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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Aww lovely update. This FF is cute and Khushi's at her chirpy best.

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

I m wondering my superstar(not)Sanaya~~~~was this depth always there in your writings or is it developed lately??😛

This hilarious SS has turned into a toching one~~

~~Arnav & khushi r feeling differently for each other~~

~~they share the same pain of losing ones parents~~but with the difference that Arnav is aloof and Khushi is full of life~~

Awww ~~ they need each other !!! but is it possible???

Tu hi bata mere maula,tu hi bata mere rabba

Tu hi bata meri supestar,tu hi bata(not)Sanaya 😉😆

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Just read all four chapters of this story.

Love this Mismatched couple.

Hope they both listen to the young girl and get married to each other.

Loved the Hospital Hug.

You wrote and described their feelings very well in this scene.

The part describing Arnav's past was also essential to the story.

Now that Arnav knows that Khushi too lost her parents when she was young, it should bring them closer.

Waiting for the update.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

hey there new reader on board...and its been an awesome read so far...
i really loved all the chapters...each chapter has been really fun filled...i love the way their relationship is progressing...
i cant wait to read more of this one...update soon.. :)

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Hey meri pyaari Deedu!

I've finally managed to read the whole FF in a go! Maine aaj tak nahi padha tha but since you have told me to read it and had dedicated the last chapter to me.. I was too eager to read it!

Prologue was so cute.. How different the 2 are from each other! Just like chalk and cheese! Khushi's convo was so adorable with Payal scolding Khushi and calling her 'besharm'.. 😆 And Arnav... shy guy.. 😳 This love story is something i'm gonna look forward to! They met and the marriage alliance fixed already! 😲 AB MAZZA AAYEGA! 😉

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Part 1 was A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E. ❤️ Finally they went for the OFFICIAL DATE! Hate at First Meet! 😆 Arnav's Huh.. Excuse Me's and What the's se to main bhi pareshaan hu! Thoda aur bola karu Arnav! I mean.. Khushi jitna nahi.. But a little more! 😛 So final decision that you don't wanna get married to each other? 🤔 Okay.. Let's see further! 😃

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Part 2 was WOW! Akash and Payal trick Arnav and Khushi into a meeting and Arnav unfortunately yet fortunately crashed into an Aunty and there goes our Jahnsi ki Rani! 😉

"Naa.. nai aati sharam. Yeh mere honewale pati hai. me jo chahu bulaau.. aapko isse kya?"

Ultimate line di! Dil khush kar diya.. And Arnav's expressions were worth a million! 🤣 Misunderstandings are over! She knows why he agreed! Payal is PREGNANT!!! ROFL! 🤣 WHAT heck of a CONFUSION! 😆

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Part 3 was HILARIOUS! 😆 The convo between Arnav-Khushi about Protection! 🤣 The whole PREGNANCY situation was HILARIOUS! 🤣 The temple scene was really sweet! Arnav and the little girl's conversation was Aww-licious!

"But no girl wants to marry me because I am boring. I don't talk much" He pouted shrugging his shoulders..

"Then.. find a girl who is funny & does lot of masti like me. She will talk & you listen.."

There already is a girl for you Arnav! 😳 Who is listening to this conversation!

OMG!!! Khushi's RABBA VEY was KILLER! HAHAHAHAHA!!!! 🤣

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Finally to the Part which you dedicated to me! 🤗PART 4

Mrina is a sweet cute crazy lil sister. Love her craziness. 😳 🤗

Thank you Thank you! ^^^ *PROUD*

Part 4 was so emotional! Arnav's past revelation of the past was so beautifully written! The way Khushi hugged Arnav when she saw him in the hospital was so real.. Arnav not understanding how to console her!

Arnav paid for Shashi ji's medical expenses! Such a nice guy! Garima is totally in for Arnav to be her damad! Well who won't?

Khushi revealed her Past to Arnav and thanked him for all what he has done for her family and Arnav felt a connection!

Arnav's heart pricked at her agony. She was orphan too.. but one can never say that she has been through so much looking at her cheerful persona. She always chirped and smiled and made the atmosphere around her happy just like her name. He felt awed at her for being so strong and positive in life. He was at loss of words to reply.. but managed to say with difficulty..

This ^^^ was such a beautifully written paragraph di! ❤️

Now they decided to delay telling there families that they do not wish to marry each other! But i guess life has something else in store for them.. Before they tell their families about their decision, I pray they fall in love!

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Continue super soon di..

Loved it to the core.. ❤️

Thank you for this SUPER DUPER FF! 🤗

Love you,

Mrina

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Ab to update de do, Mji.

Waiting.

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

NIDS

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This update completely took me back to IPK days. Buaji, Garima, Arnav feeling out of place at the Gupta house, the madness, the never ending noises of the household, Arnav spilling tea on his shirt, slipping and falling and the massage.

I just loved it!! Your Khushi cracks me up, I always have a big smile one my face when i'm reading her parts, I love how she stumps Arnav, but now he's starting to understand her, great transition in their relationship.

Loved it!

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Unres...

OMG!!!!!!!!! i did not realise that i was on the irst page at the second place when I re'd d spot!!!!

Only now I saw dat... yayy... 😉 😃

Well coming to the story, ur stories always bring a smile on my face, irrespective of how tiring or hopeless my day might be!!!! 👏 👏 👏

I love your stories, not only because they have a funny side to them, but more so because they make my day... The way u write, d dialogues and the characters are just amazing...

Coming to the update, it was as usual fantastic... especially the last line summarized the entire update!!!!!! 👏 👍🏼 ❤️

khushi is lost in her own happy world now that her dad is fine n back home... that reflected in the carefree way she was laughing and pulling arnav's leg!!!!!!!

n arnav was happy to see her happy!!!! now dats some development in the *dil k mamla*!!!!!! 🤬 🥳

Throughout the entire update, i was reminisce the something from the days gone by!!!! arnav's stay at gupta house!!! those days reflected the same chaos and pandemonium at the guptas and also the way he was trying to adjust to his surroundings and was trying very hard to rein in those feelings he was discovering... 👏 🤗

d way arnav was feeling hassled with the *hai re nand kissores* n stuff, d reason he wnated to run away the moment he entered gupta house was just perfectly written!!!!!

too good... ❤️

Edited by shutter - 12 years ago