MG ff 'Best Friends' Part 13 Updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Everyone...
I m not new here...
But just disappered for a long time nearly 1 and 1/2 years...
I was writing an ff at that time... But then life gave me sum riddles to solve... And i was so lost in them that couldnt come here On IF... I have loved many Ff's.. And started writing one...
I want to continue it again only and onlu if you want me to... I m giving a prologe and character sketch here...
Waiting for ur reply...




A very big thnx to Maithly for this awesome Banner... it touched my heart...

Kuhu ... thnx for the awesome gift



* TRING TRING * TRING TRING*

lady - offo ab kiska phone aagaya ???
Hello ...
person - hello ... is this sharma residence??

lady - yes ... whos dis..??

person - i m arima ... Geets frnd ... she tried to suicide ... luckily i was there when she ate rat kill ... she doesn't want to go to a doc... and asked to call you... plezz come soon she is nt well and unconscious right now...

lady - i m coming there in 10 min plez take care of her...

lady - (rushing out of the house) its all my fault.. it all my fault... muze use bahar jane ko permit hi nhi karna tha... that bloody kutta kamina DEV ... i will kill him ... uski wazah se she is going through all this
..

lady reached Geets collage and brought her home with help of her frnds ...

she called her frnd Aarti who was a doctor and asked her to come home for examining geet ...

Aarti - Riya... she is fine ... i have given her medicine ... she will sleep for 4-5 hours... dont worry

Riya - thnx Aarti ... agar ise hospital le jana padta to bahut problems hojati... koi problem nhi hogi na..

Aarti - nhi... the poison was nt that strong... aur usne turtant vomit b kar diya ... but still she needs to rest... i will suggest you to take her out for some time... she emotionally week right now... and her college also ended today...

Riya - i will talk to Brij today it self ...




THE HANDA'S

MOHINDAR HANDA - a sucessfull buisnessman of dehli... and best frnd with aaditya and sudesh ... Geets father ... loves Maan and Pari like his own child... loves Brij as his real son

Rano HAnda - Geets mother ... best frnds with divya and sakhi ... A housewife... love maan more than geet .. loves pari too...

Geet - An innocent girl ... shy , true Indian by heart,respects traditions and customs... completing her engineering... was in love a GUY named DEV... she call aaditya daddy .. (age20)

Brij - Geets rakhi brother ... lovs her to death ... they met in college as he was her senior... an orphan .. treats mohindar and rano as father and mother... is a self stablished man

Riya - Brij's wife... loves geet .. was her senior in college ... respects handas as her in laws ...

THE KHURANA'S

khurana belongs to a royal family of rajsthan ... years ago maan's dadaji settled in dehli for business...
SAvitri devi - MAan's dadi ... loves mohindar and sudesh as his own son..

Aaditya singh khurana - MAan's father ... a lovely man who loves to joke around...

Divya khurana - Maan's mother .. a socialist..

MAan singh Khurana - Elder son of aadiya and divya... best frnd of pari and geet .. loves geet madly ... (age 22)

Vibhaan singh Khurana - known as VICKY.. loves a girl ... calls geet GIRLFRND... geet knows the girl he loves...(age 20)

THE RATHORE'S


SUdesh Rathore - A businessman.. best frnds wid mohindar and aditya...

Sakhi rathore - A housewife...

PAri rathore - Best frnd of Maan and geet .. She know them more than they know their self's... (age 20 )


T
he only reason i m back is Kuhu ...
we just talked yesterday and she wanted me to write BEST FRIEND again...
she belived in me and siad that everyone would love my writing...
thnx to Dazzling DIvz and Kuhu i m back...


LOVE YOU BOTH

RINKI

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
nice prologue n cs
cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
part 1

On the other end of world...

Boy -
What's my fault if we were childhood frnds... whats my fault ifi love her unconditionally... why she doesnt loves me... she was my bestest frnd but she never understood me or my love ... all she could see now is her love ... ok i know she cant love me ... cant be mine ... but she could talk to me atleast... she know that i cant live without talking to her.. still its more than 8 months she hadnt talked to me... never replied to my mails...

girl - calm down ... you know her na... sheis like this always... abhi tu uske saamne nhi he isliye she is nt talking to you ... ek bar hum wapis india chale jayen she would behave normally... you know her right... and about talking to you... you know she wants Crack GATE... she is studying 4 it... even she talks to me once in a week... wo b 10 min se jyada nhi ... and she always talks about you...

