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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ever_Sunshine

OMG!!! This was freaking Awesome!!!

I loved each and every pasrt of it...
Sach mein...
And aww... So cute... Happy Birthday!!!!


Gumaan!!! I love it when someone irritates her (Coz I cant na!)

This was super Dhamakedar OS yaar!!!

Keep writing!!

Maya

Thank you so much Maya🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome di,ur os deserves dis title "BEST OS OF THE WEEK"😳
N i must say u hv a great sixthsense,u knew tat kumari is actually helping saras
Unintentionally he lowered his head as he finally connected the joint of the necklace and pressed his lips on her shoulders. Kumud felt the chills running all over her body, melting her from within, by his touch. She tilted her head to her right encouraging and enjoying the new feeling.☺️☺️
yeh dono besharam,☺️
Kumud offered a piece of cake to Saras, who obediently ate it in one gulp and took hold of her hand immediately. Kumud asked 'Now what?' He smiled, pointing at the chocolate cream covering her fingers, lifting her hand to his mouth. Slowly, one finger after the other, Saras sucked the chocolate cream on her fingers, still looking at the blushing Kumud.☺️☺️
loved it di,will u continue this one,ek last confession part banta hei,plzzz😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

awesome di,ur os deserves dis title "BEST OS OF THE WEEK"😳

N i must say u hv a great sixthsense,u knew tat kumari is actually helping saras
Unintentionally he lowered his head as he finally connected the joint of the necklace and pressed his lips on her shoulders. Kumud felt the chills running all over her body, melting her from within, by his touch. She tilted her head to her right encouraging and enjoying the new feeling.☺️☺️
yeh dono besharam,☺️
Kumud offered a piece of cake to Saras, who obediently ate it in one gulp and took hold of her hand immediately. Kumud asked 'Now what?' He smiled, pointing at the chocolate cream covering her fingers, lifting her hand to his mouth. Slowly, one finger after the other, Saras sucked the chocolate cream on her fingers, still looking at the blushing Kumud.☺️☺️
loved it di,will u continue this one,ek last confession part banta hei,plzzz😳

Thanks a lot sweetie🤗
Confession is happening before me writing it, but will write one during the weekend😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Thanks a lot sweetie🤗
Confession is happening before me writing it, but will write one during the weekend😃

yeah plzz plzz ,will wait for it😃 n make it a lil more romantic than the show 😉
Edited by -bornalee- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

yeah plzz plzz ,will wait for it😃 n make it a lil more romantic than the show 😉

Ok, but are you allowed to read steamy stuffs?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Ok, but are you allowed to read steamy stuffs?😆

yeah ofcourse ,m 19 now n soon will turn 20😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wrote this on request our lovely Toni, Saru and Bonu. Please leave a comment as it encourages me a lot.
Statutory warning issued (15+)

Whispers in the night

Kumud sighed as she reached the shade of the mango tree. Finding her a comfortable situation she sat beside the tree, took a small mirror from her bag and looked at her very own reflection from it. She has become so tanned for being under the hot sun for so long and she hated herself for not listening to her aunt when she asked to put on face mask. She smiled shyly to herself thinking what she would say to Saras when he comes.

She saw him coming running towards her like an impatient lover, who was excited to meet his girl friend. His smile has perfected his great looks making his deep eyes to glow even more. He stopped a few inches away from her and caught his breathe before stretching his hand to her, helping her to get up. He said, 'Kumud' and she slowly lifted her gaze from his shoes and then up. He had his shirt open due to the heat; she saw that but did not want to delve into. She wanted to put her hand on his chest, next to his heart and feel the rhythm of his heartbeat but felt a strange kind of shyness withheld her. She felt a tingling within her as she lifted her trembling hands to touch him.

'Kumud, what are you doing here at this time?' She came to her senses as another teacher called her. She had realized that it was just a hallucination. Why hasn't he come? Shaking her head she answered her, 'nothing, I'm going home' and headed towards home. What could have happened that he didn't come, she thought. Has he been playing with her emotions? No, he could not do it. She had managed to heal her broken heart before and she cannot collect the pieces if it gets shattered again.

