The Winner Takes It All - Asya OS

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Hola beauties!

I had this idea that I penned down. Let me know how it was :)

This OS shows Zoya handling the whole blood fiasco a little bit differently.

I hope you like it.

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He held her hand. Afraid that if he let go...she would leave. And she couldn't leave him. She wouldn't leave him. He knew that. But still, he held her hand.

The drive was extremely bumpy. The car jolted from side to side.

He looked at her disappearing form.

He had to drive faster.

But, the car kept slowing down.

He kept shouting, "Move you piece of shit. I need to save her. Move!"

But. It didn't. The more he shouted, the slower it became.

And as soon as the car stopped. She disappeared too.

"Zoyaaa!"

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"Asad?"

He was shivering.

He slowly opened his eyes. It was just a dream. Just a dream. He took gulps of air. Trying, desperately to calm himself down. But the feeling of loosing her was too terrifying.

"Ji Ammi?"

"You were shouting."

"It was just a bad dream Ammi. Go to sleep. It's alright."

"Are you sure? You were shouting for someone. I didn't really hear who'"

"Go to bed Ammi. It's alright."

He watched her retreat. And surely, his thoughts over-powered him. She slept a few rooms away. But he couldn't face her anymore. He'never wanted to face her. She somehow brought out the worst in him. Maybe it was his tendency to keep his loved ones safe'but her. *Sigh*. Just a piece of work. She had totally disintegrated his life and he had every second of it. Okay...maybe not every second.

He laid his head down. Thinking of her. Thinking of how she feels in his arms. How lovely she smells.

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"How dare he accuse me of such lies?"

"It's alright Bhabhi, you know Bhaijaan. He'll calm down by tomorrow."

"Stop calling me that."

"What?"

"I said stop calling me Bhabhi...please."

"But you are my Bhabhi'"

"Not according to your Bhaijaan."

"Oh come on, Zoya. Don't let that stop you. I mean you're Zoya Farooqi. You can do anything. So. You need to get him to confess his love."

"What love? He hates me. And at this point I hate him too."

"Don't lie Bhabhi. You lub him! I can see it in your eyes. They soften whenever he's around."

"Well, Sherlock, tell me then. What about his damned eyes?"

"Well, everyone who knows him reads those eyes. You know that. I know you do. But just because you asked me to confirm what you think Bhabhi, I shall tell you. His eyes say that you light up his life. If it wasn't for you, his heart wouldn't have loved someone. That you make him smile. That you make his life better. So...in conclusion...he lubs you too!"

"God Najma, you are so dramatic."

"Thanks Bhabhi."

They giggled. Both comforting each other with whatever they could. They had an extremely long day and a horrible night. And all because of a blood sample. They had decided to let their minds figure out the puzzle in the morning. They were tired.

But the only thing that Zoya thought of before she drifted off to sleep was that she would find out the truth and that Akdu Ahmed Khan would pay. Her smirk lasted through the night. And the thought gave her peace for the night.

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"Jammy"

"Yes Tanu? How are you feeling now?"

"I'm fine Jammy. But...Jammy...woh...um.."

"What is it, Tanu? You can tell me."

"Woh...Jammy, actually Khala asked me to call you...she said it's urgent and that you come right away. I hope I didn't disturb you."

"Oh. Alright. Thank you Tanu. Please go rest."

She watched him walk to his Ammi's door.

"Poor Jammy. I shall only rest when that kambhaqt is gone. Till then..."

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"Ji Ammi? Najma? What happened?"

"Where. Is. She?"

Damn. She's pissed. "Who Ammi? Tanu? She's probably in her room."

"Not her. Zoya. Where is she, Asad?"

"Why are you asking me? She's probably in her room."

"No. She. Isn't. She's gone. And all that's left of her is this letter."

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To everyone who cares,

I thank you. I love you. But enough is enough. I've left. Don't worry. I'll be okay.

Phupi, you have been a mother to me. And you shall be for the rest of my life'so I thank you for that. Even if it was for a little while, I felt what it's like to have a mother. And I have to say'there's no greater happiness. I shall miss you so much that it shall hurt. Please take care. I am sorry that I have left you at this time. And I am even more sorry that I couldn't fulfill your wish of getting your son married. But I trust that you shall find someone more suited to your family. Because like I've been told, countless times, I definitely don't fit in."

Najma. My sister. I have so much love for you that it's unbelievable. I always said that I never had any siblings. But, I can't say that anymore. You're gonna be sister'forever. I hope that I taught you to take care of yourself. Because darling, you don't need some man to take care of you. You know what you are? You're like sunshine on a rainy day ' you might not make the rain go away'.but you make it easier to handle because of the rainbow.

Tanvir. I apologize If I have ever hurt you.

Mr. Khan. Here's a few pictures. One clearly shows that you wrongly accused me. I hope that you understand that I am not always to blame. And that I take my relationships extremely seriously. Take care.

Good-bye.

Love always,

Zoya.

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Um.

SO?

What did you think? Huh? Huh?

Temme!


P.S. There's prolly another part to this. But I shall post it only if you guys wanna read it. Otherwise It'll be for my private pleasure. :P

P.P.S There's another OS I've written. It's quirky. Let me know how it is.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3580600/asya-os-the-beach

Ciao!

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KulfiBai thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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applause

Now that is what I call a FAB ending! Badass Farooqui is BACK! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tum aise kaise chod sakti ho?????????? nahin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uss tannu ne aisa kiya hain na? i bet she is behind all this...zoe kabhi aisa nahi karegi..

mangalpuri asad ke liye waiting dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thk its zo n naj s plan!! well done
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And...Zoya Farooqi is back! This shoulda happened in d show! Zoya has some dignity for crying out loud! Amazingly written! Continue ASAP!

-Sharyn
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I sooo want the second part now :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GOSH! Continue soon no ASAP PLEEJ😳
NainaAlex thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is our Zoya darling...
now give us the next part
grad2011 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome plzz do update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You write well. Do continue and tell me that she didn't leave 😳

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