Boy
-
i want to talk to her right now... i have a feeling that something is nt right.. she is nt right... i feel like she is in trouble...

girl - are mene usse subah hi bat kari thi ... uska aaj last paper hai na ... wo abhi college me hi hogi... hum sham ko bat karenge usse

Boy -bus ekbar plezz... plezzz pari...

girl - shut up Maan just shut up... why dont you understand ... she doesn't wants us to disturb her... she will call us ... aur vese we are going back after 15 days... and we have our final term from tomorrow ... if you will nt study ... it would nt clear it.. and which means ... you will go back India after 6 months and i m sure you don't want this ... or do you ????

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Back in india...

Brij was at home ... riya told him everything ... they planed 15 days tour to Goa ... and informed Geets family who were out of town for a marriage... however brij didn't told them about geet's attempt of suicide ... brij was siting on geets side.. caressing her forehead.. and remembering how they met first time ...

*Flashback *
4 years ago

brij saw a girl crying .. and a guy shouting on her ... he knew what the seen was ... of course Ragging again ...


brij
- Abhishek ... she is my sister leave her alone ...

Abhishek - whats this yar brij ... jab bhi me kisi ki ragging leta hun .. they turned out to be your lost brother or sister...

brij - just leave her alone...

abhishek left the place ... brij goes near the girl and wipes her tear ...

Girl -- thnx ..

Brij -- its okk sweetheart... now common give me a smile .. (girls gives him a teary smile)... i knew it .. you would look gr8 when smile... so keep smiling okk.. ab koi b pareshan kar to come to me ...

Girl nodes her head and turned to leave...

Brij -- ooo my long lost sister apna naam to batati jao ...

girl - (smiling) Geet ...

*Flashback Ends*

Brij -- i want to see you smile... i always loved your similing face... i a nt a gud bro... i shouldnt have left you alone .. when you needed me the most ... ishould have refused to the offer of going US for 2years...

Geet - bhai ... agar aap nhi jate to isne saare gifts kese milte muze hmmm.. aap b na ... jara si bat pe emotional ho jate ho ...

Brij
-- R u okk ... chal uth we will go to the hospital .
Edited by lovelife21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
PART 2

Geet
- Bhai i m sorry ... i m really sorry ... meri wajah se aap aur bhabhi itne pareshaan hue...(started crying)


Brij - tu aisa bol rhi he ??? life me muze jab kisi apne ki jarurat thi u was always there... Hum dono kabse ek dusre ko sorry aur thnx bolne lage hmmm...

Geet - Nhi bilkul b nhi ...

Brij - we r nt going to talk about it okk... u r my strong sis ... u will get over him ... or vese b we r going Goa tommorow... mene uncle se b bat karli he ...

Geet - sacchi .. (hugged him ) i love you bhai .. u r the best ...

Riya - hey ... saara credit apne bhiyya ko hunnn... Plan to pura mera tha ...

Geet - are bhabhzzz aap bestest ho tabhi to bhai best ho paye na ... ..


Next day they boarded flight for Goa... although In the starting geet was quite and sad... but after 2-3 days she was back to her normal self... loving caring bubbly geet... Brij and Riya were happy for getting their little angel back but little did they know that she is pretending for their sack...

while Maan and pari were back to India ... they expected that Geet would come to receive them .. but she was nt there.. it was so unlike her ...

They rushed her home and found it locked.. they were tensed... they called on her no but it was switched off... finally they have to call Geets parents ... they informed that she was in Goa with Brij and riya ... they left for their houses... everyone was out of town .. Pari and Maan thought to surprise everyone by their sudden appearance ... they were busy in their exams so didn't called home from last 15 days... but they have informed geet ...

