Hi guys ,
I was reading many fan fictions and after todays episode ….i totally lost intrest in the concept…. And thought of starting a small fiction of my own with new characters… and some old characters…
PART -1
Let us first get to know the characters before we go in further into a story.
I like to keep as few characters as far as the story is conserned but…. I have not yet decided, there would be some characters being added depending on need of story.
Shiv : the good business man and very handsome and dashing young man of 29 years who has lost his life after death of his wife and just living for his children who are quite mischevious and keep him on his toe all the time .
He was a very lively and very energetic when he was with his wife…but god did have some thing else in store for him so all this…. He is angry on god and doesnot care for anything much.
He wants to live with his children in the same house which his wife made with love where as his parents live a little far from them but dada and dadi are there to help him with his little kids along with his wifes brother…pranav.
He is a very good person at heart…and has no bad habits.. like drinking or..smoking or any other..hbbits..
He got married when he was 25 years and ganga was 23 years.
Ganga : shiv's first wife ..she is the cutest person ..and is the most loved by shiv, they had an arranged marriage and age is 27.
Ganga has two kids : akash is the boy and anjali is the girl.
Due to some accident that took place by accident when they went to ooty ganga is no more.
Akash : the little boy of 3 and years
Anjali : the little girl of 2 years.
Shivs parents : I keep them same as in serial mahen and nikhila.
Shivs dada and dadi as in the serial.
Shiv has friends named Rahul and Arjun who have their on companies and their own life style.
And all his relatives I shall reveal as the story continues…
Ganga: She has a mother and father and a brother Pranav, who lives with shiv now and is joyfully playing with kids and doing his office work at a software company. Where as his mother father live in some town quite far from all of them and they keep visiting them for festivals and occasions.
Ganga was a very lively person and when she was there every one wanted to be at their home, and shiv was always mischevious with her always trying to kiss her or hug her when she was busy working, she was happy with kids and there are so many pictures of hers and shivs and kids playing around the house framed.
Now,
Coming back to reality…. Shiv is sad and does hardly laugh at anything and just plays with kids and keeps himself busy with work and kids and trying to forget that bad day he lost his life.
All the other family members try to cheer him up, try to help him with things and try to fill in that gap that was formed because ganga has left them.
It has been 1 year since ganga is gone… and slowly the children were being neglected by shiv as he was loosing interest in things and like the flowers in the garden that were planted by ganga which were not taken care off… and hence are now getting spoilt… the kids too are missing their moms touch and her pampering a lot… and this being noticed by the dada dadi …they are trying to convince shiv to marry again atleast for the kids but shiv is adamant on not marrying again… as he cannot forget ganga and willnot be able to accept another women in her place and he also feels that after marriage the girl that comes will have expectations and she would want her own children and would not take care of Akash and Anjali and he has no more intrest in marital things or he doesnot want to try that again because he's afraid of something which he too does not know .. may be trying to love some one and loosing them again…. After years of courtship…..
So, now the kids have fallen sick and are totaly on bed and they were shown to their family doctor and he has said that the children are missing the warmth and affection of mother and even shiv should try and take more time for them… and everything would go well if he try to bring someone who would give them that love… as children offen spoil when they are left like this… with out any affection and any touch of softness….and what ever shiv may do he maynot make it up to their mother… because their mother would be their mother….
So, all the family members mahen, nikhila, gangas parents and pranav and shiv are all sitting and having a discussion on what to do next…. For the kids to become all right…all try and persuade shiv saying that he should get married…. And this would give him some comfort and also kids a mother… and at last shiv says that he is not interested but if his kids can get better he is ready to do anything… but he wishes to talk to the girl once they select one… once before marriage and then they can go for it….
So, the dada and dadi and nikhila and mahen and gangas parents and pranav go and meet different girls and see lots of pictures but they are not satisfied… so, at last dadi thinks of someone … and she tells everyone and they say this is good but would alok ji accept for this…
Please leave your comments so that it would encourage me and also tell me how the starting of the story is…
Please leave your comments….
Thank you.
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PART-2
So, dada and dadi go to meet a person called alokji at home and discuss things and then we come to know that he has a daughter who is Gauri, and dada and dadi want her to be married to our shiv…. But alok says….i cannot say yes unless my daughter approves…of it…and I want you to talk to her…and dada dadi say… that's what even we wish to do….. we want to talk to gauri and if it is yes even after what we say..then shiv wants to talk to her and then only if both are ok then we will think of marriage….
So alokji is convinced…. And they call gauri….. alokji rises his voice a little and calls…. "Gauri beta…." And there comes an answer…. "ji..baba…"
Alokji .. "zarayahatho aaana…" gauri says… "ayeee baba….".
Gauri: the next important character in my FF…. she is a girl of 24 and she has finished her studies as a engineering student… and is presently working for a company as a software programmer but is more interested in making a house than working… so she thinks of quiting the job once she is married and take care of the house… and all house hold things…
The other characters for gauri and her relatives I shall add when required…as I am still to make the story… there are already so many charactere that it becomes confusing..in the story line if there are more number of characters…
Now, coming back to present:
later there is a scene where gauri comes and sees dada dadi and goes to take their ashirwad and asks them how they are… and how is everyone and then they have all the fine talk after which… dadi says… " hum aaj yehan ..ek badi ummid say aye hai beta…" and gauri…is confused and looks at alokji who just looks at her and says that just listen to what they have to say….
Dada and dadi say her that they have come here to ask her to marry shiv if every thing goes well between shiv and her after and this would be only after she is ready… and that it would be a great responsibility as she would have to take care of 2 kids from when she gets married… and it is not something they are forcing on her but they do not want to hurt her in anyway..but.. they were thinking that since she knows them and she is an understanding kid … they have come to ask her….
After explaining everything …gauri says… " mujhe thoda waqt chahiye dadimaa…" .. "meiyn abhi kuch nahi kehsakthi..hoo…" so dada and dadi says takeyour time and don't think that we would feel bad if it is a NO… and they take leave and go…
Gauri is thinking …. About what dada and dadi… have told and is very tensed… then she thinks whats important in life and whats important in marriage… and she thinks that….if I marry some one else and if he cannot undersand then where will she go… as she doesnot even know that persons family members… where as here she knows dada and dadi and also nikhila aunty and mahen uncle and the only unknown person would be shiv to her… and thinking of kids… she thought that…if her answere is yes… then she wanted to spend sometime with them and wanted them to recognize her… and wanted to know if they would be able to accept her as their mother…because if she cannot full fill that then all the family would fall apart after marriage and she did not want that to happen…
Gauri had never imagined herself to be very beautiful or very intelligent and always thought that she would have a normal life like every other normal girl like marriying a boy who can provide her with good things but she never expected excellent things to happen out of a blue… so she did not much consider the importance of the boy… or his looks but… she wanted him to be able to express any feeling to her…. Who is very expressive… and who trys to understand her… and keep her happy…..
She wanted like any other girl of her town to marry and then make tea/coffee for her husband daily in the morning..and do all the cooking and pack things for him and then freshen up and do puja and keep house neat and clean and then get ready by evening looking fresh for the husband to love her… and then have dinner and then have lovey-dovey talk and then talk about days things and sleep in each once arms…
But, she doesnot know if this realation would give her all those things… and she was really confused about the marriage..too..
What would gauri's decision be😊??? Would she marry shiv ?? or whould she not???
Wait for the next part…..
Please leave your comments so that it would encourage me and also tell me how the starting of the story is…
Please leave your comments….
Thank you all
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