Kumud pushed open the gate of the Haveli hard, surprising Sunny and Saras who were coming towards it. Seeing her angry face Saras went to her and said 'Kumud I'm sorry. I'm just'I was coming'' kumud gestured him to stop by showing him her hand and hurried inside. Saras followed her running, asking her to forgive and talk to him. Kumud stopped for a second, looked at him angrily before getting into her room, closing the door on his face.

'Kumud please open the door and listen to me' Saras pleaded still knocking at the door. 'She won't open the door now' Kumari said, asking Saras to leave kumud alone as she thought it would be the best option then. Saras nodded his head in agreement and walked away thinking how to make Kumud understand what stopped him from going there.

Kumud stayed inside the room the rest of the day, refused to come out for dinner too. Saras had been walking beside her room every now and then hoping that she would open the door anytime and come out. Sunny tried to convince his friend, but Saras did not listen to him and decided to stay there until he sees her.

Saras was awakened with the sound of Kumud's paayal and was shocked to see darkness everywhere. He wondered when he had fallen asleep waiting by her door. He rose to his feet and moved aside when he heard the door unlocking. Like a thief who was about to get caught, he held his breath and waited in the dark to see who was coming.

Kumud came out looking sleepy yet sexy with her hair open and her dhupatta on one side revealing her curved figure. He could not take his eyes off her. He had been spell bound from the moment he saw her like this. He wanted to devour her right then, and he did it with his eyes. He felt the burning desire within him and he knew it showed in his eyes as his eyes followed her moves. Breathing in the sweet scent of her perfume, he followed her to the kitchen.

He stood by the door, his eyes still following all her movements, as she quickly drank the water. She felt that someone was watching her from far way, so she turned around and found him by the door watching her, smiling. His gaze made her trembles, making her weak on her knees and she accidentally spilled some water on her blouse. He could not help himself from wetting his lips upon seeing her blouse wet. She asked 'what are you doing here?' trying to make her sound angry. 'Nothing! Just watching the beautiful you' he said as though he was dreaming, making her to forget what happened earlier that day.

He walked to her, just like he did in her dreams and covered her blouse with her dhupatta and said 'I'm really sorry Kumud. I never intend to make you wait, but you know mom wanted me to take her to the temple.' So it was all because of his step mother, Guman. Kumud knew that he would not have made her wait without a reason. Knowing the truth her anger vanished, as she knows how much Guman tries to separate them. With a sigh she said 'I'm ...' He hushed her by putting his hand on her lips and said 'you talk a lot. It's my turn now.'

Again she insisted on talking 'no, actually...' This time he didn't move his hands, but hushed her by covering her mouth by his. He pulled her to him, pressing her against his firm body as his hands found their way around her neck and then her hair. The sweet taste of his lips made Kumud to part her lips further more helping him to explore every inch of her lips, tongue and even her teeth. She felt that she supple as the desire took over her mind and soul as she heard him murmuring his desire with his eyes closed in concentration. She did not realize how her hands moved, pulling his head towards her, touching and exploring every inch of his neck and shoulders.

Slowly he let go off her lips, as she gasped for some air but nipped her neck with his lips, teeth and ran his tongue along the throat. Kumud moaned in response to him and wound her arms around his waist reaching up to his shoulder blades. He bent her head behind to get better access and rained kisses on her neck and found his way to her ear and whispered 'I love you.'

Edited by hunnybunch - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
azzu its truly romantic and 18+ ..u wrote it beautifully hun!! Gosh i felt the heat reading it..😳..cant express anything else in words👏..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG , this is WOW !!!
Simply wow !!! I am in complete awestruck right now ! This was so fantastic that I almost shivered when the kissing part came ! <3 WOW!!!
It was as if everything was happening in real , it was so beautiful and so pure !! I loved the way Saras said that you talk a lot , awww , lovely !!! Keep writing more , I am you fan now 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Please leave a comment as it encourages me a lot.
Statutory warning issued (15+)

Whispers in the night

Kumud sighed as she reached the shade of the mango tree. Finding her a comfortable situation she sat beside the tree, took a small mirror from her bag and looked at her very own reflection from it. She has become so tanned for being under the hot sun for so long and she hated herself for not listening to her aunt when she asked to put on face mask. She smiled shyly to herself thinking what she would say to Saras when he comes.

