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Sorry for the very late update guys! I don't deserve to be forgiven! I got very lazy and also lost hope. This might be my last update for IWL since I don't have many readers. But this one is a pretty long update!

ISHQ WALA LOVE CH.4

-------------------(At the school)-------------------

Madhu wore her new shrirt that day. She couldn't believe her father bought a expensive shirt like this for her. He always cared about her and fullfilled her wishes.

While Madhu was walking in the hallway to her school she heard someone call her name. "Madhu!" Madhu turned around and saw her best friends Shilpa and Avantika walking towards her.

M: Hi...

Avantika: Hey Madhu...is it true?

M: Umm...what?

A: That you have to tutor Rishabh. He is so dumb. Oh I feel so bad for you.

Shilpa: Excuse Me!!! He's not dumb!! He's got style...I think you are jealous of him, Avantika!

A: (rolls eyes) Why would I be jealous of him.

S: Because...-

Madhu cut shilpa off before they started fighting again.

M: Oh come on guys don't start again!

S: Did you do what I asked you to do?

M: What?

S: Did you ask Rishabh what he thought of me?

Madhu remembered what Rishabh said about Shilpa. She would be heartbroken. He called her fat, annoying, and wierd.

Shilpa snapped her finger in front of Madhu's face.

S: Hey...what are you thinking? Answer my question yaar!

M: Umm...he...he said he knows you...

S: That's it! Nothing else...?

M: Yeah...that's it...

S: OMG! That's good enough for me! I'm so happy!

Avantika rolled her eyes

--------------------(In a classroom)-----------------

Rishabh sat down at a table next to Bittu. He rubbed his hair and sighed.

Bittu: Everything alright Rishabh?

R: I don't know...

B: What's wrong? Something happened between you and Dipali again?

R: No it's not Dipali. It's Madhubala...

B: The actress...ya she's was a wonderful lady...Ek ladki bheegi bhaagi...

R: What? No! I'm not talking about Madhubala the actress!

B: What? Then who are you talking about?

R: I'm talking about Madhubala Malik.

B: Oh...ya...that girl who's tutoring you...why what's up with her?

R: She's Trishna's little sister...

B: Trishna...? What are you gonna do now...?

R: *sighs* I...I don't know...just don't tell Avinesh.

Avinesh, Bittu, and Rishabh have been friends since they were just little boys. There weren't any secrets between them. But in order not to hurt Avinesh they have to keep secrets from him.

Avinesh walked over to where his friends where sitting and sat down. He looked at Rishabh. He wasn't his usual self. Rishabh was usually always talking and playing pranks.

Avinesh: Hey dude, everything all right?

R: Yeah I'm fine...I just have a headache.

Rishabh looked over at the door and he saw an angel laughing and smiling. She walked in with her friends and sat at a table across from Rishabh's table. He started smiling.

They were in study hall class and the teacher walked in.

Teacher: You all know what to do. Please study quietly.

Madhu looked up and saw Rishabh. She smiled at him. He mouthed "hey" and winked. Madhu smiled and looked down shyly then suddenly she felt Shilpa elbow her.

Shilpa: *whispering* OMG did you see that...he winked at me...

Avantika: Will you shut up?

Everyone started working quietly. Madhu kept stealing a glance at Rishabh every five minutes.

Unexpectedly Rishabh started singing out loud "Achchi lagti ho by Udit Narayan"...

R: Mujhe Tum Chupke Chupke Jab Aise Dekhti Ho Achchi Lagti Ho Kabhi Zulfon Se Kabhi Aanchal Se Jab Khelti HoAchchi Lagti Ho...

Madhu's face went pink...she knew he was singing for her.

Everyone was very confused and just stared at Rishabh.

Teacher: Rishabh Kundra! Why are you singing?

R: Why not? Is it a sin to sing?

T: No but you are being a distraction to other students who are diligently working!

R: Oh...sorry Nerds! I was just sharing my singing talent. But...Bittu and Avinesh don't you think this is a good song?

Bittu and Avinesh were laughing hard. Maybe because of Rishabh's rebellious nature or his horrible singing voice.

Teacher: Rishabh! Go to the principal's office! Now!

Rishabh got up and smirked towards Madhu and started walking towards the door.

R: Adios friends!

And with that he left the classroom leaving everybody stunned but his friends were still laughing.

Shilpa: OMG he is so funny but why was he singing?

Avantika: Probably flirting with some girl again. I swear...he is such a kameena!

Madhu's face got hot and she gulped.

