MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 74

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

i m sorry for being late.. caught in AB's wedding thread n celebrations... will update this one within two days ..forsure

Chapter: 26

The ceremony was ended , with a small party having all the fun of dance, drinks happiness.. all around them.. they had the best of the time… echoing with their laughs and happiness.. it was all around them.. from the chapel they directing went to the reception area attached there…. They don't want a long wedding party it was just the tradition they have to follow..

They were dancing on the floor softly in each others arms… she being showered with kisses now or than.. he cant believe he can be so in urge of loving her…

Mayank: he spread his knuckle on her face… u made the most beautiful bride ever..

She smiled…everything sounds like pearls showering from the sky… awww.. how poetic nupur.. ur getting nuts.. but then My man.. yes my man is driving me crazy wht shall I do..

Nupur: flirting hubby…

The word hubby sound so magical to both of them and it made him breath along one to take in the effects it made …

Mayank: why I cant be cheeky with my wife.. cant I …

Nupur: no u cant.. Honesty is only allowed….

He raised his eyebrows pulling her more close

Mayank: u think I m not being honest on this part.. tht ur driving me crazy.. he said in husky voice.. lets go home than..i' ll prove u he said with a smirk.. to make her smile n blush…

It was time to go back home.. it was time to have sumtime with eachother… it was the time she was not thinking about..shrugging always this thought from her mind… it was the time she is scared he will get to know wht she lacks..

Samrat: OMG… where is Gunjan .. an alien invade her … OMG .. my girl my love.my babe where are u…

Gunjan: ghee… Samrat tht was such a lame one..

Mayank: are u okay gunjan..i actually agree with Samrat.. It's nothing like an alien invading in ur head n controlling u… we had a Christian wedding and nw wht are u trying to do…

Nupur who was looking in horror at gujan was laughing at the most horrifying expressions on Samrat n mayank's face… but tht was so true its unlike Gunjan so much ..trying sumthing Indian.. like welcoming a bride ..

Gunjan: I m trying to make u Indian

Mayank: waoo… so why are u not in saree..with ur head covered..

Gunjan/: don't even think I can b such… this was ur mother's orders tht like a good would be shrama I m following.. got it.. n I m not doing all of tht I cant just get she was saying… only the think I remembered was moving this platter 7 times.. and kick oof this golden pot….dhasssh…

Nupur: kalash Gunjan.. she chuckled at the way she was defining all this…

Gunjan: OMG … mom will be like wao with u… n whatever… shall I move this clock wise or anticlockwise…

Nupur: clockwise..

Gunjan: okay lets start.. count with me..

Both shramas and Gunjan did actually counted it loud and nupur cant help to laugh wht are they all… loveable so much..

Samrat: okay now.. ths will show how well u can kick ur hubby a*** on the count of three..

Nupur: oh god this is not for tht ..u guys are impossible…

Mayank: see my wife is so sweet she will never do such with me..

Nupur: did I said so…

Samrat: see I told u… ur go gone n gone now… history my brother..

Mayank: just do it nupur and make it end..

Gunjan: ya pls.. he has much more interesting thinks in his mind to do.. u wide up all this quick..

With shocking her head and smile n pray she kicked the kalash to welcome her new life…

Gunjan: nice shot…

Moving in she hugged nupur

Gunjan: welcum to our family.. have fun good nite…

She winked and a yawing Samrat tugged his hand with her left them alone to walk to their room…

Mayank: shll we..

She nodded and he let her move ahead..

There was smile on mayanks face tht was not leaving him.. these are same stairs tht he has walked with her so many time.. yet it all feel so different today all so much…

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He was impatiently waiting for her to come out after fleshing up… he cant help but to smile and feel a little nervous..excited and wht not and sum where he was feeling his cheeks boil to…… the moment she came out he freeze there.. everything disappear …it was just a gasp tht escaped his mouth

She has never wore any of her revealing cloths ever in front of him… she will always be in more cloths with him than with anyone.. she likes it.. she feel nice to know tht sumone is not interested in wht he see but wht he feel… but tonite whn she was wearing a white spaghetti strip gown she took his breath away… his gaze was burning her skin… there was a pin drop silence in the room the only voice tht can be heard was there rising heart beats and panting breaths… she touched her strip nervously she chuckled in her head she has been with man in nothing and tht hasn't effect her … and now it is… but than nobody has tht love n passion in there eys like him… but more of tht she was scared..

She was afraid whn she knew he will touch her, the more yes she wants tht the more she is afraid of the fact tht she might not be able to return it the way he may make her feel.. or maybe she might not feel anything unlike him… it was his first time and she has lost the count of hers.. it's the biggest fear she holds… when it cums to consummating there marriage… she doesn't know wht to do to make him feel sumthing.. she is so sure she isn't capable of tht…

He cant read it so clear wht she is thinking but sumhwere is so sure.. he doesn't know from where it has came, the though previously always use to shuddered him tht sumone has touched her the way he wants to… but then he knew one thing nobody has ever touch her the way he will.. and wants… its about their pleasure or rather there needs… there was nothing pure, bliss and seeking sumthing more deep thm that… it was never about making the other feel love… he is sure once he will be able to love her she will knew tht what evr she is thinking is just in her head.. its not on her soul.. they have never reached there… today he wants to reach there … he wants to reach the deepest he can into her… he want to reach the deepest cords of her soul… he want to revive evry dead cell in her… he wants her to feel alive… or maybe just feel…

The moment she feel sumthing burning her skin on her waist ..she gasp and cluthed to him tightly… he smiled.. he was sliding his hand slowing on her waist without letting her eyes to move away from him… he knew he is right the way with just a touch she has forgotten everything in her head they way she is holding him so tightly he knew… this she will remebre always as her frst time ..there frst time…

Sliding his fingers softly in her hairs.. he let her n him both feel the texture and movement….