Maan entered his house.. servants were pleased to see him back... he went to his room ... and smiled sadly ...
everything in his room was according to Geets choice... colour of walls, painting, curtains , furniture everything... she had arranged everything... Maan smiled and turned towards a wall which was filled with pictures of Geet,Pari and himself. of course Geets picture covered most of area... he was smiled seeing different picture of her .. every pic had a story behind it... his smile widened while seeing a pic of Geet in which she was making an angry face ... he still remembered that day ...
she fought wid boys of the colony and had beaten them badly... their parents came home for complain...


*Flashback*

parent - bhabhi ji aaj to geet ne had hi kar di dekhiye kitni buri tarah se maare he bechare shivam ko...

Geet - wo muze chida raha tha ... aur bol raha tha ki Maan mere dadaji ei tarah behave karta he...

Geets mom - geet chup karo .. chalo maafi mango shivam lse...

Geet - Par mammi .. usne muze chidaya ..

Geets mom - GEET...

Geet - sorry ...

and she ran away to Maans house...

DADI - aaj meri ladli gusse me kyun he ???

Geet - dadima .. aaj mamma ne fir se sorry bulawaya huh ... hamesha muze hi sorry bolna padta he .. me nhi jaungi ab us ghar main...

Dadi smiled at her innocence.. and maan clicked a photo of her angry face... Geet turned towards him ...

Geet - Meri pic kyun li tumne ?? aur ye camera kahan se aaya tumhare pass..daddy ka liya tumne ...?? wo yahan hi he tumne unka camera liya ?? ... ruko aane do unhe me bata dungi unko sab...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
PART 3

Dadi smiled at her innocence.. and maan clicked a photo of her angry face... Geet turned towards him ...

Geet -
Meri pic kyun li tumne ?? aur ye camera kahan se aaya tumhare pass..daddy ka liya tumne ...?? wo yahan hi he tumne unka camera chua ... ruko aane dounhe me bata dungi unko sab...

Maan - bata dena... wo hi to laayen he ye mere liye ..

Geet - daddy wapis aagaye ??? (she rushed towards maan's parents room ) DADDYYY aap agaye wapis... mere liye kya laye ??? pata he aap nhi the na to mamma ne muze danta aur teen bar sorry b bulwaya ...

Daddy - ohh ... my princess.. hum mamma ko datenge okk...

"Flashback ends"

Maan -
Kash meri wo geet wapas aa sakti ... but now she doesn't want to talk to me ...

After 2 days

Pari went to meet Geet at Brij's home... she was shocked to see a pale and weak geet ... although she pretended to be normal... but later she asked riya about her health and a sudden trip to Goa... Riya told her everything... Riya was hoked ... geet didnt told her any thing about her Breakup with dev .. She broked up wid him 8 months ago... and she didn't told her bestfrnds anything... riya told her about the suicide attempt too..

PAri -
geet why did you do this.. tune muze batana b jaruri nhi samza..

geet -tu pareshhan ho jati na isliye .. aur vese b i m fine.. but promiss me to ye bat kisi ko nhi batayegi maan ko b nhi...

Pari - par geet ... he is your best frnd too...


geet -
par i don't want him to know any thing ...

pari nodded... they spend their day chatting ... in evening pari informed man that geet is fine & was happy to ...

Next day

Geet -
(on phone)why don't you understand i don't want to talk you ... i don't need any one plezz stop calling me plezzz...

riya -
(she came running as she heard shouting )kya hua geet ...

geet -
bhabhi can you tell maan that i don't want to talk to him ...

riya -
par kyun ?? he is your best frnd ...

geet -
bhabhi ... he loves me.. and i dont want to hurt him... and i dont want to talk him ..why ?? .. i don't know bhabhi ... i dont know.. bus bahut hogaya ye pyar mohabbat... ab aisa kuch ni chahti me apni life me ...
plezzz bhabhi (she starts crying)

Riya -
geet ... stop crying plezz ... i will tell him okkk...

later in the evening

riya was working in kitchen when door bell ranged...


Riya -
geet plezz open the door...

geet opened the door and was shocked to see the person

Geet - YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
PART 4


Geet -YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


GUY -
yes darling ... you know how much i love you...dont you ?? (he said touching her face with his hand)

Geet -
Dont you dare to touch me samjhe...

