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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey!!! i really liked dis ff...pls dont discontinue...plz plz plz update. 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
its a really nyc concept n i loved it ...plz update
soon n PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please update na it is such a gud story
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Posted: 10 years ago
y r u not continuing dis ff is so cool gey me 1 solid reason not 2 continue it??????????????? 
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Plz dear update soon...can't wait now
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PLZ NEXT PART JALDI POST KARO N PM ME
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Here I am with the next part after a LOOONG time!!

Chapter 10

Virman entered the hotel. It was glamorous. They went to check in
V- excuse me, can we book two rooms??
He asked the manager
Manager- yes, what kind of room would you like sir? Big or small??
V- any will do
Manager checked on his computer
Manager- we have only one room available sir, its a big one
V- one room??
Virat turned to Maanvi, asking permission with his eyes. Maanvi hesitated, but nodded yes, Virat smiled and turned back to the manager
V- fine, we'll take that room
Manager- ok sir. Can I take ur name??
V- its Virat Vadhera
Manager- ok so ur suite number is 12B, enjoy ur stay at our hotel, Mr and Mrs Vadhera
Virman's eyes widened at the name
V- waoh! "Mr n Mrs Vadhera"??
Manager- why?? R u two not a married couple?? If not then we can't allow u to stay here
M- why not??
Manager- because we have a strict policy, we only allow family or married couples
V- what kind of policy is that!?
Manager- I'm sorry but it is made by the owner of this hotel
M- well then call him here! Abhi uski aisi ki taisi karti hoon!!
She was gonna have a go at the manager when Virat stopped her
V- no no its ok Mr manager!! Hum manage karlein ge!
Manager- but kya aap log shaadi shuda hain ya nahi??
V- haan haan! Ofcourse! Abhi abhi toh shaadi hui hai!
Maanvi looked at him surprised
V- erm..chalo...darling
M- Virat??
Virat looked at her with pleading eyes, Maanvi sighed
M- chalo
They went to the room...

Rey's house...
Rey held Taani firmly
R- tum janna chahti ho na ke sach kya hai?? Toh suno!

He left her and turned around
R- 9 saal pehle, meri life mein ek larki thi
Unknowingly, it pierced Taani's heart but she listened
R- her name was...Kriya
T- lekin aap bhai se kyun nafrat kartein hain??
R- kyunki tumhare bhai ne mujhe dhoka diya hai!
Taani didn't believe that Swayam would do something wrong
T- nahi. Shayad aapko koi galat femi hui hai!
Rey scoffed
R- I wish
T- par hua kya??
Rey turned to face her
R- suno...

9 years ago...FLASHBACK...

The bell rang, Rey opened the door. It was Swayam
R- hey, oh its you. Come in!
SW- kyun? Kissi aur ko expect kar raha tha tu???
R- well...haan. I'm waiting for Kriya
SW- oye hoye! Itna impatience acha nahi hai mere dost! Uska phal meetha nahi hota!
He teased
R- acha!? Tujhe bohot pata hai!
SW- ab jab mera dost hi majnu hai, toh mujhe bhi toh aadat ho gayi hai na in sab baaton ki! Hey Romeo don't worry, tumhari Juliet aa jaye gi.
R- pakka??
SW- ofcourse yaar! Aur kahan jaye gi!?

Then Swayam remembered something
SW- hey tu toh mujhe apne uss dost se introduce karwane waala tha na??
R- oh haan! Virat! Actually he's out of town so next time
SW- kyun?? Aisa kya kaam tha??
R- well I told u that he's studying music
SW- Oh ok. Btw r u really gonna propose Kriya today??
R- yeah
SW- don't u think its too early?? I mean ur still in college, and ur only 18
R- I don't care. I love her and thats all that matters
Swayam smiled
SW- I'm happy for u
And they hugged

Then the bell rang
SW- main dekhta hoon
He went to opened the door, and saw Kriya
SW- lo, naam liya aur shaitan haazir
Kriya gave a sarcastic smile
KR- tum bhi koi kam shaitan nahi ho
R- who is it, Swayam??
Rey asked from behind while walking to the door
R- Kriya!
KR- Rey baby!
They hugged while Swayam stood looking bored
SW- if u guyz r done then can we please go inside and sit down!?
R- chalo

They all went and sat down
Rey got a phone call
SW- ab kiska phone hai?? Koi new girlfriend bana li hai kya!?
He teased
KR- Rey!
R- arre aisa kuch nahi hai Kriya, yeh aise hi bakwaas kar raha hai. Its Vicky
SW- Vicky?? Rey tu ab Vicky ke saath bhi...
R- Swayam yaar!
Swayam started laughing along with Kriya
R- acha Kriya ab tum bhi!?
KR- no no ofcourse not!
Rey went to his room to attend the call...