Then the bell rang. It was time for lunch. Madhu and her friends walked towards the cafeteria. They saw an empty table and sat there.

A slim boy came and sat at their table. He had big thick glasses and blue braces.

Madhu: Oh hi Mukund.

Shilpa groaned in anger. She hated Mukund . Mainly because he was a social outcast but Madhu accepted everyone.

Mukund: Hi Madhu...I...I was wondering...if...if you would like to go the library with me this weekend.

Shilpa: *sarcastically* Ooh sounds like a very romantic date! What do you think Madhu?

Avantika burst into laughter. But their fun was cut short when a tall bony girl in a skirt and high heels appeared in front of them.

Girl: Umm...excuse me but what do you think you are doing here?

Madhu got up and faced the girl.

M: Dipali...what do you think people do at a lunch table?

Avantika, Shilpa, and Mukund fell quiet. Nobody wanted to mess with the most popular and preppy girl of the school. Dipali would make it hard for someone to live a normal life at school if they dared to mess with her.

D: hey this is our table and we sit here everyday. It's not for losers like you.

M: We got here first so we get to sit here. Go sit somewhere else.

Dipali looked back at her friends who were just like her.

D: *asks friends* What's her name?

Random girl: I think it's Madhubala.

D: Hmm...Madhoobahluh *fakes accent* it's more like loserbala or poorbala...I mean look at her clothes.

Madhu kept her stare strong at Dipali. She saw Mukund get up and move to another table.

M: Dipali, if you think that by insulting me, we will leave this table...You are wrong!

D: *cackles* Insult? Are you challenging me? Do you have any idea who you are talking to? This is nothing. The fun will begin now...!

Dipali picked up a milk carton from her lunch tray and splashed it all over Madhu!

Madhu looked down at her shirt that her father gave her. It was ruined. She heard the loud sound of laughter. Everyone in the cafeteria was laughing at her. Dipali shot her nasty smirk across her face as she looked at Madhu. Madhu looked down at her shirt again. It was soaked and was beginning to see through. She crossed her arms across her chest and dashed out the cafeteria leaving behind the sound of laughter.

She walked into the bathroom and cleaned her shirt off. It was still ruined and soaked. She felt humiliated. She could still hear the piercing sound of the laughter. Shilpa and Avantika walked in to comfort Madhu but she walked out the bathroom.

She turned around the corner and slouched down against a locker. Tears flowed down her delicate face.

Shilpa & Avantika: Madhu...are you okay?

M: Guys...I know you are trying to comfort me but I need some time alone...please...

Shilpa: But Madhu...

Avantika stopped her and shook her head. They understood that she felt ashamed and humiliated. It would be best if they let her be alone for a while. They left.

Madhu sat against the locker in the empty hallway. She put her arms on her knees and her head on her arms. She sobbed and thought about what occurred in the cafeteria. Then she felt a warm and strong hand on her shoulder.

She looked up. It was the new boy she had just become friends with.

Rishabh sat by Madhu. His eyes were full of sympathy and worry.

R: Hey...are you okay...?

M: Rishabh, please just leave me alone!

Rishabh noticed she was clutching her knees to her chest. He had seen everything that happened in the cafeteria. He took off his jacket and handed it to Madhu.
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R: Here...wear this.

She pushed his jacket away.

M: No I don't want it!

R: Well you can't walk around like that all day.

Madhu thought for a while as she bit her lower lip. Then she took the jacket and wore it. It was warm. It was filled with the fragrance of his cologne. The warmth and the scent were so comforting. She felt safe and protected. Rishabh looked at her with concern then she finally spoke.

M: Rishabh, do you have any idea what Dipali did to me?

Her eyes started to tear up. Rishabh took her hand and started walking towards the cafeteria.

R: Come with me.

M: Rishabh where are you taking me?

Rishabh and Madhu entered the cafeteria and everyone fell silent. Rishabh and Madhu stood in front of Dipali. Everyone including Dipali stared at the two who were still holding hands. Madhu started to hear the whispers again. Unknowingly she started to hide behind Rishabh and her hand was on the back of his shoulder.
Rishabh pulled Madhu next to him.

R: Dipali, apologize to Madhu...NOW!

Dipali couldn't believe what Rishabh just ordered her to do in front of the whole school.

D: Excuse me? What did you just tell me to do?

R: I told you to apologize to Madhu. Apologize means to say sorry. Do you need me to spell that out for you?

D: How come you care about this "poorbala" all of a sudden?

R: Her name is Madhubala! Are you going to apologize or are we going to do this the hard way?