Mayank: your picturesque…..his eyes were oozing out praise making her breath stop… his own voice was cuming breathless….

Slowly moving close to her not letting go off her eyes… who where shuting down slowly …. making patterns on her cheeks ….he just pecked her lips… teasing her.. making her gasp ..moving down to her neck and placing trail of feather kisses there… and moved back to her jaw line.. making her clutch more to him…they way her hands were moving on his neck was all tht ws needed to make his inhibitions n plans to went away with the passion taking over him… he moved his lips n he kissed her with all the love with all he has n want to pour today… he was desperate he was.. she was numb.. she wasn't.. she was feeling sumthing falling in pit of her stomach.. she was feeling so much inside her.. this was different the way he is kissing her.. it is different they way she is returning the gesture… he broke away to have alost nupur… who is lost in his passion and completely in his submission.. he let her fingers trail from her forehead to her neck. tracing her features….griping her there …moving down he kissed and nib her neck… he was not in a hurry … he was daam slow.. he was making it hard for her to even stand or have a hard grip on him… she was drowning … she hasn't felt anything such ever in her life… he was slowing letting her evry part know how much he loves her … with evry kiss tht was soft deep and expression… he was taking his time to worship her …

He placed her on the bed knowing the way her hands have droping on the side she cant even hold him now… she was just embedding inside her the feeling of being loved…

He moved his hand from her palms to her shoulder shurding her making her moan… she pulled him close spreading her hand on his back…his hands crawl to her shoulder while he was busy loving the other dropping the strip of her shoulder he let his lips do the talking showering his passion on her…

Mayank: I love u nupur… he said in a whispered breathless himself… before he want to make the final step ..

Nupur: I love u mayank…

She said it .. with all the love in her eyes she did said tht…she said it whn it was needed to be said..the best time evr to make him know tht .. he claimed her lips and kissed her and claimed her too with all the love he has in him… getting in return all the passion n love tht she thought she doent have in her … but she forgot tht he can bring out the nupur even she doesn't know existed in her…

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She want to hold back those tears tht were ready to shed, she doesn't want him to know tht she is crying, on the most beautiful day of her life she is crying but she isn't actually crying… she is shocked , she is shocked with herself, with the kinda desires he arose inside her, she is shocked with her soul tht is still trembling feeling the ecstasy slowing getting sink in her… she is shocked with the fact wht she felt wht she reached the edge… she is shocked with quakes tht she is still feeling in her body…

She shuddered at the word "body: wch she thought is so bruised and numb tht nobody evr will be able to wake up anything any sense in them… no body can make it feel anything.. it's a hard flesh coat tht protects her bones thts it… she nevr knew it will be a medium tht will make her feel worshiped by her man….

It feels like his hands, his lips, his touch his caress were magical .. no there weren't magic…she donot want to use such a untrue word for tht … it was occult …a supernatural touch… the touch of Jesus tht makes dead alive…. It was like as if it was ,the more he was cuming in contact with her the more he was making her alive… the desire, the feel, the drowning the craving, everything made her feel, believe it was really her frst time…

It wasn't sumhting cuming in and getting out…. As wht she has always felt under so many, but it was sumthing spiritual holy… it was sumthing like… like ..like weaving of love… it was her first time.. she had a slight smile on her lips… it was the frst time she made love … it was the first time her love loved her … it was them.. it was all the world.. it was there heaven weaved by him and than taking her into it… its enduring ….its sumthing bliss basking inside her soul ..

She moved close to him and kissed his neck deeply moving her lips there.. he sighed in his sleep and pecked her lips softly…sliding his hand in her hairs caressing them he embrace her completely in him.. she sumwhere was in aww of him.,… even in his deep sleep he hasn't forgot to make her feel loved…

If there was any thing like home.. it was here .. if there was anything like heaven on earth.. it was truly here in his arms…

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The end…….. no not actually

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Initially I thought to end it here but than I want to continue it … there are things tht she needs to feel n believe ..there much more thn this to her life she deserve … about this update being a little more open on words .. I cant help it as I need to write abt all wht nupur was thinking yet wht she actually felt… sorry if I made anyone uncomfortable with it..

Thank you all for all the Nominations specially those like faria n Goppi who even remembered GMYH ..thank you so much for honoring me always

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

it was ecstasy in true sence.
from d beginning of dis ff i usd tdn think how will u handle deir first night which will need detail of d feelings of every single touch.
n u did it best.u said it was bold.not for a single time i felt dat.though m apprehencive regarding bold scene or dlg.
lovd it.

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

beautiful update...
i felt each and every word...
this was sooo amazing chapter of their life :)