After the call, Rey was about to go back to the living room when he heard Swayam and Kriya's convo

KR- Swayam plz, I dnt wanna be with Rey, plz mujhe bacha lo
She said while crying. Swayam got confused
SW- but Kriya, yeh tum...
KR- I know, u wanna say ke main yeh sab tumhe kyun bata rahi hoon?? Its because...I love you Swayam
Swayam looked at her with eyes widened
SW- kr...Kriya...lekin Rey tum...
KR- I know ke Rey mujhe chorey ga nahi
SW- no I'm saying that...ur a very nice and beautiful girl Kriya, any guy would be lucky to have u but...
KR- I know Swayam that u wanna be with me too, just say it!
Sw- but Kriya I...
Before he could finish his sentence, Kriya kissed him, Rey was heartbroken witnessing the scene in front of him. His girlfriend was kissing his best friend!
Swayam tried pulling back but Kriya wouldn't let go
R- SWAYAM!!
Then Kriya n Swayam realised that Rey was standing there, Swayam quickly pushed Kriya off him
SW- Rey dekh...
R- u bas***d!!!
His eyes were full of rage and hurt
SW- Rey dekh tu galat samhaj raha hai...
Swayam tried to explain but Rey wasnt ready to listen to his explanation
R- enough! Bohot ho gaya! I don't need ur explanation! I thought u were my friend, but tu toh...
He made a disgusted face
R- aur tum Kriya?? Why did u do this to me!?
He said with tears, Swayam tried to talk but Rey showed his hand to stop him
KR- Rey, I'm sorry but main tumse pyaar nahi karti, I love Swayam
SW- shut up Kriya!
R- ab kyun usse rok rahe ho!?
SW- Rey I swear yeh jhoot bol rahi hai!
Kriya faked an innocent expression
KR- no Rey, aaj main tumhe sach bataun gi...yeh pyaar vyaar sab ek plan tha, tumhe neecha dikhane ke liye. Aur isme shaamil the main...aur Swayam
Swayam's eyes widened
SW- just shut up Kriya! Rey, yeh sab jhoot hai! I swear main koi plan ka hissa nahi tha! Plz believe me!
R- just shut up Swayam! Band karo apna naatak! Agar main yeh sab apni aankhon se nahi dekhta then maybe I would have believed u! But ab...just get out!
SW- but Rey...
R- GET OUT SWAYAM!
Swayam didn't say anything and left. Kriya stood with an evil grin before Rey started talking
R- kyun kiya aisa?? What did I ever do to u!?
He had tears in his eyes which did not affect Kriya at all. She rolled her eyes
KR- look Rey, tumhare jaise paagal insaan ko koi bhi bewakoof (fool) bana sakta hai! And plus u r too much into this "love" nonsense, so it wasnt hard to make u fall in my trap
Rey got really angry and threw her out of the house...

FLASHBACK ends...

Rey closed his eyes as one tear fell. Taani was shocked to know all this! She had no idea that Rey had gone through so much! Unknowingly, a tear fell from her eyes. Taani slowly put her hand on Rey's shoulder
T- lekin bhai aapse kyun naaraaz hain??
R- mujhe nahi pata. And I don't care
Taani turned Rey around to face her
T- I'm sorry, I didn't know about your past
Rey looked at her
R- no, don't apologize, its not your fault. I'm sorry for yelling at you
Taani smiled at him, Rey smiled back in tears and then suddenly hugged her. Taani was surprised by his sudden move, chills went down her spine. She hesitantly hugged him back...Taani was still not able to believe that Swayam could do such thing
T (to herself)- why do I feel like there's more to this story?? Whatever it is, I have to find out...

Virman entered "their" hotel suite. Maanvi's eyes grew wide as the room was very big and glamorous, then her eyes caught the bed
M- whats all this??
She asked looking all confused at the rose petals on the bed
V- well if I'm not wrong...theyr PROBABLY rose petals!
He answered sarcastically to which Maanvi rolled her eyes
M- I know! Mujhe dikh raha hai! But why r they here??
V- I don't know
Then someone knocked on the door, Virat opened it. It was the room service attendant (RSA) who brought along some food
RSA- here you go sir
V- but we didn't order anything, we just got here
RSA- this is from the manager
Virman got confused
M- what?? The manager?? But why??
RSA- sorry madam I don't know. I was only told to bring this to you so I did. And there is also a note
He gave a note to Virat and left

M- kya likha hai iss note pe??
Virat read the note, it read:
"Dear Mr and Mrs Vadhera,
Congratulations for your marriage. This is a small gift from our hotel. We treat newlyweds very special. Therefore the food is free and we hope that you enjoy your time in our hotel. And hope that you liked our little gesture with the decorated bed. Enjoy"