D: There is no way that I'm going to apologize to her.

R: Then I'm guessing you choose the hard way.

Rishabh picked up a milk carton and handed it to Madhu.

R: You know what they say...an eye for an eye.

Madhu's hands trembled. If she did this then what would be the difference between her and Dipali. But then Madhu remembered the humiliation she had to suffer. Madhu splashed the milk on Dipali's face. Her face was covered in chocolate milk. Rishabh burst out laughing. Dipali looked at him angrily.

D: WTH Rishabh! I'm your girlfriend but you're defending her! Since when do you care about her?

R: She's my friend.

Rishabh and Madhu looked at each other and smiled. Dipali scoffed.

D: Friend? Yeah, sure. Do you seriously expect me to believe that? Rishabh are you cheating on me with this bala girl?

The whole cafeteria started whispering again. Then a boy at a table stood up.

Boy: Yeah, today he was singing a song for her in class!

Rishabh walked over to the meek looking kid. The boy gulped as he saw Rishabh walking towards him. He looked very intimidating.

R: Why do you care if I sing a song for her or not?

He walked over to Dipali.

R: Dipali, it doesn't matter if we are having an affair or not but would you like me to share to everybody about your affairs?

Dipali's face went white as a ghost. Then Rishabh took Madhu's hand and walked out the school with her.

Next chapter: Madhu meets Radha. Rishabh takes Madhu out for lunch. Padmini slaps madhu.

A/N: The milk scene actually happened in my school I just dramatized it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is why I am considering discontinuing this ff. I don't have single comment yet and only 1 like (Bani!!! 🤗 ) I feel like I wasted so much time writing this ff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls dnt discontinue this stroy..

really loving the cute story..

pls...


thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ANI0

nyc update yaar...👍🏼



Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I hope it wasn't too long.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kingofme

pls dnt discontinue this stroy..


really loving the cute story..

pls...


thanks for the pm...



Thank you! But I don't have enough readers...if I have enough I promise you that I will continue, I probably lost a lot of people cuz of my late updates. Btw I will be writing another rishbala story, maybe next week. Thanks again!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta2728

Other Works:
OS: Forgive Me


<font size="5">ISHQ WALA LOVE</font>




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*****NOW A FF*******

I'm thinking about writing my first ss called ishq wala love. If people like it then I will turn it into a ff or make a part two. And I promise no tragic ending. But I am getting ahead of myself.

Basic plot: 2 high school students in Mumbai ( the story might not make sense for Indian schools but I've never gone to an Indian school. So I'll mix in what I've seen)

Characters:

Madhubala Malik: Very Intelligent. Not popular. Bubbly. Loves to help and volunteer. Like a typical normal girl. Middle class. Apple of her parents eyes. Pretty.

Rishabh Kundra: Handsome, snappy, rude, egoistic, snobby, not very academically smart. He is mean and rude but there is a soft side to him. Rich.

Padmini & Shamsher Malik: Parents of madhu and trishna. Don't like their daughters to be around boys.

Trishna: Sister of madhu. Lies to her parents. Jealous of madhu.

Radha & Mohan Kundra: Snobby rich. They want their son to be around people his "standard".


Dipali Bhatia: rich. Rishabh's girl friend. Annoying. Makes fake accent and acts like she can't speak Hindi (those kinda people really annoy me.) Says her name like: Deep-aul-ee. Says Rishabh's name like: Ree-Shaab. Says Madhubala's name like: mad-hoo-blah-luh.


Dipali's pronunciation is what I have to deal with during class attendance. My name is Shweta, but people say it like sh-way-tah. I just go by that now but I've heard some really crazy pronunciations of my name.


****More characters will be added. Sorry I can't tell you the whole plot yet, but I promise it won't be cliche.

Give me some feedback.


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OMG alright so like I clicked on this cause I love the song Ishq Wala Love and so I was reading this and BAHAHAHA OMG your description of Dipali--gosh so relatable SO many Indian people are like her. And omg that irks me so bad when people from here and the Indians from India pretend they can't speak hindi, like W*F bro? And especially when they try to fake an accent. God like kill me now bahaha and omg your name is Shweta or should I say Shwayta too! Bahahaha so I literally feel that feel LOL.

Anyways, I shall read this later.

-Shweta
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Originally posted by: shweta2728

Here goes my first ss...hope you like it...don't forget to comment.

*phone rings*

"Hello, Mohan Kundra speaking." Mohan Kundra is a very rich man with a successful company.

"Hello sir, I am your son Rishabh's principal. I have to talk to you about him."

