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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

Don't know why but getting feeling that diya is mastermind. Mayur is cute. Plz fiza let mayank save nupur



thanska lot dear ...
mayank will save her... donot worry




thnsk alot

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

NYC update!
Loved mn bits!!!
Take care of ur health dear! 😊 šŸ˜›



thanksa lot dear

aww thnks i will tc of my self



thanks dear




thanku so much



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gopi06

interesting updt fiza
cont soon
ps:take care of your health fiza..god bless you
thanks for the pm



thanksa lot dear
glad u liked it

thnk a lot dear for ur wishes.. i m much better now šŸ¤—

Originally posted by: MyInspirationz

Lovely update Fiza 😊



thanksa lot dear

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

hey api😃

wonderfull updatešŸ‘
i love mayur scene they r soo cute
i like priya n nupur scene lol nupur n blushing but our mayank make her blushā˜ŗļø
but i donot understand diya šŸ˜•
i feel bad for mayank when he remember nupur but i kown he save her.
continous soon.byešŸ¤—



thanku so much dear
glad u liked it
he will trust him
evrything will be fine soon




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Posted: 12 years ago

Rplied to u all.. thnks for ur love

Chapter: 13

COM: so wht we have got…

Mayank: we got everything sir… u remember parakh chopra..

COM: the one who escape from ur clutch…

Mayank: ya that one… the only one… we are doubting or should I say we are 80 % sure is in all this

COM: how cum

Samrat: sir as per nupur' s information

COM: nupur's information? How ur contacting her

Mayank: we aren't sir she has sumhow mange to do so

COM: is she nuts.. It can be dam dangerous

Benji: sir yaha hum us ki baatein nhi samhj parahy woh log kaha jan pay gay

COM: kya kah rahy hoo… tum sab

Mayank: sir we didn't want to reveal all this as we are doubting that sumone is eyeing on us…. She has sumhow mange to contact from inside… and she was talking all in codex…

COM: parakh was a cop… he cant know codex … donot give me tht

Benji: nhi nhi sir yeah police waly codex nhi hain… yeah romantic codex hain… sirf is ki hi samajh arahi hai… he said spreading his hand on mayank head wch he shrugged off..

COM smile.. and mayank glared at him

Mayank: han tu teri wali koi kam nhi aai tu mera kasoor hai…

Benji: tu beta dekh zara woh kitna kam ati hai.. tu shak maat ker samjha

COM: agar tum dono k hogaya ho tu will u guys brief me…

Samrat: sir so she has told us a way to enter and also inside a bit look …. About the positions of people there two

COM: that is so great I knew it .. she being there will be an awesum help… so wht ur planning..

Mayank: sir we will be needing a team whom we will brief about the plan at the spot… plus we need an air force jet to surveillance… nothing should fly away from there…

COM: whts they are planning….

Samrat: sir there was plane wch was diverted back to Delhi airport today…

Benji: having gold of reserve dep…

COM: wait a min that plane was loaded with arms too… mayank that much arms there how u will all gonna fight this… they are high tech …

Mayank: we have to sir we just cant sit here like this and let the fly away…. With all things.. and if we take the risk of fighting them in air.. this can lead to massive destruction at the city so this option we cant use…

COM: but have this as an option…. We can make them to fly towards sum non populated area.. and than can attack….

Mayank: we can.. but that should be our second option

COM: mayank ur making it personal

Mayank: it is personal sir… he escape from my grip… he is taking the revenage .. he is saying that to me that he can do this again … and he will again escape… and this time he has my wife with him… n u pretty well knew wht does it mean… if just once he get to know she is there

COM: yes but still mayank you have been perfectly handling this all… so donot spoil it at the end…

Mayank: trust me I wont…

COM: u know how much I trust u…. u want a team get and make how so every u want at this… I told u in morning too… this case ur the head… oky…. Wasy I must say without any clue u guys did so well

Samrat: thanku sir…

Mayank: Samrat… benji… we need to select atleast 25 commandos…. We need them… benji u will be outside.. and u will be the main person who is gonna tell us wht is happening inside….

Benji: I can break the insight view… and I can lead u all the details from inside…. But the point is they wont get to know that u are entering

Samrat: he is right he will get to know in an instant..

Mayank: can u manipulate it… record and run…

Benji: dekh mayank mein kerdo ga… per unko pata chaly ga…. Ek kam hosakta hai

Mayank: kya

Benji: tum logo k kafi quick hona hoga…. Tum log ek wing se jao tu dosray wing mein tu previous ki mein video retrieve kerdo ga…. But even than…

Samrat: airports centrally air conditioned hotay hain

Benji: kya baat ker raha ahi yaar… yeah tu breaking news mein abhi news channel ko call kerta hoon…

Samrat: tu sudhara ja samjha…. Aagy sun… agar hum waha k gas leakage kerdain kisi tarah

Mayank: idea acha hai per woh hum sirf main lounge mein enter k baad kersakty us se pehly kiya tu woh jan jay ga…. Aur asa sirf last mein hosakta hai

Benji: we need a gas chemical gas jis se sab ko unconscious keridya jay..

Mayank: no tht can harm.. he almost shouted

Benji: acha unconscious nhi per asa kuch jis se visibility nah hoo

Samrat: at evry wing we need a different plan… cause agar hum ny har baar tu maar nhi sakty nah

Benji: ek kam hosakta hai… mein security room k sab se pehly check kero…. Aur phir tum loog waha pehly attack kero

Mayank: security room jaha se hum enter hongy us k opposite hai benji… we cant… sirf tu ker sakt hai…

Benji: thik hai.. ek kam kersakta hoon.. aj abhi se mein atleast ek hr ki video record kero… aur woh randomly chalo….

Mayank: recording per time ata hai… u need to change it than….

Benji: woh mera masla hai hojay ga… woh hojay ga….

Mayank: thik tu tu jasay hi hum andar jana shoor kery tab se record ker… per tu anader ki video record kasay kerya ga..jammers

Benji: parkah ki ek specialty hai he is a dam old skool.. woh woh technology use kerta hai ji ab sab bhol chukay hain.. aur is bar bhi usny yeahi kiya… jammers mein unlock ker sakta hoon

Samrat: tu andar k view thy na humain

Benji: nhi abhi nhi… mery unlock kerny ek 1 hr k andar unko kahin na kahin se pata chal jay ga k kuch garabr hai….. aur yeah unko alert kerday ga…

Mayank: he is rite… thik tu hum nupur ki information per hi chalty hain… Delhi Inn se airport tak jany k aur andar kam kerny k saray plan ab humain brief kerna hai team select kero .. n we should get to them now…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
again first 🤣

and again its nice
updt soon..
aur mera fav ff bhi updt karo jaldi jaldi plllzzz
Edited by Bhatakti_atma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

again first 🤣

and again its nice
updt soon..
aur mera fav ff bhi updt karo jaldi jaldi plllzzz



apka favt kaun sa hai ji
gopi06 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
superbbb...šŸ‘
but no nupur...??šŸ˜•
koi gal nahi...humein ugle upd8 mein iska compensation chahiye...šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

Di...
awesome part...
loved it...

Benji to sach mein bahut intelligent nikla...great...

Mazaa aata hain ye ff padh kar sachi mein...

Ab i want to see.how they are gonna proceed adnd save the civilians and Nupur...

Hope Nupur aur Baby thik ho...
Ab to baat sach mein personnel ki aa gyi hain...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG - it was awesome part
amazing

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