FF: Ishq wala love Ch. 4 - pg 9 (5/12)

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<font size="5">ISHQ WALA LOVE</font>




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*****NOW A FF*******

I'm thinking about writing my first ss called ishq wala love. If people like it then I will turn it into a ff or make a part two. And I promise no tragic ending. But I am getting ahead of myself.

Basic plot: 2 high school students in Mumbai ( the story might not make sense for Indian schools but I've never gone to an Indian school. So I'll mix in what I've seen)

Characters:

Madhubala Malik: Very Intelligent. Not popular. Bubbly. Loves to help and volunteer. Like a typical normal girl. Middle class. Apple of her parents eyes. Pretty.

Rishabh Kundra: Handsome, snappy, rude, egoistic, snobby, not very academically smart. He is mean and rude but there is a soft side to him. Rich.

Padmini & Shamsher Malik: Parents of madhu and trishna. Don't like their daughters to be around boys.

Trishna: Sister of madhu. Lies to her parents. Jealous of madhu.

Radha & Mohan Kundra: Snobby rich. They want their son to be around people his "standard".


Dipali Bhatia: rich. Rishabh's girl friend. Annoying. Makes fake accent and acts like she can't speak Hindi (those kinda people really annoy me.) Says her name like: Deep-aul-ee. Says Rishabh's name like: Ree-Shaab. Says Madhubala's name like: mad-hoo-blah-luh.


Dipali's pronunciation is what I have to deal with during class attendance. My name is Shweta, but people say it like sh-way-tah. I just go by that now but I've heard some really crazy pronunciations of my name.


****More characters will be added. Sorry I can't tell you the whole plot yet, but I promise it won't be cliche.

Give me some feedback.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Plot
Waiting for the first part of your SS
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Ahah no way!!!
My Dark Ties FF had like almost the same concept with the school and Madhu/RK's characters...except at the last minute I completely deleted it all and came up with a different concept now!

Anyways, great concept! Looking forward to this.
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Originally posted by: PrittB

Ahah no way!!!

My Dark Ties FF had like almost the same concept with the school and Madhu/RK's characters...except at the last minute I completely deleted it all and came up with a different concept now!

Anyways, great concept! Looking forward to this.


No I'm not psychic lol (People, important lesson: don't confuse psycho and psychic...people will give you wierd looks) back to the subject...I'll make sure it's different and unique.
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niz lookin forward plzz add me in ur pm list :)
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So do you guys think I should write this ss?
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Here goes my first ss...hope you like it...don't forget to comment.

*phone rings*

"Hello, Mohan Kundra speaking." Mohan Kundra is a very rich man with a successful company.

"Hello sir, I am your son Rishabh's principal. I have to talk to you about him."

Mohan looked down and shook his head and sighed. He thought to himself, "What did Rishabh do now?". Mohan was tired of dealing with his son all the time.

"Did he get into another fight again?" Asked Mohan.

"No, actually this is about his grades. You see, his grades are very low and we recommend him some tutoring." Said the principal.

"Oh well that's not a huge problem. I'll get the best of the best tutor for him."

"We have a new program in our school, it's called student tutors. So a student who needs help with academics can get help from an intelligent peer."

"Wouldn't it be better for Rishabh to get a professional tutor?" Questioned Mohan.

"Well our student tutors have outstanding grades and backgrounds. They will be a good influence on your son. They will build a friendly relationship. This might positively affect your son's behavior."

Mohan thought to himself. He was tired of Rishabh's grades, fighting, coming home late, etc.

"Okay, but get my son the best tutor."

"There is a girl, her name is Madhubala Malik. She is a brilliant student and she helps out in the community a lot too. I think she should be Rishabh's student tutor. They're in the same class too."

"Yes, that will be fine. Bye." Mohan was hopeful that Rishabh will change and be able to take over his businesses some day. He wants to see a independent and serious Rishabh.

------------------At the Kundra Mansion---------

"Radha, Is Rishabh home yet? I have to talk to him."

"No, not yet.

"What?!?! It's 1 o'clock at night."

"Why can't you just let our son Rishabh be happy? You're always yelling at him."

"You spoiled him." Mohan told radha about his conversation with the principal.

"That's a pretty good idea. But will Rishabh agree?"

"I'll see how he doesn't."

Then Mohan and Radha heard a motorcycle stopping. Then a very handsome boy walked in throwing his keychain in the air and catching it.

"Hey dad and mom!" He smiled.

"How was the party beta?" Asked radha.

"Forget that. Rishabh is this some time to come home? It's past one!" Bellowed Mohan.

"Dad please not again. I'm in a good mood." Replied Rishabh.

Mohan then told Rishabh about the conversation he had with the principal and told him that the first tutoring session was tomorrow.

"What? No, I'm not going. You can't make me go. And that girl..." Argued Rishabh.

"if you don't go, just like how I gave you your car, motorcycle, phone, etc., I can take it away too. Your grades better come up or else. And what about that girl?"

"Dad she's not popular. I can't be seen around with her."

"Well...if she's not our standard..." Said radha.

"no, you stay out of this radha. Rishabh once your grades get up you don't have to be with her. It's not like we're asking you to marry her."

Rishabh knew there was no point in arguing anymore and he couldn't risk his things for it. Rishabh agreed to go to the sessions. He walked up to his room and fell back on his bed.

"Madhubala...ahaan...we'll see how this goes." He smirked.

---------------At the Malik's House-------------

"Madhu? Where are you? Asked Padmini as she walked to get daughter's room.

In the room was a girl surrounded with books. She turned around. Her black curly hair in ringlets flowed in the air. She was extremely beautiful. That was what scared her parents the most.

"Maa, good thing you came. I forgot to tell you that the principal called. And I will be tutoring someone now." Said Madhu sweetly.

"What's her name? Do you know her?"

"HIS name is Rishabh Kundra. And yes I know him he's in the same grade as me."

"he? It's a boy...? We'll do you have to tutor him?"

"Maa...this is a responsibility I took up and I can't just back off."

"Fine, just keep the relationship at studies and not any further...okay?"

"Okay maa..." She smiled.

She couldn't believe her mom thought she could fall for a guy like Rishabh. He was so rude and annoying. How will she deal with him.
--------------------End of Part One--------------

Next part, Rishabh and Madhu will meet.

Give me some feedback or hit like.
This was a lot of typing. It makes my thumbs hurt cuz I typed it on my phone.

Chapter 2


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Edited by shweta2728 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweety...great story so far! I really like it alot! Update soon please! 👍🏼





"The heart was made to be broken."

~Oscar Wilde~
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Originally posted by: SiMi81

<font size="6" color="#6600cc">sweety...great story so far! I really like it alot! Update soon please!👍🏼</font>







<font color="#ff0000" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">"The
heart was made to be broken."
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<font color="#ff0000" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">
~Oscar Wilde~
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Thanks but I will only update if I have enough readers. But this is my first ss, so there is a lot of room for improvements!
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Nice Start of the story

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