SS: Qubool hai. NEW UPDATE pg10 (25/7/13)

Hi guyyz!!!
Im Sumaya...
I mostly write in Arjun forum.
But recently i have fallen too much in love with QH n Asad n Zoya.
I have this thing in mind,
do i proceed??
I wana name it "Qubool Hai"

guyz plz comnt n let me know.
guyz i wana be a permanent member to this forum...
So those of u who will want PMs
Plz add me to ur buddylist,
or hit like.


am updating now!!

Index

pg1
pg5
pg7
pg8
pg10

P.S very sorry for any typing mistakes.
plz excuse it. 😳

She stood there by the window,
staring at the moon and let those tears fall...
She seethed in anger...
Oh how she wanted to rip that Tanveer's head!!
She was the cause of all Zoya's problem!!
She was busy in her thoughts when someone knocked...
she wiped her tears and opened the door...

Oh! there he stood, looking all handsome clad in a white kurta...
She returned to the window.
With her back to him.

"Jo bolna hai, jaldi boliye, i need to sleep."

"um.. Wo... Uh"
He stamerred.

"Oh! Allah Miyan!
if im not mistaken, its The great Mr. Asad ahmad Khan stamering."

He knew not how to reply.
she continued.

"Oh! So sad!
Mr. Khan has forgotten how to talk, but lagta hai, jammy ko bohot bolna aata hai,
especialy jab unki 'Tanu' unke baaho mei ho.
Wah! Perfect couple, nahi?
Par kya karen dono k beech, kabab mein haddi jaise Zoya musibat agayi nahi, ab bichare kya karen chup chup k ek dusre k baaho mein ghus jaate hai nahi?"

"Thats enough!
bohot bol chuki aap Ms. Faruqi. Tanu ko dosh na dey, she is inocent."

she looked at him incredulously.

"Oh! hell i care about her inocenc Mr. Khan, Raat k derh baje being in a strangers arms doesnt prove innocence"

She screamed,
tears descending all the while.

"I am her friend not a stranger."

"And i am Ur Fiancee for god's sake, kal ko hamara nikah hai,
aur aaj raat aap uski baaho mei.
Wah re wah.
Mera to hath tak nahi pakra,
aur wo baaho me?
Kya pata kal bed..-"

before she could finish; HE SLAPS HER.

"Dont you dare Ms. Farooqui, ek aur lavz bhi nahi."

Saying so he storms out of the room.
She slumps on the floor,
crying...
He goes to his room and under the shower to calm himself.
He wanted to rip his own head for slapping her.

Both are in emotional dilemna...

BGM

Pyaar hai, ya saza,
Ae mere dil bata,
toot ta kyu nahi,
dard ka silsila...
Iss pyaar me ho kaise kaise imteha..
ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastan.

Koi naa sune,
sisakti aaho ko,
koi na dhare tarapti baaho ko...

Ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar dilbar pe ho na koi asar...

Next day, their big day;

Since morning there was a buzz of activity with Dilshad and Tamatar running to and fro...
to get Asad and Zoya ready.
Tamatar was jumping from Asad's to Zoya's room every 5 min...
she noticed that both were gloomy...
Tamatar- "Kya yaar nikah karne jaarahe ap dono, shaheed hone nahi!"
Zoya mutters
"Shaheed ho jaate to acha hota."

Tamatar- "Bhabijaan!! Kya bolri ho aap bhi,
aap dulhan ho,
Aaj to aapko bohot khush hona chahiye,
jis insanse aap beshumar pyaar karti hai,
wohi aapke shauhar banne jaarahe hai."

Zoya- "Khush to hu Najma...
Par shayad meri khushiya meri kareeb nahi aana chahti, Khair..."

Najma shakes her head unable to comprehend it,
she lets the matter lie.

In Asad's room;

Ayaan was tying the Sehra over Asad's turban.

Ayaan- "Ye lo bhaijan, bandh gaya aapka sehra!
Aap Bhabi aapka muh nhi dekh payengi."

Asad - "Acha hai, wese bhi muh dikhane ke layak nahi raha."

He was still brooding on the past incidence.

-
The Maulvi called the Dulha Dulhan down to be married.
A

Asad and Zoya come down the stairs with Ayaan & Najma at their sides respctivly.

They seated in such a manner that they would face eachother but their was a veil in between.

The Maulvi started the rituals.
he fixed the
"Deyn Mohar" and then turned to Asad.

"janab Asad Ahmed Khan, kya aapko mohtarma Zoya Farooqi ke sath Nikkah Qubool hai?"

Asad- "Ji Qubool hai"

Maulvi saab then turned to Zoya,

"mohtarma Zoya Farooqi, kya aap janab Asad Ahmed Khan ko apna shauhar Qubool kari hai?"

Zoya- "Qubool"

Maulvi saab then declared them husband wife.

Dilshad hurriedly offered everyone sweets;
Their was celebration in the air,
and here Asad & Zoya were constantly looking at eachother from the corner of their eyes.

Everyone then gathered at the grand feast.

Zeenat & Najma decided to pull the newly-weds' legs.

Zeenat- "Dilshad phupi, hamare yaha ek riwaaj hai, k dawat ka pehla niwala, Dulha apne haathse Dulhan ko khilata hai."

Najma grinnd & poked-
"Khilaiye na Bhaijan... Apne hatho se"

all women giggled...

"Ohho dulhemiya khilaiye na!!
Dekhie hamare zoya k muh me pani aaraha hai."
teased Anwar.

Asad was quite flabbergasted at the fact that even Anwar -
(oops, now jiju)
could tease.

He always seemed a sober man,
thought Asad.

well he hesitantly took a spoonful to her mouth.
she opened her mouth and let him feed her.
everyone clapped.

After everyone had had food,
The guests blessed the couple and left.

but it was quite late when Zeenat & Anwar decided to retire...

Zeenat: acha phoopi! Ab hame bhi jaane ki ijazat dije...
Dilshad: kya Zeenat! Rukjao na yahi par, Anwar! Aap hi samjhaiye na!!

Anwar: Zeenu sahi kahrahi hai, hame chalna chahie.
Dilshad: par Anwar! Ye-
he cut her off
Anwar: nahi phoopi... Kal tak to ye hamari phoopi ka ghar tha, aaj apni Zoya ka sasural hai... Hame jaane deyn!!

Dilshad knew that they wouldnt budge! So she let it be.

"theek hai Anwar! Aaj jane de rahi hu, kal ko nahi dungi."
at that everyone laughed...
Then the huggin & formal bye's were exchanged;
When...


C pg5

That was wonderful!!!!!!! please continue soon

When r u gonna upload the next chapter? It's been ages.

It was really gud plz continue