Guy -
ohh ... don't say like this honey ... i love you so much ...and you love me tooo ... that's why you tries to suicide.. right na(tries to kiss her forcefully)

Geet -
No ... you don't love me ..and what i felt for you was nt love ..i can never love a b*****d like you ... you never loved me ... all you wanted was ... chi ... me yad b nhi karna chahti tumahre words samze tum .. just leave from here ...

Guy -
so what honey ... isn't it love hunnn...

Riya - (
shouting) WHAT R U DOING HERE ??? just leave my house right now... samze tum ... warna i will call police... LEAVE MY HOUSE RIGHT NOW...

GUY -
ohhh ... so miss riya "the socialist" is back hunnn... but you cant save her ... nops...

Riya -
just leave DEV ... just leave ....(she pushes him out and locks the door ) then she moves towards geet .. who was sitting on the floor crying bitterly ...

Geet -
how could i love him bhabhi ... how could i ???

Riya -
shhh baby ... you admitted yourself that it wasn't love... it was attraction ...a mere attraction ... now go to your room .. and take rest ...

Geet lays down on bed and goes to sleep still crying... on the other hand Riya makes a call and asks some one to come home in evening ...
geet wakes up in the evening with sound of Doorbell... she wondered who is it ... brij comes home after 8 ... and its only 6... she moves towards the sitting area and peeps through the curtain ... IT was him ... her bestest frnd... a frnd who was there for her always ... at every step of her life ... and what she did to him ... broked his heart for an Cheap heartless man ... she even lost her best frnd.. she than thinks about her conversation with him in the morning...

Geet -
(to her self)i cant hurt him any more .. no i will not hurt himm... i will not give him any false hope... may be he has forgotten me ...

Riya -
geet .. wahan kyun khadi ho... come here ... look who is here to meet you...

geet goes and sits near riya... riya excuses her self and went away to bring some snacks...

Maan -
Hii ANGEL... ..

Geet -
(smiles a little listening the her pet name after a long time )hey teddy ... how was ur exams...

Maan -
thik the aur tere ???

Geet -
thik ..

Maan -
teri tabiyat thik nhi he kya ???

Geet -
nhi i m fine ... was aise hi thoda cough and cold nothing serious..

Maan -
hmm... so howz life ... howz Dev ...

Geet -
We r nt together ... (she says in a shaky voice)

Maan -
(shocked) What ??? but you ... he .. arghhh.. and you didn't told me ... kya me itna gair hogaya hun ???

Geet -
nhi teddy .. me tuze aur hurt nhi karna chahti thi ..pehle hi

Maan -
(cuttting her in between ) Don't lie geet .. you cant lie to me ... i know you ... i know you more than anyone .. more than yourself.. you thought ki tumahara break up hogaya he to i would try to get you ...

Geet -
nhi teddy ...

Maan -
rehno do geet .. i dont think tumne muze kabhi apna frnd b samza tha ... (he leaves the house )
Edited by lovelife21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PaRT 5


Maan reached home ina very bad mood...he was upsate ... while his family was shocked ... he rarly gets upsate..
butwhenhe is upsate its better toleavehim alone... while on the other hand geet was alsoupsate...


geet -(to herself)I knew it will hurt him.. thats the reason I didnt told him about my break up..he would have left his studies in middle...matlab that's what i really thought..okk this is what i think now... till yesterday i thought that he would try to make me understand ... but the minute i saw him ... i know he would never do something which would hurt me... may be by being with an dirty minded person ..i also started thinking like him... huh .. that kamina ...khota ...ullu ka pathha...******* ****... wow i feeling gud after this GALI session ... she started giggling ...



GEEET ... GEEET

Geet - hunnn... umm wo han bhai ...

Brij - geet ... kya soch rhi ho?? and why u r giggling hunnn...

Geet - nothing bhai ... bhai aaj ke liye me pari ke yahan chali jaun ?? plezzz

Brij - but geet its late... 9 baz raha he ..

Geet - (rolling her eyes) Bhai .. its only 9 ... aur uska ghar he kitne dur ... 15 minute b nhi laenge muze scooty se jane me...

