OS: Bijli gayi gumne aur dono lage jumne!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amit's concern for Amita made me giggle.😆 For gods sake! Amitji, woh apne ghar pe hain aur vahan koi khayi ya khadda nahi hain! Phir etani fikir??? But why complain, after all we got our much awaited eye locks and romantic scenes.Last night I wrote a small OS. So presenting this scene in filmi andaj.😉

OS: Bijli gayi gumne aur dono lage jumne!


Opening scene:
Curtains raise. Bijli rani gayi gumne! And a heart wrenching shriek from Juliet!

Romeo: (Worried) Juliet! Oh my beloved, are you hurt? Wait don't move, I'll come and sweep you off your feet! (Romeo searches for his white horse and starts galloping towards his beloved.)
Audience: Arre yaar, ek hi tho room hain , phir horse ki kya jarurat hain???
Director: Retake!

Romeo tries to run towards his beloved (Juliet) but fumbles, tumbles and falls. (Thinking : OMG! it is so dark and can't see anything. I don't even know the way. You see yeh mera ghar nahi hain na! Juliet ka hain! )
Juliet: Swami, aap teek tho hain na !
Romeo: (Embarrassed) Woh mera horse gir gaya tha! Bechara nayi jagah hain na ,dekh nahi paya!
Juliet : Kitna time laga rahe ho aap ?
Romeo : Aya priye ! Aya ! (Suddenly he remembers the gadgets gifted to him JB)
Audience: Ab yeh JB kuan hain?? 🤔
Director : Kaise audience ho JB ko bhi nahi jante? JB yane ....My name is bond ....James bond.😎

Romeo : (Stylishly he removes his night vision goggles and wears it 😎(BG: James bond music) and goes near his beloved)
Juliet : Is it you? Suraj '..Oops I mean Swami, Romeo?
Romeo : (Angry) Abhi tak tum uske khwab dekh rahi ho ??😡
Juliet : Sorry Swami , galti se missshhhtake ho gaya ! 😛
Director: (Yells) Scene pe concentrate karo!

Romeo: (Takes Juliet's komal makmali hath in his hands and is about to glide into the dream world. Suddenly gets one doubt)
Juliet : (Lowers her eyelids and is blushing)☺️
Romeo : (To director : Accha ek doubt hain ! Dream sequence ke liye Kashmir jana hain ya Switzerland??)
Director: Woh background mein badh mein dal donga ! (Yells again) tum scene pe concentrate karo!


Back to the scene
Romeo : I get lost in your eyes , And I feel my spirits rise , And soar like the wind.. Is it love that I am in? 😳
Juliet : (Is silent)
Romeo : Kya hua priye ? Tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahi ho?
Juliet : Andhera hain na ! Kuch dikh nahi raha !
Romeo : Tik hain mein dream sequence mein candle jala detha hun ! (Lights candles around them)
Juliet : Ab teek hain ! (Blushes)
Juliet : Haan tum kya keh rahe the??
Romeo : (repeats the statements)
Juliet : (Is silent)
Romeo : (Irritated) Ab kya hua ?
Juliet : Ab aapka night vision goggles bech mein aa raha hain!
Romeo : (Grrr''😡 removes it and throws it away ! Night vision goggles ke thukade thukade ho gaye! )
James bond : (Sees this through his magic glass and is hurt. Cribs: Ladki ko dekha tho etane salon ki dosti bhuladiya ??😭 )


Back to the scene

Juliet: (Is blushing)
Romeo: I get lost in your eyes , And I feel my spirits rise , And soar like the wind.. Is it love that I am in?
Juliet : Woh mein aapko puchna chahthi thi aapke aakon ka rang kuansa hain ? Brown ya Green? Woh aapne etane dinose chasma pehna tha na ! Teek se dikha nahi!
Director:(Cries ! )Scene pe concentrate karo yaar! 🤢 Chalo dance sequence hi karlo !


Back to the scene

Finally Romeo takes Juliet in his arms and they start their dance. Lost in each other's beautiful deep eyes they both glide away into an unknown enchanting world. With butterflies in their stomach and melting in each other's arms, both are equally aware what effect it makes on the other. All they could hear was melodious music and each other's heart beats!
❤️❤️❤️

BG :
Aankhon mein ankhen teri.
Bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujh mein kuch raha hua kya
Baaton mein baatein teri
Raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya hua kya'.
Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi'..

Director: (Yells) CUT! (Bijli rani gumke wapas bhi aa gayi!)

But Romeo and Juliet neither see the beautiful lights nor do they hear the director's shout and are so mesmerized in their dance that even the audience are captivated and awe-struck at the their scintillating chemistry. Even they couldn't take their eyes off this love smitten couple and were enjoying this enthralling experience! ❤️
❤️❤️

Scene ends. Curtains fall.

Hit on like if you like the OS . Aur thoda feedback bhi chalega ! 😛
Edited by emeraldeye - 12 years ago

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emeraldeye thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys any feedback on this ?? 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I totally enjoyed your OS...
especially the JB(James bond wala scene)😆😆😆
My name is bond james bond😎😆😆😆😆😆😆

And the scene where he throws JB's goggles and JB cries...😆😆😆😆😆😆
And the scene where Juliet asks about the color of his eyes and the director is totally lost his temper...😛
Romeo : Kya hua priye ? Tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahi ho?
Juliet : Andhera hain na ! Kuch dikh nahi raha !

I enjoyed this scene...Kya comedy timing hai👏

Finally i started my day with a smile thanks for this wonderful OS...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@nan6: Thanks for the feedback nanditha!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Romeo : (To director : Accha ek doubt hain ! Dream sequence ke liye Kashmir jana hain ya Switzerland??)🤣🤣🤣

i will write my opinion when i will stop laughing... heee heee... but i have this... 👏👏👏👏👏

so nicely writtten... enjoyed it more than the episode itself... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: grintson

Romeo : (To director : Accha ek doubt hain ! Dream sequence ke liye Kashmir jana hain ya Switzerland??)🤣🤣🤣


i will write my opinion when i will stop laughing... heee heee... but i have this... 👏

so nicely writtten... enjoyed it more than the episode itself... 😃

Thanks for the appreciation dear.😳

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