M- kya likha hai??
Virat slowly turned his to Maanvi and smirked leaving Maanvi confused
M- aise kya dekh rahe ho?? Batao na kya likha hai!
V- aap khud hi par lo...Mrs Vadhera
M- what??
Virat gave the note to her, Maanvi read it and was shocked
M- omg! They actually think that we'r married!? And yeh sab...inn logon ne kiya hai??
V- mm hmm
He answered with a flirty smile, Maanvi raised her eyebrows
M- matlab??
V- matlab ke unke hisaab se...aj humari suhaag raat hai!
M- hey! Aisa kuch sochna bhi mat tum!
Virat started laughing
V- relax yaar! Mazaak kar raha hoon!
Maanvi rolled her eyes. Virat walked up to her
V- yaar I'm getting bored!
He whined, Maanvi laughed at him
M- u r such a baby! Haha what do u wanna do??
V- lets dance!
He said enthusiastically, Maanvi looked at him with a "what?" look
V- what!? Oh come on!
M- Virat, its nearly midnight, and plus there's no music
V- oh u dnt worry about music, I've gt my mobile phone!
M- tum larkion ki tarha kyun behave kar rahe ho??
Virat glared at her
V- excuse me! I am a fun, outgoing and hot guy! I like to have fun! Tumhari tarha nahi hoon main!
M- I'm glad tum mere jaise nahi ho! Coz no one can be like me!
Maanvi said proudly, Virat raised his eyebrows
V- really?? Ok fine let me see your dancing skills
M- what??
V- dance with me
Maanvi scoffed
M- yeah right, no
V- kyun?? Dar gayi kya??
M- jee nahi!
V- then dance with me, here I'll put my songs on. Btw I recorded my latest song for Valentine special
M- Virat. U do know that Valentine's day is really far! February is gone!
V- well obviously I know! Its for next Valentine!
M- what?? U know what, ur really weird!
V- thank you. Now dance with me
M- no!
Virat played his playlist, the song "Balam Pichkari" was on. Maanvi looked at him with a confused face
M- that sounds like a holi song
V- it is. Its awesome right!?
M- so this is your "Valentine special" song??
V- no. Nt this one. Its after this. Hey come on dance with me!!
M- no Virat
V- fine!

Virat was enjoying the song while Maanvi sat down on the bed reading a book and rolling her eyes at Virat. The song had finished, Virat again tried to convince Maanvi to dance with him
V- Maanvi yaar! Come on! Please
Maanvi threw her book on the bed and got up
M- tumhe samaj mein nahi aata! Ek baar maine keh diya na! So y can't u just leave me alone!
She yelled in irritation, Virat got angry with her attitude. Maanvi was about to walk away when Virat grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards him making her crash onto his chest
The next song started, Tum Hi Ho

Maanvi looked up at him with questioning eyes, but Virat ignored her expression and pulled her more close

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajood mera x2

Tujhse juda agar ho jayein ge toh

Khud se hi ho jayein ge juda

Kyunki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chaen bhi

Mera dard bhi

Meri ashiqui ab tum hi ho...

Virat was now lost in her eyes. He slowly went closer to her face until he was an inch away from her lips. Maanvi closed her eyes as Virat kissed her passionately, Maanvi tried to move away at first but then responded later. Virat went down to her neck, he started kissing her and left love bites to which Maanvi gasped. Virat picked Maanvi up and put her on the bed...

5 days later...
Rey was in his rehearsal room practising for the upcoming show. Suddenly his phone rang
R- unknown number??
He read from his phone and answered
R- hello??
Unknown- hi Rey
R- kaun bol raha hai??
Unknown- its me...Kriya...

Precap: Swayam's side of the story. Reyam confrontation.

Little preview:

V- Maanvi kya hua?? At least mujhe batao toh ke tum mujhe avoid kyun kar rahi ho??

M- just go away Virat, please! Main tumhara chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahti!!

She exclaimed while crying and she slammed the door on his face. Virat was still confused to why she was avoiding him and why this hatred all of a sudden

Hope u guys enjoyed the update. I know its been a long time, but I will make up for that time pakka promise. And a lot of twists coming!! Tayyar rehna!!

Kriya Ghai
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res/Unres...
Nice Update Dear..
Hmm.. Vriman ka scene was lovely loved it a lot! πŸ˜³
Fibally, Rey's side story is out. Taarey's hug!! πŸ˜³
Kria is back?? πŸ˜² πŸ˜‘
Hmm..Precap seems interesting..
Loved the entire update!!!
Btw, Welcome back dear..πŸ€—
I think, ur exams were on na.. How's it???
Update soon! πŸ˜‰
Edited by Ish_taarey - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
atlast u updatd ... m xo hapi ... its 1 of my favr8 ff ... lvd virman moments , felt bad fo rey his ladylove betrayd hm... bt no worries as taani will heal him. . .waiting fo swayam pov. precap- guess manvi is angry wit virat fo wtevr happnd wit them in hotel.. bt virat is confusd wit hr behaviour hop he remembrs evrythng. . .thanks fo using tum hi ho i was imaging virMan's dance sequence... awesum update , do update soon n pm me .
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally u updated this ff its really wow awesome update dear i just loved them😊