Mohan looked down and shook his head and sighed. He thought to himself, "What did Rishabh do now?". Mohan was tired of dealing with his son all the time.

"Did he get into another fight again?" Asked Mohan.

"No, actually this is about his grades. You see, his grades are very low and we recommend him some tutoring." Said the principal.

"Oh well that's not a huge problem. I'll get the best of the best tutor for him."

"We have a new program in our school, it's called student tutors. So a student who needs help with academics can get help from an intelligent peer."

"Wouldn't it be better for Rishabh to get a professional tutor?" Questioned Mohan.

"Well our student tutors have outstanding grades and backgrounds. They will be a good influence on your son. They will build a friendly relationship. This might positively affect your son's behavior."

Mohan thought to himself. He was tired of Rishabh's grades, fighting, coming home late, etc.

"Okay, but get my son the best tutor."

"There is a girl, her name is Madhubala Malik. She is a brilliant student and she helps out in the community a lot too. I think she should be Rishabh's student tutor. They're in the same class too."

"Yes, that will be fine. Bye." Mohan was hopeful that Rishabh will change and be able to take over his businesses some day. He wants to see a independent and serious Rishabh.

------------------At the Kundra Mansion---------

"Radha, Is Rishabh home yet? I have to talk to him."

"No, not yet.

"What?!?! It's 1 o'clock at night."

"Why can't you just let our son Rishabh be happy? You're always yelling at him."

"You spoiled him." Mohan told radha about his conversation with the principal.

"That's a pretty good idea. But will Rishabh agree?"

"I'll see how he doesn't."

Then Mohan and Radha heard a motorcycle stopping. Then a very handsome boy walked in throwing his keychain in the air and catching it.

"Hey dad and mom!" He smiled.

"How was the party beta?" Asked radha.

"Forget that. Rishabh is this some time to come home? It's past one!" Bellowed Mohan.

"Dad please not again. I'm in a good mood." Replied Rishabh.

Mohan then told Rishabh about the conversation he had with the principal and told him that the first tutoring session was tomorrow.

"What? No, I'm not going. You can't make me go. And that girl..." Argued Rishabh.

"if you don't go, just like how I gave you your car, motorcycle, phone, etc., I can take it away too. Your grades better come up or else. And what about that girl?"

"Dad she's not popular. I can't be seen around with her."

"Well...if she's not our standard..." Said radha.

"no, you stay out of this radha. Rishabh once your grades get up you don't have to be with her. It's not like we're asking you to marry her."

Rishabh knew there was no point in arguing anymore and he couldn't risk his things for it. Rishabh agreed to go to the sessions. He walked up to his room and fell back on his bed.

"Madhubala...ahaan...we'll see how this goes." He smirked.

---------------At the Malik's House-------------

"Madhu? Where are you? Asked Padmini as she walked to get daughter's room.

In the room was a girl surrounded with books. She turned around. Her black curly hair in ringlets flowed in the air. She was extremely beautiful. That was what scared her parents the most.

"Maa, good thing you came. I forgot to tell you that the principal called. And I will be tutoring someone now." Said Madhu sweetly.

"What's her name? Do you know her?"

"HIS name is Rishabh Kundra. And yes I know him he's in the same grade as me."

"he? It's a boy...? We'll do you have to tutor him?"

"Maa...this is a responsibility I took up and I can't just back off."

"Fine, just keep the relationship at studies and not any further...okay?"

"Okay maa..." She smiled.

She couldn't believe her mom thought she could fall for a guy like Rishabh. He was so rude and annoying. How will she deal with him.
--------------------End of Part One--------------

Next part, Rishabh and Madhu will meet.

Give me some feedback or hit like.
This was a lot of typing. It makes my thumbs hurt cuz I typed it on my phone.

Chapter 2


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Cliched but who said I didn't like cliches? Lol I hope this isn't A Walk to Remember 2.0
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Shweta (lol, do you have to deal with "sh-way-ta"),

Yes it's ridiculous when Indians pretend like they can't speak Hindi. Why are they ashamed of their language? Some kids in my cousin's neighborhood are Indians and their parents taught them not to speak in Hindi and act like they can't speak in Hindi in front of others even if they are Indian. I grew up here in USA but I am very fluent in Hindi cuz I spoke it at home so I wouldn't forget it. See I could go on and on about this topic and don't even get me started on fake accents! Best example Priyanka Chopra (no offense). Thanks for commenting. I hope you will read this ff.
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High school drama. Aaah High School Drama.

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