MG FF ESSENCE OF LOVE-TREAD-1/PART-2/PGNO-4/7-04-2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part:-2

The journey to Sreenagar is a very beautiful as most of the journey through Kashmir vally.One side the river Chinab and the otherside high mountains filled with tall tall trees extending to the skies . The journey is marvelous and enchanting. [The bus will passes through the Jawahar tunnel which is 2kms long and secong longest in India]..But our Geet is not at all enjoying the beautiful scenery .She is hell worried for maanas he is travelling by standing in the bus. She even got up and offered him her seat and told she will stand.But maan warned her and told her that he will adjust somewhere.but geet is notatall convinced and worried for him seeing her worry he went and sat on bonetand waved his handsaying he is fine. Geet sighed in relief.

Maans st:- he wondered how much she get worry to others ' such me kitna parwah kartihai ye dusero kelie'he thought. He remembered her dauters worry about her a small smile appeared on his lips. His eyes unknowingly started to observe her keenlywhen she was not seeing him.[here I want to give description of geet but poor in so I left it to valli].she wore asiple cotton saree simple ear studs and small teeka on her forehead.she is looking very simple and elegant. Ther is something spl in her he thought wat is it?Haa yes her eyes ..omg ..they are mirrors of her soul they speek volumes he thought.

Throughout the journey he observed her glancingunknownto himself.Now she is enjoying the scenerythrough the window.The bus stopped for lunch ther they meet her bus Maan told her about the bus andthanked himmany times and went to her bus.after lunch when the 2buses are about to start some one in geets bus wanted to change the bus but the guide said no empty seat in the other bus maan heard this and told him that he will go to the other bus .He took his luggage and went to geets bus.Geet saw him with luggage and surprised.

He smiled and told her about the exchange of buses

He mocked her 'ab waadw kiyatho nibhana padegana'?. Geet asked cofusely 'kosa waada'?He told aap ko samalneka waada.he replied. Geet appolizedhim by saying that she is giving him troubleto him he said not at all.At evening 8'o'cl they reachedto sreenagar. They got checkin to hotel and got freshend and had dinner at dinner again they met and smiled at each other.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update
geet worries for every one...
her daughter asked maan to take care of her...
maan teasing geet
wada kiya hai to nivana hi padega 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update. so finally maan and geet are in one bus here.

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