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kshitija

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
hey swthrt..i will read and unres ..give me time till tomo😳

aare no issues di...take ur time...

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User123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

RES 😛

--Unres--

Hey Diii 😊

such an Awesum Os, Cute, Light Hearted With a pinch of sadness(sharon remembering her mother), Sweet, Swayam's Bak-Bak.. hehe :P LOL

super cute OS. loved it!!!!

Time passed they both were in same position...she looked up at him and saw him staring at her...she gave him a questioning look and asked '' why are u staring me ?''
...no rply
she again asked '' why are u staring me ''
''aare meri marzi mai kahi bhi dekhu '' he said
''ha par mujhe kyun?''
''aare mai tumhe q dekha tum par diamonds lage hue hai kya Jo tumhe dekhunga''
''toh??'' she was fully confused by now
he pointed towards something behind her, she turned to check wat it was... It was a poster it read '' GUSSE PE NIYANTRAN RAKHNE KE TARIKE ''

That was like awwh :P 🤣 🤣 😆

i was imagining, Shantanu Aisa BOlte waqt Kitna Cuute Lagege :P

As he reached he saw her standing on the edge of the door her eyes were closed she was so like an angel ''khoobsurat'' was only he could say...

Awwh :') The return of Khubsurat...

swayam ke liye shaorn toh hamesh hi Khubsurat rahegi... 😊

something has changed between them they njoyed eachothers company
Sharon njoyed swayam's bak bak and swayam njoyed her silence just like before...
Soon the train reached Mumbai and they both got on their ways bt now not as strangers...
The journey which started with two strangers ended with their friendship...they moved towards their destination bt less they knew that their destination is same...
And soon they will meet again...

As every end has a new beginning...

Aww, I soo Loved The Above Lines...

A perfect Ending 😊

Diii, 😊

I soo Loved The Os... 👏 👏 👏

Ekdum Mast That...

aapki tarah!!!!

LOved It ❤️

Doo Write More... :D

Love,Aapki Choti ❤️

Edited by --MiNi-- - 12 years ago

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kriti094

@kriti094

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

U wer superb . I hav sent u a buddy request plz do accept it n pm me wenever u write or update any of ur stories

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kshitija

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: kriti094
U wer superb . I hav sent u a buddy request plz do accept it n pm me wenever u write or update any of ur stories

yup i will surely pm u when ever i write...and thank u so much for ur lovely comments

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kshitija

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

@choti : thank u so so much choti...for ur sweet sa lovely comment...m really really happy ki tujhe acha laga...ur comment means alot...
Thanks choti...

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User123

@UserM123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: KS_SWARON
@choti : thank u so so much choti...for ur sweet sa lovely comment...m really really happy ki tujhe acha laga...ur comment means alot...
Thanks choti...

Awwh, Most Welcome Dii 😊

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

seriously.. i enjoyed it a lot and you wrote it beutifully girl.. it came out so well..

swayam's bak bak... hayee imagine him doing bak bak😳

Sharon irritated... 😆

i felt bad for her as she badly needed someone to console her for the loss she has beared... and here comes her all time saviour Swayam...

i loved it..

Ek epilogue bhi de de 😳😳

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 12 years ago

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kshitija

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh
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seriously.. i enjoyed it a lot and you wrote it beutifully girl.. it came out so well..

swayam's bak bak... hayee imagine him doing bak bak😳

Sharon irritated... 😆

i felt bad for her as she badly needed someone to console her for the loss she has beared... and here comes her all time saviour Swayam...

i loved it..

Ek epilogue bhi de de 😳😳
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aww thank u so much saky...really happy u liked it...aur tujhe toh special vala thank u...hmm uske bare me sochungi...m too lazy to write epilogue...bt surely try...:D

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: KS_SWARON

aww thank u so much saky...really happy u liked it...aur tujhe toh special vala thank u...hmm uske bare me sochungi...m too lazy to write epilogue...bt surely try...:D

abhi thank you kaun bolaaa??? 😡😡😡

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

the OS was lovely.. 👍🏼
amazingly written!! 👏
loved it ❤️
i loved Swayam's bak-bak a lot.. it was so funny 😆
i am so excited after reading ur OS plz continue it...

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