MG ff 'Best Friends' Part 13 Updated - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww fattu maan hilarious gr8 part
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amazing update...
geet ready fr marriage...
loved it...
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Awesome story
i hv read all prts in one go n loved it
waiting fr nxt updt cont soon
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waiting continue soon 😃
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Part 13

Maan – (holding her wrist) agar tu hamesha aise hi khush rehna ka promiss kre to me ye b sehne ko ready hun..

Geet- Me tuzse ek bat kahun ... Plez don't get angry or hurt...

Maan – Angel hamare beech me ye formalities kab se hone lagi ??? bol na ...

Geet- Maan tu ek bar fir is bare me soch le ...

Maan-(confused) Kis bare me geet???

Geet- Maan .. i m not ur type of girl...tuze to hamesha samazdar suljhi hui ladkiyan pasand aati thin na vo Hum saath saath hain ki sonali bendre types ya fir Vivah ki amrita rao jese koi ... i am sooo different from them wo mumma kya kehti hain ... ummm hann... Jhalli types... na muzme dressing sense he na me tere jese US se padh kr aayi hun... i m not at all ur match... Teddy...

Maan- geet Kya tu aaj tak muze itna hi samaz payi he ??? Mene bachpan se sirf tuzse pyar kiya he ... muze koi farak nhi padta kit u kesi he kya pehnti hai... kesa khana banati he... I love you ... nhi janta kabse chata hun tuze... par itna jarur janta hun ki tere bina jee nhi paunga... janti he mene ye faisla kiya tha ki padhai khatam hone ke bad bus ek bar tuze dev ke sath khush dekh ke wapis laut jaunga US... kabi nhi laoutunga... teri ek smile ke sahare puri life nikal lunga apni... but jab yahan aaya aur tuze itna shant aur taklef me dekha to aisa laga ki ye sab meri galti he ... bachpan se janta tha me tuze agar me aur pari sath na ho to tu kitni akeli pad jati he tu fir me chala gaya tuze chod ke ... (he dropped on his knees and started crying hiding his face in his palms)

Geet – (kneeling in front of him) I m sorry Maanu .. i m really sorry... hamesha meri wazah se tu hurt hota he... i m so bad ... mere 19th birthday pe b mene tera dil toda tha aur aaj bhi.. plezz maaf kr de apni angel ko pleezzz...

Maan- I told u ki muze Maanu mat bula it doesn't suits my image...(smiling with tears)

Geet – Me tuze wahi bulaungi jo mera man karega...

Maan- huhh [:X]

Geet – me tuze bahut tang krti hun na???

Maan nodes his head in Yes...

Geet – hawww[:O] ... han to kya hua .. i m ur best frnd.. ek dum ur chaddy buddy types ... to pareshan kr sakti hun ...

Maan – Geet ... chaddy buddy ... really ... tu meri image ka faluda bana degi ek din...

Geet – ab isme kya galat he .. mene tuze dekha he kai bar sirf underwear me aur ek pic b he teri jisme tune kuch nhi pehna... bath tub me nahate hue

Maan- geet... plezz tab me sirf 2years ka tha ...

Geet – to kya hua Maan babu ... koi ye thodi puchega kab kahan kese... log to bus gossip krenge...

"HAwww Maan Singh Khurana Ki Photo Wo B Bina Kapdon Ke Wo B Nahate Hue ..."

Maan – geet Shut up okkk...

Geet – okkk... sadu ... u r no fun... wese ek bat bata ye sab Pari ko kab bataya tune??

MAan- sab tere jese dhor nhi hote na... use khud hi pata chal gaya tha ...

GEet – hain ???? sachhi .. kab pata chala...

MAan- jab me 10th me tha aur tum dono 9th me...

They started walking and reached Geets home Where pari was standing outside...

Geet – eee pari ... u coming wid me na... aaj tu mere sath rahegi right...

Maan- ji nhi .. she is going wid me ... muze use bahut saari baatein krni he...

Geet –(pulls pari on her side ) Shut up Maaannnuuu... she is my best friend aur wo mere sath rahegi...

Maan- (pulls pari on his side)you Shut up geetttuuu... wo meri b best friend he mere sath rahegi...

Geet – Me use tuzse pehle se janti hun to wo meri best friend he...

Maan – correction miss handa ... me tuzse bada hun aur jab mene pari ko pehli bar dekha tha tab to tu is dunia me b nhi aayi thi.. so she is my friend first...

Geet – han to kya hua... wo meri classmate he to wo mere sath jada time spend krti thi isliye wo meri best friend he pehle...

Maan – To US me wo meri b classmate thi to mene b uske sath time spend kiya he to wo meri best friend he pehle...

Geet- par par... han par school ki timing jada hoti he aur college me to bunk b marte he to wo usne mere sath time jada spend kiya he...

Maan – mene aur pari ne kabhi koi lecture bunk nhi kiya...

Geet – han to uske liye himmat chahiye... daring person hi bunk mar sakta he tuz jesa fattu nhi ...

Maan- fir fattu... mene tuze mana kiya he na ...

Geet – Maa kiya tha par mene mana nhi Fattu..

Maan – geet i m warning you ... ek aur bar fattu kahan na to ...

Geet – TO ..too kya kr lega tu fattu..

Maan – main fattu han .. ruk abhi agar 2 min me tu bhagtii hui nazar na aayi to nam badal dena mera... (MAan Shouted)

RANO MAA... RANO MAAA...

Geet – fattu saale cheater kahin ke... muzse nipat na mom ko kyun bula rha he....

Maan – Fattu kon he abhi pata chal jayega jese hi RANO MAA bahar aajyengi...

Geet – no yar maan .. you cant do this... plezz yar tu janta he na kitni daant padegi... "geet kab sudhregi tu ,shadi hone ki umar aagayi par abhi tk bacpana gaya nhi tera"

[;(] pleezz teddy bacha le...

Maan – notanki kahin ki ...

On the same time rano comes out and asks..

RAno- kya hua maan ... tune awaz lagayi?? Aur nautanki kise bol rha he..

MAan – kuch nhi maa bus aise hi bat kr rhe the hum... mene to aapko ye kehne ko bulaya he ki mene kab se aapke hath ki kheer nhi khayi so kal bana ke rakhna ...

Rano – Han beta bilkul... chalo ab ghar jao... bahut late horha he ... pari tu wahan aise neeche kyun bethi he ...

PAri (whispering)- jab aise do namuno ki dost hun to aur ho b kya sakta he mere sath..,(loudly) kuch nhi aunty bus yunhi...

RAno (shaking her head)- tum teeno na pagal ho ... aur muze b pagal kr doge... chalo ab andar tum dono ladkiyan aur maan ab ghar jao ...



So here comes part 13...

hope you All like it


RINKI



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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
loved it
Maaneet ki nautanki
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow 😊it is very good type happy both geet and maan are having fun teasing eacother continue soon waiting for the next update 😉
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add me to ur pm list
superb work
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Send me PMs too...I wana read ur story

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