Asya SS: The Last Chance (Ch3- pg7)

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"Do it, Miss Farooqui," he commanded hoarsely. His eyes pleaded, the pain in them paralyzing her. She shook her head barely, unable to think straight as tears streamed down her eyes.

"Asad-" He cut her off. His jaws tensed as he picked up the gun in his hand and pointed it at her head.

"Last chance, Zoya. I've warned you... I'm not one of those men who lose their will because the woman they love is in front of them. If you don't do this now, I... I will kill you." Zoya closed her eyes and shook her head furiously.

"You can do whatever your heart desires... If you can see my die in front of your eyes, then I will except my fate gladly, but I will not live with the guilt!" She screamed into his face. "I will not let my guilt kill me!" She spat at him. "I love you, dammit!"

His eyes widened at her confession. His lips trembled as he stared into her eyes...

Are you lying, Zoya?

"I love you and if you have the guts then do it." She let the gun she held against his chest clatter onto the floor.

The deafening sound echoing throughout the emptiness.

A gunshot resounded in the distance, and tears streamed down his face...

"I'm so sorry, Zoya..."

Summary can be found on the first comment of the post! Tell me if you want me to continue this! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm not sure if I am going to be continuing this or not... but for now I'm keeping it on hiatus.

Summary: Asad and Zoya find themselves trapped inside a place- unknown and cold... a voice guides them to do what they have to get out. It turns out only one of them can live... But who will it be? Tick tock tick tock... Time is running out.

Tell me if I should continue this. 😛 Leave loads of reviews okay?

Till next time...

Sand. 🤗

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No comments? *hangs head and walks away* 🥺
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Love the intrigue. Please continue. It should be made illegal to stop stories like this 😃
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Originally posted by: Sand_Princess

No comments? *hangs head and walks away* 🥺


*Ting* yeh lo ek aur 😊
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Originally posted by: BlahBytes

Love the intrigue. Please continue. It should be made illegal to stop stories like this 😃



I have only one comment. At least you read it... I don't know if I should continue... 🥺
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Originally posted by: BlahBytes


*Ting* yeh lo ek aur 😊



*glares* Yeh thik nahi hai... Kya sabko gun wala asad pasand nahi hai?
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Originally posted by: Sand_Princess



I have only one comment. At least you read it... I don't know if I should continue... 🥺


Please continue. Comments aa jaayenge...
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Originally posted by: Sand_Princess



*glares* Yeh thik nahi hai... Kya sabko gun wala asad pasand nahi hai?


Arre gun wala Asad sabko pasand hai, bas padhne ki der hai
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Originally posted by: BlahBytes


Please continue. Comments aa jaayenge...



*sigh* Pata nahi...

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