Brij - han han that scooty of urs.. use to tum jet plane samaz ke udati ho... muze b jane me 25-30 min lagte he ...

Geet - bhai chalo isi bat pe shart lagate he... for 1 chocolate ice cream ... agar yahan se nikalne ke 15 min bad mene aapko shree ki mom se bat karwayi to aap haare ... aur nhi karwayi to me jeeti ... thik he

Brij - HAN HAN .. fine lag gayi shart ...

while riya stood amused at the far corner of the room ... only 15 min with maan and geet was back to her normal self... and her stupid husband... he thinks that he is the only intelligent person this planet earth (giggling she hits her head )


AFTER 10 MIN

Geet - Bhai you are going to loose the Bet .. i m telling you ... be prepared with the ice cream ... bye bhabhzzz.. kal jaldi ghar aajungi .. (and she zoomed)

Brij - huh ... dekh lunga kese harta hun ...(shoutiing)

riya - tum har case me haroge .. tumne suna b tha usne kaha kya tha ??

Brij - hmm i know... wo smile kar rhi thi that was inuff ... pichle 15 dino me pehli bar use dil se haste hue dekha he (he hugged riya with tears in his eyes)

Riya - dont worry Maan aagaya he na .. sab thik ho jayega...


Brij - Maan aagaya aur sab thik hojayega ?? kya matlab


riya tells him everything ... Dev coming home... their arguments ,maans visit and his fight wid geet ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
PART 6

Geet reached pari's house ... Everyone there was thrilled to see their old geet back... bubbly,chatterbox and naughty geet ... who could do anything for her frnds MAAN AND PARI ... she called brij and asked him to keep her icecream ready in the morning... after some family time .. geet and pari were sitting in the garden...

Geet - Pari ... tu kuch to bol yar ...

Pari - me kya bolun geet !! me b hurt hui thi .. aur abhi b hun ... par tuzse naraz nhi reh sakti ...

Geet - Maan b to kahan naraz reh sakta he muzse... par wo mere phone hi nhi utha raha...

pari - Geet ... i think muze aur maan ko ye janne ka hak he ki kya hua will u tell us now ???

Geet - par Maan use kese manau ... me tum dono ko sab kuch batana chahti hun ...

pari - wese hi jese hamesha manati hai...

geet - han yar me kese bhul gayi mera purana idea ... huhahhhahaahaa😈

pari smiled and they both left house ... for where ????? LET'S SEE...


GEET - pari tu itna hilegi to me gir jaungi ...

Pari - ohh right geet .. aur tu jo mere upar khadi he uska kya ...


Geet - (cutely)pari.. i m ur best frnd na ... aue ye pipe itna upar he to me kya karun .. koi to chaiye na jiske upar me khadi hojaun ...

Pari - its the last time i m helping you with all this Drama of urs ... galti tu kare aur ghoda me banu...

Geet - pari darling tu bachpan se ye hi line repeat kar rhi he.. and stop making noise .. tuze pata he na us khote ke kaan kitne tej hain ?? aajyega abhi .. fir chillayega muze pe... GEET handa ... u r 20 year old girl .. koi 5 sal ki bacchi nhi ho jo aise harkatein karti ho.. pipe pe chadrhi ho ?? wo b mere room ke terrace tak jaane ke liye jo 2nd flore pe he ??? R u out of ur mind ... And pari .. tu to samaz daar he na fir b is bevkuf ki baton me aajati he .. and blah blah blah... (till this time she has climbed the pipe a little and was off pari's back ...)

someone tapped her legs ...

Geet - pari chup reh na .. me gir jaungi .. let me concentrate okk...

"GEET HANDA ... COME DOWN RIGHT NOW... AUR I HAVE TO CALL UR MUM ..."

geet gulped listening the voice ... (ohh she was a big trouble today... MAAN SINGH KHURANA was already angry and finding her and pari out alone in 11 at at night would worked like "AAG ME GHEE")

Maan - geet !! abhi isi waqu niche aajao samzi ...

Geet - maan wo me neeche kese aaun ... pari ko ghoda to bana ...

Maan - ya ya why not .. jump i will catch you ...

