Swaron OS : still strangers ???

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its is my first OS...
Kritu seh lena pata nahi kya likh hai...hope u like it...
N special thanks to sakshi for confirmation...
STILL STRANGERS ???
Train journeys were always a big no for her it had many painful memories of her mumma...bt after 12 long years her fate brought her back to the place where she lost her mumma in a blast at the same railway station the place where she became a orphan her mind moved towards the old beautiful yet painful memories of her mumma...
She came out of her dream world when she heard the train was there...
On the same station...a boy in contrast to her was fully happy as trains were his second home and today he's here to start a new journey to live his dreams,his dance,his passion...as he's goin to Mumbai to be a coreograher...
Two strangers,different emotions...less they know that their life is gonna change...
They both got onto the train...
And call it fate ,coincidence or gods wish they both were sitting together...
The journey started and with that their heart beats one happily enjoying the journey and the other was hell nervous... She cursed herself for opting train bt she had to as it was her last chance to become coreograher...
And for her dream she had to go through all the pain which she had kept hidden in her heart...
She came out of her thoughts as she heard someone calling
he saw her lost somewhere an after long he broke the silence...
And said ''hi''...
She just smiled at his hi
he again said '' hii going Mumbai ''
at which only a +ve nod...
'' u cant speak?? '' he looked at her giving questioned look.
'' I can ''she said angrily...
'' atlast u said something '' he said quickly to escape her anger.
He continued '' dekho lambi journey hai aur baatein karege toh time kaise nikal jayega pata bhi nahi chalega ''...
'' but i am not interested in talking with you '' she replied.
'' aare baba, interest ke liye nahi par time pass ke liye...its good na''
and without waiting for her reply he continued his chatter...
She was quiet pissed off with his behaviour...she wondered how can a boy talk so much non-stop and vo bhi ek stranger se...argghh i hate such guys...
'' sunn rahi ho na '' he said irritating her even more...
She quickly took her i-pod and started listening music and ignored him completely. He was surprised by her behaviour bt then decided not to bother her and took out a book and started reading...
Time passed they both were in same position...she looked up at him and saw him staring at her...she gave him a questioning look and asked '' why are u staring me ?''
...no rply
she again asked '' why are u staring me ''
''aare meri marzi mai kahi bhi dekhu '' he said
''ha par mujhe kyun?''
''aare mai tumhe q dekha tum par diamonds lage hue hai kya Jo tumhe dekhunga''
''toh??'' she was fully confused by now
he pointed towards something behind her, she turned to check wat it was... It was a poster it read '' GUSSE PE NIYANTRAN RAKHNE KE TARIKE ''
she turned to him as he said ''its good for u na ,u should try it jabse mile hai gusse me hi ho''and laughed...
Before she could react to his unbelievable comment a man came selling tea...
'' thank god bach gaya'' he said under his breath
'' kya kaha''she shouted at him
'' puch raha tha tum chai logi ''
''no thanks'' came a angry rply
'' aare try karte toh dekho,bahut achi hai, he started convincing her and to her surprise the seller joined him...
She was in no mood to hear to his chai theory so quickly said '' YES ''
He inwardly smiled at her...
They both took tea and paid the man
she kept the tea on edge of the window as she was drinking water bt due to sudden movement the tea fell on her dress and made her jump
'' meri dress'' she shouted bas yahi baki tha she thought
'' hey r u ok ??'' he asked her with concern
''m ok bt my dress '' came a sad rply
''just go and clean it '' he suggested her ...
She went towards the washroom and cleaned it and when she was abt to come back she found the exit door open...she remembered hw her mumma used to shout her not to go near the door and she never obeyed...she wanted to try it again pata nahi fir se mumma aake daath de...so she went near the door and stood on the edge...feeling her mumma near her feeling the cool breeze...she felt some kind of peace at that place...don't knw why bt yes it was very peacefully...
On the other hand he was getting worried for her it was almost 15 min and she had not returned he had no idea why he was so worried and concerned for her. he was clueless...
So he decided to go and check whether everything was ok...
As he reached he saw her standing on the edge of the door her eyes were closed she was so like an angel ''khoobsurat'' was only he could say.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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She turned to see who it was and in that sudden action she lost her balance and was abt to fall when he quickly held her...
He saw her eyes were closed tightly and she was scared...
A few seconds later she opened her eyes to see beautiful pair of brown eyes full of concern staring at her...she was lost in him and he was lost in her...looking into each others eyes without blinking...
After ages they came out of the trance when someone shouted kya hua sab thik hai...
And that was when they realised their position she was still in his arms so she quickly moved away yet again near the door. He again held her caught her wrist and took her to their seat...
They sat there quietly stealing glances at each other,
when finally she said ''thank u''
he smiled and replied ''its ok aur agar tum gir aati toh mai baat kis se karta...''
''hmm right tum pakate kise bt seriously thank u...u saved me from...''
before she could complete he interrupted...'' I said na its ok aur vaise bhi dosti me no sorry n no thank u ''
''hey wait'' she suddenly said ''hum dost kab bane''
''nahi bane kya'' he questioned
ok toh ''Hi m Swayam swayam Shekawat'' he sai extending his hand towards her...
She took his hand hand and said '' m Sharon Rai Prakash''
''hmm naam me hi kitna attitude hai toh tumhare andar q nahi hoga'' he said
''wat do u mean ??'' She asked in anger...
''Nothing nothing at all '' he said to calm her...
The next half of journey was quiet peaceful atleast for swayam as Sharon had to tolerate swayam's bak bak...she even asked i does he talk so much to which he said that today he's quiet not talking much as they don't knw each other so well...
She was shocked to his rply would be an understatement...as she has never seen a boy talk so much or rather she has never allowed anyone to talk so much with her...bt he was different as he never wanted her permission...
Something has changed between them they njoyed eachothers company
Sharon njoyed swayam's bak bak and swayam njoyed her silence just like before...
Soon the train reached Mumbai and they both got on their ways bt now not as strangers...
The journey which started with two strangers ended with their friendship...they moved towards their destination bt less they knew that their destination is same...
And soon they will meet again...
As every end has a new beginning...
... The end ...



Phew...done with it...guys all kinds of criticizism is welcome...
First attempt hai so sorry pehle hi bol rahi hu for the mistakes...
Edited by KS_SWARON - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

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Krtzy di🤗

I did not remember that i was the 1st person to comment here..Yipee(😆)

i know i m the last person to comment about the os..sry for the delay caused😳

now coming back to the os..i loved it di😊

so simply u told everything..loved swayam's character and sharon's attitude..

loved how u explained sharon's story..

Still strangers?? title nicely justified..

could u plz write some more parts to this..just so that u knw i loved the end..ending to this one and a start for many more..(jine tell us more about the chatterbox swayam😉)

😆i knw i m blabbering so pardon that..

do write more on swaron and pm me next tym se nhi toh ur angel will become a devil😆

_ veronica

Edited by SwaRon_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc start swaron as strangers ..
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww its beautiful<3<3<3
Please Continue na...
loved it:-):-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's interesting one pretty excited for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Twinkle_d3

Nyc start swaron as strangers ..
Waiting for next part


thank u...have updated the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Rose--

wowww its beautiful<3<3<3
Please Continue na...
loved it:-):-)


m really happy u liked it...it means a lot...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha

It's interesting one pretty excited for next part


thank u n next part is updated too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful OS dear..

Read both the parts at one go...

Beautifully u portrayed their initial reluctance and the accident made them frnds...

Lovely flow of the OS...do write more dear😳
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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