Kya Hadsaa Kya Haqeeqat P-4-Pg-4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Today in social I was board so I wrote this fanfic because my other one I lefted it home so this idea came in my head, but to late you all know this dosen't have Sashank in it. I hope you all will like this one but if you guys want to give me idea's for how Shiv and Gauri meet just PM me by tomorrow.


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Kya Hadsaa Kya Haqeeqat is about five sisters, Kashish, Bani, Shruti, Gauri and Neha. Four of them live in Mumbai and Neha is studing in Calcutta for two years. These girls live for each other and die for each other. One day their Mansi and his son Rahul came to live with them after many years, Shruti finded wired but no use because they can't do any thing. Rahul knew the Kapoor family pretty well because he had raped Palak during his college time and he was in jail. Palak's brother Shiv, Amar and Rishi have sworen to ruin the Basu. What will happen to these five girls? Will they have to pay the prize of their cousin's mistake?

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Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi so cool con't please and con't everyday so i won't have to die 😆
cause this fanfic looks intersting
so good luck for the start 😊
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Kya Hadsaa Kya Hageeqat

Part-I


Jaya Aadya Shakti
Ma Jaya Aadya Shakti
Akhand Brhamand dipavya
panave pragatya ma
Om Jayo Jayo Ma Jagdambe
(At the Kapoor's house)

Dwitiya Mehsarup Shivshakti janu
ma shivshakti janu
brahma ganapti gaye
brahma ganapti gaye
hardayi har ma
Om Jayo Jayo Ma Jagdambe


Kashish took the aarti round to everyone in her house than all three went to their mummy and papa's picture hanging on the wall.

Kashish- Mummy Papa, today is your guys anniversary we all miss you a lot and today is Bani's interview at a company please be with her.
Shurti- Many Happy Anniversary mummy and papa
Bani- Happy Anniversary please give me your aishwaad
Gauri- I love you Mummy and Papa, Happy Anniversary aur Neha also wish you guys.

Sujal- Bhaiyya today you have an interview with some Bani right
Jai- Yes Sujal and I hope of she past this one because you know dad he pass everyone without experience
Sujal- True, all the best
Jai- Thanks, I'll need that


Sujal went to his cabin and Jai walked up to his cabin on the fifth floor. Jai was looking at the clock waiting for his interview. Kashish walked in Sujal's cabin with some files that he needs to be sign.
Bani walked up the stairs to Jai's cabin and knocked the door.
Jai- come in?
Bani open the door and walked in looking at the ground while Jai was busy looking at some file.
Jai- Mr. Omi please give me that file in your hand.
Bani- Sir I'm not Mr. Omi, but I am Bani

Sujal- I want to look at my love for a longer time because tomorrow I'm going out of town.
Kashish- What?
Sujal- Business
Kashish- Fine do much business trips right know, but after we are married than no more work for you Mr.
Sujal- Oh really
Jai- I'm so sorry, please have a seat Ms. Bani
Kashish- Sujal why are you looking at me like this?
Jai- Ms. Bani I have to say that you got this job and you can start tomorrow.
Bani- Thank you
Sujal- Bhaiyya can we come in?
Jai- Sujal it's also your cabin so you don't need to ask for permission.
Sujal and Kashish walked in, Jai Sujal meet Bani.
Bani- Di aap!

I hope you guys love this part.

Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Loved the summary! Please continue it soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I hope you guys will like this part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I liked it! There was just a bit of confusioon since i don't watch any of those other shows 😃 😃 😃 continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gud one 😃 when shiv gauri gonna meet 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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The first part was really good.
I really like the story and concept.
Update soon!

Yuks
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I would like to thank all these people for leaving me all the good comments. Ching, pm4eva,fida-cute,sweety567,queenyuks and crystalclear thankyou so much i hope you all will love this part.

Kya Hadsaa Kya Haqeeqat

Part-II
Recap-
Jai took Bani's interview and Sujal told Kashish he had to go out of town. After Sujal went to Jai's cabin and Jai introduced Sujal to Bani when Bani stood up saying Di apna.


Kashish-
Bani what are you doing here?

Bani-Di you know I had a interview, but I didn't tell you the company's name.
Kashish- What?
Bani- Sorry Di I wanted to tell you after the puja at our place
Kashish placed her hand on Bani's head than said Bani actually I'm happy because know I got someone else to work with.

Bani- What Di, you also work here?
Kashish- Yes Bani

Jai- Hold on you guys are sisters
Kashish- Yes, but more shockingly I have three other sisters, one who is studding in Calcutta and other two here.

Shurti was getting ready for the puja while Gauri was making the food.

Di will Bani get the job

Shurti- Gauri I hope so

Gauri- Di I don't remember mummy that well but Kashish Di aur apna always have been a mother to me.
Shurti placed her hand on Gauri than hugged her while looking at their parents picture.

After the puja was done they cleaned up the area and sat around the fireplace talking about things like their childhood, school, Calcutta and Shurti asked Kashish what type of life partner she wants.

Kashish- I want a person who can be hard working and also can romance at the same time thinking about Sujal.
Shurti- Will you tell us when you find him?
Bani, Gauri - Come on Di you have too aur we won't tell you about us.
Kashish- Okay than today we all have to tell our life partners and promise that the day we meet our right choices we tell each other first even Neha.
Kashish- I'll tell later, but Shurti tell me your type of life partner than you Bani after Gauri.
Okay........

Shurti- My life partner must have all the good looks and respect for others.
Bani- Sweet, loving person who can handle everything.
Gauri- I want a life partner who is more like Papa
A person lying on his bed looking at pictures.

Shurti- continue
Gauri- Sweet, loving human-being
Open's a can of beer than takes a sip



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Posted: 19 years ago
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That was pretty good continue soon

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