Geet nodded her head and jumped ..

After 10 min of session of scolding at the garden ... they were siiting at Maan's room ... Pari was siting on the bad keeping her head down while geet was sitting on the couch ... folding her legs and eating her chocolate ...
Maan was pacing in the room ...

Geet - Maan ... aisa lag raha he ki tum DAku gabbar singh ho ... aur pari KAALIya ... hahahahaha.. pucho pucho " kITNE AADMI THE "

Maan and Pari both glared her ..

Geet - WHAT YAAR ??? mene kya kiya hunnn... ye sab pari ka idea tha .. u know na main kitni sabhya aur shant ladki hun .. mene to ise mana b kiya ki pipe se jaana risky hoga hume lag jayegi .. par ye to meri sunti hi kahan he .. Dekha pari kabhi to meri bat mana kar hum seedhe seedhe gate se hi aajate .. but nhi ab kha DAANT ...

PAri looked at geet shocked while MAAN rolled his eyes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 7

Geet - WHAT YAAR ??? mene kya kiya hunnn... ye sab pari ka idea tha .. u know name kitni sabhya aur shant ladki hun .. mene to use mana b kiya ki pipe se jaana risky hoga hume lag jayegi .. par ye to meri sunti hi kahan he .. Dekha pari kabhi to meri bat mana kar hum seedhe seedhe gate se hi aajate .. but nhi ab kha DAANT ...

PAri looked at get shocked while MAAN roled his eyes

they turned their back to her ...geet smiled at them... she whispered in a low voice ...

GEET - I MISSED U BOTH ...!!

MAAN & PARI - we missed you too geet .. we missed you too... (trio gave a group hug to each other)

MAAN - geet .. u can stop pretending... we know u r not fine... we know u r just pretending to b happy and naughty bcoz you dot want us to be sad... we r ur best frnds.. we should know the truth...

Geet
- what do u want to know teddy ?? u know na ki muze nhi pasand ki koi muze week samze... i m nt week maan... i know i m hurt .. i m shattered.. i may nt be able to trust someone else in my life but i will be fine...

Pari
- we know geet ... we know that u r strong... but if u will share ur pain with us ... u will feel light... we r ur best frnds .. we will b their with u .. no matter wt happens... it was you jisne hume khud se dur kar diya... hamari bachpan ki dosti ko bhul gayi... pichle3 sal me jitne b bar hamne bat ki mushkil se 5-7 min ki hogi ... bcoz u were busy...


geet
- me kya karti ... us insaan ne meri soch .. mera jeene ka dhang sab badal diya tha... jab tak tum log sath the tab tak sab kuch thik tha ... fir tum yahan se chale gaye aur me akeli hogayi... phone aur video- chat to hum roz karte the pr sab kuch vesa nhi raha tha na... aur jab muze sab se jada frnds ki jarurat thi .. Dev ne muze support kiya ... dheere dheere me uspe dependent hogayi ... Me to use bus apna accha dost samazti thi ... fir tum logo ke jaane ke 3-4 months bad jb muze uski aadat hogayi ... usne muze propose kr diya ...mene use mana kiya .. bcoz i never felt that thing for him... bu then he stopped talking to me ... he ignored me ... me fir se akeli hogayi ... one day his frnds called me and said that he is drunked and wants to talk to me ... i talked to him ... and his voice his words .. muze laga bcoz of me he is there ... meri wazah se use itni takleef ho rhi he ... after sometime when he was in deep sleep i just turned off my cell ... i thought If my yes could make him happy i would do this ... and i called him next morning and that I love him too... every thing was good in the starting... wo meri bahut care karta tha.. muze bus dekhta rehta.. lec ke beech me meri copies me I LOVE YOU likhta rehta... kabhi kabhi muze feel hota i m the luckiest girl in this world... me usse shayad sach me pyar karne lagi thi ...
but then sab kuch badlne laga... use meri aadtein.. mere dressing sense ... even muzse b problem hone lagi.. me ph b bat karti aur uska ph waiting pe aajata to wo muzse jhagda karta ... me apne kisi frnd se yahan tak ki tumse b bat karti to use lagta me kisi ladke se bat kr rhi hun... use shak tha ki mere or maan ke beech me kuch he .. aur me tuzse bat karti to use lagta main maan se bat kr rhi hun.. aur fir meri 19th bday party me jab maan ne muze I LOVE U bola to use laga me uske sath cheat kr rhi hun... mene use samzane ki bahut koshish ki pr wo nhi mana .. uska kehna tha ki agar me usse(dev se) pyar krti hun to tumse bat krna chod dun...(
she statted sobbing)

MAAN - stop it plezz geet .. muze aur kuch nhi sunna plezz...

