Asya SS: The Last Chance (Ch3- pg7)

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Untitled001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: AsyaManic
confused... Cont

What are you exactly confused about? 😊 I'll try to clarify. 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
very interesting..😊

Thank you. 😃

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BlahBytes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Sand_Princess

Definitely not a dream. 😆 This is supposedly I wicked fic, let's hope I can do it justice. 😕

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: BlahBytes

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Don't be like that! 😆 It's a story. Ayaan would never kidnap or torture his brother and best friend and Asad can never kill Zoya! 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Here is the update. Hope this makes things clearer... 😃

PART 3

Asad tried to shut his eyes against the blinding light. He fought against it, but the familiar voices shouted at him to stay focused.

His eyes roamed about, here and there- everywhere searching for the face of the person he wanted to see most... And then he remembered everything.

How he had gone off to the office one day, angry and embarrassed by Zoya's deeds and then on the way he'd fallen asleep. When he's woken up, he'd found himself tied to a chair. He had been gagged with what seemed like a dirty rag, left in a room that smelt of vomit. There was nothing, but darkness then...

But then he heard it, the pitiful panting of another human. He'd known in an instant who it was. He knew her every heartbeat, he knew how she breathed when she wanted help. He gulped and tried to shout to her, but all that came out was the pathetic muffled cries of his.

She heard him despite that, returning the gesture in a similar muffled sentence. He flinched at the thought of it all. She was probably hurt, and he couldn't even think about his own pain when he knew she was suffering.

How could he have told her to just leave was beyond him. He loved her and he'd never told her that. He suddenly wished that he wasn't too late.

"Voila!" he heard a female speak. So amused and smug. The rage boiled within him. "Two love birds! Tied, unconscious and... alone. How romantic!" She cheered.

"You'd better love each other enough, or none of the two is going to leave- ever!" Her booming laugh hurt his ears.

"Asad, my darling! Great surprises lay ahead of you!" And the memories were blocked out by his mind.

All he could think about was that it wasn't his brother who had kidnapped them. It wasn't his brother who had shot at his Zoya.

"No... NO!"

"Someone help him!" He heard someone say... and that was that. He could feel the slight prick in his arms. He could feel the warmth in his veins. He could feel his eyes drooping, till he could feel nothing else.

"Zoya," her name slipped from his lips.

What do you guys think? Does that clear some stuff up? 😆 Leave me some love! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

I will send all the updates later! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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All PM's have been sent out. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

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OK so he was shot? But.. was it Tanveer? And then why did he shoot Ayaan!? Or he didnt?? Omg too many things! Too short :( Please update soon I'm addicted to your story 😊

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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#49

Originally posted by: mochhug
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OK so he was shot? But.. was it Tanveer? And then why did he shoot Ayaan!? Or he didnt?? Omg too many things! Too short :( Please update soon I'm addicted to your story 😊

No Asad wasn't shot. He was found unconscious on the crime scene. Ayaan is dead because Asad shot him, why Ayaan was there? No one knows... 😕 Yet! 😆 Yes, it was Tanveer. If you want to have an interactive session with me, add me on facebook. I'm always there. 😃