He leaves from there with a little disappointment not knowing the reason for it.

By afternoon, Swayam and his friends come at the house and eat the food while praising the food and the cook. One of Swayam's friend says [okay I will number the friends as I can't think of names right now]

Friend 1: yaar jisne yeh khana banaya hai uska haath chumnay ka mann kar raha hai

Friend 2: sahi bol raha hai tu

Ganga who was pouring water in the glass for friend 3 spills water out of nervousness on him.

Friend 3: what the hell man? (He stands up with full on anger) Swayam what is this yaar? Kaise logon ko kaam per rakha hai kuch ata jata hi nahi hai

Swayam: (forming his fist and gritting his teethes) chill dude (realizing the nervousness of Ganga) jao andar jao kitchen ko saaf kardo yahaan aur koi kaam nahi hai (he says this signaling Ganga to go in and she goes in without saying anything) Dude relax it happens, sit.

Friend 3 sits with full on disappointment. Soon all got engrossed in talking and fun. Friend 3 stands up and goes to the kitchen as he was thirsty and didn't find any water around him. He enters the kitchen and sees Ganga working while her back was facing him. He sees her from up to down. Her back was revealing as her most of her veil was on her face. He saw her choli (blouse) and the doris on it. The lust in his eyes was apparent. He walked towards her and was about to touch her bare back but Ganga turned around in time. She was scared to death "aa… ap yahan kya kar rahay hai kuch chahiye?" she manages to say. "hmm chahiye toh hai (he pauses and takes a step closer to her poor Ganga couldn't take a step back as she was already touching the top of the kitchen counter and he continues) mujhe tum chahiye ho". He says this and was about to hold her from her hand but he saw someone else holding his hand. Ganga was crying silently and when she Swayam she started sobbing loudly. Swayam saw her and felt bad for her.

He then looks at his friend and says "tu apni hud (limit) par kar raha hai." "kya Swayam tu bhi na yeh toh sirf thoda maza kr…" friend 2 was defending him but stopped as he saw furious Swayam glaring at him. "meray ghar mein nahi" Swayam replies looking at all three of them. "tu ek nokrani k liye mujh se lar raha hai haa?" friend 3 asks him angrily. "iis ka naam Ganga hai tameez se" Swayam replies. "mei ja raha hoon tera dimaag kharab ho gaya hai waise toh khud her lardki k saath hota hai. I am sure iss k saath b ek raa…" before he could finish Swayam punches him. "Ganga ek bohot achi ladki hai us ka ghunghat (veil) dekh raha hai us ko dekhnay k baad b tum us k saath batameezi kaise kr skta hai aur tu kya jaey ga mei tujhe kehta hoon nikal ja meray ghar se. joh aurtoon (women) ki izzat nahi karta woh meray ghar mein ek pal b nahi rah sakta. Aur haan mein jin lardkiyon k saath hota hoon un ki koi moral nahi hota magar Ganga ka hai samjha. Ab nikal." He says this and points towards his door. All his friends leave from there he turns around and Ganga hugs him. She was crying her heart out and unknowingly seeing this state of Ganga, he hugs her back letting her feel secure.

She soon came out of her trance and breaks the hug and leaves from there. Leaving a shocked Swayam behind, he was totally confused that why he fought with his friends for her and why he hugged her back. She goes and shuts her room, panting and smiling a big smile as she was really happy and touched with Swayam's behavior.

Scene Shifts

Zzz Zzz the phone was buzzing for hours and she finally noticed it. She picked the call and with heavy breath she says "hello BM the phone was on silent sorry (making a cute face and saying in a sweetest voice ever) how are u?" "I am fine dear and how are you? And why are you breathing like this?" BM asked in a worried tone. "Hmmm… actually I was dancing that's why I am out of breath. You tell me, are you missing me?" Sharon replied trying to calm her breathing and BM as well. "Oh I see, well I miss you a lot and it looks like you don't and is really busy with your dance and friends" she said in a teasing tone. She bit her lips and says "I miss you a lot and never say that again (putting her one hand on her hip)". "Okay bacha I will not say again and now go enjoy your dance and say my Hi! to your best friends" BM replied calming Sharon down as it was her turn to do that. "Okay BM will talk to you soon take care and pass on your Hi to them" with this she cuts the call and drinks some water and again gets busy with her stuff.

*Part 7 Ends*

Ok guys it really hurts when I don't receive enough comments. It takes hours to write these updates so please at least write two to three lines telling me how it was. This is the only Swaron FF I write and I really want to write it and doesn't want to discontinue it 😭. So please all those who hit LIKES only please do COMMENT as well. Just two minutes, it will take only two minutes.

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was an awesome update...👏 loved swayam's attitude towards ganga bt pls yaar ab toh swaron ko mila do... cnt wait to read cute swaron moment update soon n do pm me

P.S Thanks for the PM😊
Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi...actually i m a silent reader f ur ff bt couldn't resist commenting today...it was a amazing update...u already mentioned tht ganga nd sharon r two different character otherwise i hd thght sharon s ganga...
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Originally posted by: smartypantstanu

it was an awesome update...👏 loved swayam's attitude towards ganga bt pls yaar ab toh swaron ko mila do... cnt wait to read cute swaron moment update soon n do pm me


P.S Thanks for the PM😊

thanks dear will update soon and hopefully next update will have swaron first encounter 😃
and you're welcome dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

Hi...actually i m a silent reader f ur ff bt couldn't resist commenting today...it was a amazing update...u already mentioned tht ganga nd sharon r two different character otherwise i hd thght sharon s ganga...

Thank you so much dear for commenting and please do that in future as well as it means a lot 😃
and thanks for liking the update 😊

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