PAri
- MAan use bolne de.. usne ye sab kisi ko nhi kaha hoga... uske dil se ye sab bahar aana jaruri he...

maan
- par pari .. me nhi sun sakta ki geet ko kisi ne itna hurt kiya he plezz...

pari - agar tuze nhi sunna to tu chala ja yahan se.. (maan left the room )

geet was crying hysterically... pari hugged her from side.. and encouraged her to speak...

geet - i m sorry pari .. mene tuze aur maan ko itna hurt kiya .. par me kya karti muze dev ke aage kuch nhi dikha ... hamari dosti b nhi ... tum dono ne hamesha mera sath diya aur mene tum dono ko hi chod diya...

Pari
- geet bhul ja wo sab baatein.. hum sath he aur hamesha rahenge kisi dev ke kehne se hum alag nhi hojayenge.. samzi.. kya ye hi wajah thi tere aur uske alag hone ki...

geet - nhi .. ek din jab hum jhagda sort out karne ki liy mile.. to usne kaha ki wo muzse ek hi shart pe fir se relation continu karega..

PAri - kya condition geet ??

GEET - ...(she kept mum and stsrted crying again clutching pari's hand)

PAri
- nooo he cant do this .. did he really asked u to do that thing wid you ..

geet nodded her hand while pari lokked around.. hoping maan nt heard their talks...

pari
- but he loved you so much wo aisa kese ... may be he was drunked or something else would have happened...

geet - muze b aisa hi laga .. pehle to me uski bat sunke shocked reh gayi... mene use samzaya ye sab galat he to wo bola ki agar me nhi to aur bahut si ladkiyan he jo ye sab karne ko ready hain aur wo ladkiyan muze hazar guna sundar aur rich he... mene use jhapad mara and i left that place...

pari
- accha kia tune khota kamina sala huh.. uski himmat kese hui ye sab kehne ki... maan ko pata chala na to bhuta bana dega uska...

geet - (looked up with a worried expresion) pari agar MAan ko meri poison khane wali bat pata padi to wo ye seh nhi payega.. wo abhi ye sab sunke hi itna hurt tha baki pata padne pe i dont know wo kya krega...

Pari - tuze ek jhapad marega aur kya... aur wo nhi marega to me pitwa dungi us kamine ke liye tune aise harkat ki dhor kahin ki...

Geet
- me kya karti pari ... use kisi aur ladki ko kiss karta dekh ke muzpe kya beeti wo me hi janti hun aur upar se wo apane frnds se keh raha tha ki i was an challenge for him.. kyunki col ke first day pe mene use ignore kiya tha.. he was just trying to make it even wid me .. magar me uske hath nhi lagi.. i was so disturbed ... aur mene suicide attpt kiya.. pr ab jab me usse 3-4 months se nhi mili thi to muze pata pad gaya ki wo mera pyar nhi meri aadat tha sirf ek buri aadat...

PAri
- aur tu itni sure kyun hai ki it was not love ??

geet
- kyunki aaj subah use ghar pe dekh ke muze na usse nafrat maehsus hui na pyar ...



"DEV AAJ TUM SE MILNE AAYA THA "
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 8



"DEV AAJ TUM SE MILNE AAYA THA "


Geet and pari looked at each other terrified...

pari - Maan ... tum kab aaye ... tumhe to ye sab baatein nhi sunni thi na ...

Maan - han nhi sunni thi ... but accha hua ki mene abhi aagaya ... kam se kam ye to sun paya ki DEV aaj isse milne aaya tha ... warna tum dono to muze kuch bate hi nhi ...

