SS: Qubool hai. NEW UPDATE pg10 (25/7/13) - Page 3

Thank u ppl for ur likes & comnts.
I realy realy realy am overwhelmd that u ppl liked it...

@ webuser7 ,
Sophisticatedxx ,
Curiousmind ,

now u 3...
I just owe u ppl special thanx n a huge bear hug!!!!
The reason is,
that u comented very honestly,
which i appreciate very much!!

Now about the 'Slap' part...,
I wrote it in a whim without planning n proof-reading...

A very bad habit that i have is...
im quite whimsical AND lazy,

i get a cncept n i start writing;
n thats the main problm.

But at the moment i think its time to turn it into an SS;
DO U PPL AGREE??
P.S
@ webuser7
zoya wont leave Asad, but she wil surely answr bac.
I am trying to pop in some drama and make use of the slap for them to reunite.
But then Asad HAS to Pamper his princes to get 'MAFI'


i am very much unsure how to end it.

SUGGESTIONS PLZ

Imp. P.S

The romance wala updt will be dedicated to Mariajamal!!! 😃

*Claps*

Thanks dear:-) ... Just cont ur ss with last post where u end it... And i think the slap idea is good he is short temper and nw he is regreting with his behaviour... U shud make the scene like tht... Zoya is in the room... And asad came but too embaressed with his behaviour and try to apology to her... But she ignored him and go to change her dress... And he think about how to manofy his princess something like...;-).

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

Thank u ppl for ur likes & comnts.
I realy realy realy am overwhelmd that u ppl liked it...

@ webuser7 ,
Sophisticatedxx ,
Curiousmind ,

now u 3...
I just owe u ppl special thanx n a huge bear hug!!!!
The reason is,
that u comented very honestly,
which i appreciate very much!!

Now about the 'Slap' part...,
I wrote it in a whim without planning n proof-reading...

A very bad habit that i have is...
im quite whimsical AND lazy,

i get a cncept n i start writing;
n thats the main problm.

But at the moment i think its time to turn it into an SS;
DO U PPL AGREE??
P.S
@ webuser7
zoya wont leave Asad, but she wil surely answr bac.
I am trying to pop in some drama and make use of the slap for them to reunite.
But then Asad HAS to Pamper his princes to get 'MAFI'


i am very much unsure how to end it.

SUGGESTIONS PLZ

Imp. P.S

The romance wala updt will be dedicated to Mariajamal!!! 😃

*Claps*

😕 🥱

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

Thank u ppl for ur likes & comnts.
I realy realy realy am overwhelmd that u ppl liked it...

@ webuser7 ,
Sophisticatedxx ,
Curiousmind ,

now u 3...
I just owe u ppl special thanx n a huge bear hug!!!!
The reason is,
that u comented very honestly,
which i appreciate very much!!

Now about the 'Slap' part...,
I wrote it in a whim without planning n proof-reading...

A very bad habit that i have is...
im quite whimsical AND lazy,

i get a cncept n i start writing;
n thats the main problm.

But at the moment i think its time to turn it into an SS;
DO U PPL AGREE??
P.S
@ webuser7
zoya wont leave Asad, but she wil surely answr bac.
I am trying to pop in some drama and make use of the slap for them to reunite.
But then Asad HAS to Pamper his princes to get 'MAFI'


i am very much unsure how to end it.

SUGGESTIONS PLZ

Imp. P.S

The romance wala updt will be dedicated to Mariajamal!!! 😃

*Claps*

Great story update next part soon plz

I agree with webuser7 and the other two about the slap. But I can also see why it could happen. His anger has been known to get the best of him.

conti from pg1

As the 'bye's were exchanged, the infamous lump in her throat returned and before she knew it, she went crashing to her Aapi's chest and sobbed her heart out.

They were all shocked to see Zoya in that state,
a minute before she was smiling and chatting,
little did they know,
that it was nothing but a facade,
to hide the pain she was going through,
but now...
the thought of her Aapi leaving,
brought back all her insecurities and emotional traumas out as those tears...

She sobbed & cried,
"Aapi!! Aapi!!"
"Ssh! Ssh!! Beta, beta ro kyu rahi ho!!
Ssh! Mat roe bachcha!! Dekho yaha phoopi hai, Najma hai, aur Asad bhi hai na!! Sab tumse kitna pyaar karte hai."
Zeenat tried in consoling Zoya..
and after what seemed like ages,
her tears finaly subsided;

Zeenat & Anwar were looking at her with a worried expression.

Dilshad took over Zoya in her arms & reassured them;
"Zeenat, Anwar, tension mat lo, Zoya to meri bachchi hai, use yaha kaisi problem!!
tumlog befikar hoke jao..."

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Relaxed at Dilshad's reassurance, AND with another round of "Khuda Hafiz"s, finaly
Zeenat & Anwar left.
But stil Zoya was vulnerable and in shock.
Shocked bcoz she hadnt expected herself to break down in front of her Aapi, Jiju and Phoopi-
'Phoopi!! What must she be thinking of me!!' thought Zoya.

"Ph.. Phuppi!!" she called out to Dilshad, who was instructing Najma about something.

hearing Zoya call her she went and gave her a hug, and said teasingly,
"Kaun phoopi? Mai to Ammi hui na!?"
at that Zoya smiled.
"Ji ph- Ji Ammi."

Dilshad beamed & Tamatar came running and engulfed her Bhabi in a tight bear hug.

In a corner of the room he stood, Smiling & watching his most beloved ladies.

And in another corner, another woman was twisting her dupatta and seething in rage, and cursing this happy union And Zoya.

"Haramzadi!! Kitna kuch nahi kia tujhe Asad ki zindagi se dafa karne k liye!!
Ban hi gayi na uski begum tu!!
Par bad-dua lagegi tujhe meri!!
Baddua!"
she was mentally screaming.
she'd been defeated!!

NOTE!!

hey ppl!!
ok so only those who liked & comntd so far are getting pms.
and im sorry for short updates...

P.S realy sory for Using the "Gali"
but kya karein? I had to, to emphasis it more clearly.

Awww poor zoya...:-( but i guess nw her happy days cummin... :-)

hey