Geet - nhi maan aisa kuch nhi he ... ab wo kabhi b nhi aayega muze pareshan karne ... bhabhi ne use warn kr diya he ...

Maan - hmm thik he ... chlo ab jake so jao ... mene guest room ready karwa diya he ...

Pari and geet left the place with a smile ... they thanked god that maan didnt heared their talks... Warna Dev was gone ...

next day

Maan entered guest room at 12pm... he was bored of watching TV .. every one was out for picnic... maan geet and pari had already decided that they want to spend time together at home... as he entered he saw both of them sleeping .. he called them .. but they didn't waked up... finally he pored a bucket full of water on them...

pari - WTH !! maan ye kya hai hun ??

Geet - Tedddyyy barish horhi he ... plezzz chata(umbrela) lao.. me Bheeg jaungi...

pari and maan turned their heads towards geet who was still sleeping and had covered her face with her hands... they both laughed and worked geet up...
After some time three of them were sitting in the living area...

Pari - yar ... aaj Sunday he Tv pe kuch aacha aanhi rha... chalo hum koi movie dekhte hain ..

Maan - yaa gr8... kon si movie dekhen (he looked at them )

Pari - DDLJ

Maan - par ham wo kitni bar dekh chuke hain ?? plezz koi aur dekhte hain


Geet - Nhi DDlJ hi dekhenge... par muze bhuk lagi he ...

Maan - kya karen ??

Pari - movie se pehle Lunch banale with a song

Geet - yesss!! hurreyyy !!! wese b MAAN ka gaana sune bahut time hogaya he ...

Maan - han chalo thik he ...

IN the kitchen ... maan was cutting vegitables and pari was mixing flour to make roties... while geet was sitting at far end of kitchen with a sullen face ...

Geet - MCHhh guys ... plezz kuch to karne do na ..
.

PAri - miss Geet Handa ... aapki wajah se hum kitchen 1 bar clean kr chuke hain ab chup chap betho ... warna hum din bhar kitchen me hi bethe rahenge...


Maan - arre pari ... daant mat use... geet .. come here ... chal me gaana gaunga aur tu table baja okk ...

geet rushed to him...

MAAN - ab jo me sunaunga na wo ek dum original composition he meri ...


AALU KO BEGAN SE PYAR HOGAYA ...
PEHLI NAZAR ME DIL BEKARAR HOGAYA ...
PYAAZ AUR TAMATAR DONO GHAYAL HUE ...
ITNE ME BHARTA TAIYAR HOGAYA
...


geet and pari looked at each other and laughed uncontrollably ... they made food with singing and then watched DDLJ after that they talked about nothing and everything happened in last 4 years... they shared their future plans... remembered their childhood days...


As the three frnds were together again after a separation of long 4 years... the gud time was also back ...they were enjoying their life at the full .. Maan joined his fathers business .. Pari was perusing Her Masters degree while geet joined an engineering college as an Lecturer... Everyone at home was surprised at her decision ... as they all want her to continue her studies but Geet was admanent... While Maan ,pari, Brij and riya supported her decision...


MOnths Later

geet had almost forgotten about dev .. as he never come in front her after that day ... she thought that he is busy with his own life and forgot her ... well that was nt the truth ... the two most Caring and possessive men in geets life had settled the matter in a hush manner... even Riya don't have any clue about their involvement in this matter ... Men have kept it under the covers so that dev would never come in front of geet .. and she can lead her life normally ...
on the other side Geet was leading her life normally ... with her best frnds around. In College her colleges loved her for her lovely nature and intelligence while students loved their GEET MaM FOR HER BUBBLY NATURE and her support and help in their problems... She turned 21 last month.. she was happy with her carrier .. these were some things which encouraged her parents to think about her future... they were searching a Bridegroom for their lovely daughter ... one day they called her and asked IS she was ready for getting married..? for First few days she was ignored the topic... but due to emotional blackmail she finally agreed... one fine morning.. maan called geet

Maan - Geet?? where are you ??

Geet - Getting ready for College... why ??

Maan - want to talk you about something important.. i will drop you college today .. get ready i m coming in !5 minutes..

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