She saw him coming running towards her like an impatient lover, who was excited to meet his girl friend. His smile has perfected his great looks making his deep eyes to glow even more. He stopped a few inches away from her and caught his breathe before stretching his hand to her, helping her to get up. He said, 'Kumud' and she slowly lifted her gaze from his shoes and then up. He had his shirt open due to the heat; she saw that but did not want to delve into. She wanted to put her hand on his chest, next to his heart and feel the rhythm of his heartbeat but felt a strange kind of shyness withheld her. She felt a tingling within her as she lifted her trembling hands to touch him.

'Kumud, what are you doing here at this time?' She came to her senses as another teacher called her. She had realized that it was just a hallucination. Why hasn't he come? Shaking her head she answered her, 'nothing, I'm going home' and headed towards home. What could have happened that he didn't come, she thought. Has he been playing with her emotions? No, he could not do it. She had managed to heal her broken heart before and she cannot collect the pieces if it gets shattered again.

Kumud pushed open the gate of the Haveli hard, surprising Sunny and Saras who were coming towards it. Seeing her angry face Saras went to her and said 'Kumud I'm sorry. I'm just'I was coming'' kumud gestured him to stop by showing him her hand and hurried inside. Saras followed her running, asking her to forgive and talk to him. Kumud stopped for a second, looked at him angrily before getting into her room, closing the door on his face.

'Kumud please open the door and listen to me' Saras pleaded still knocking at the door. 'She won't open the door now' Kumari said, asking Saras to leave kumud alone as she thought it would be the best option then. Saras nodded his head in agreement and walked away thinking how to make Kumud understand what stopped him from going there.

Kumud stayed inside the room the rest of the day, refused to come out for dinner too. Saras had been walking beside her room every now and then hoping that she would open the door anytime and come out. Sunny tried to convince his friend, but Saras did not listen to him and decided to stay there until he sees her.

Saras was awakened with the sound of Kumud's paayal and was shocked to see darkness everywhere. He wondered when he had fallen asleep waiting by her door. He rose to his feet and moved aside when he heard the door unlocking. Like a thief who was about to get caught, he held his breath and waited in the dark to see who was coming.

Kumud came out looking sleepy yet sexy with her hair open and her dhupatta on one side revealing her curved figure. He could not take his eyes off her. He had been spell bound from the moment he saw her like this. He wanted to devour her right then, and he did it with his eyes. He felt the burning desire within him and he knew it showed in his eyes as his eyes followed her moves. Breathing in the sweet scent of her perfume, he followed her to the kitchen.

He stood by the door, his eyes still following all her movements, as she quickly drank the water. She felt that someone was watching her from far way, so she turned around and found him by the door watching her, smiling. His gaze made her trembles, making her weak on her knees and she accidentally spilled some water on her blouse. He could not help himself from wetting his lips upon seeing her blouse wet. She asked 'what are you doing here?' trying to make her sound angry. 'Nothing! Just watching the beautiful you' he said as though he was dreaming, making her to forget what happened earlier that day.

He walked to her, just like he did in her dreams and covered her blouse with her dhupatta and said 'I'm really sorry Kumud. I never intend to make you wait, but you know mom wanted me to take her to the temple.' So it was all because of his step mother, Guman. Kumud knew that he would not have made her wait without a reason. Knowing the truth her anger vanished, as she knows how much Guman tries to separate them. With a sigh she said 'I'm ...' He hushed her by putting his hand on her lips and said 'you talk a lot. It's my turn now.'

Again she insisted on talking 'no, actually...' This time he didn't move his hands, but hushed her by covering her mouth by his. He pulled her to him, pressing her against his firm body as his hands found their way around her neck and then her hair. The sweet taste of his lips made Kumud to part her lips further more helping him to explore every inch of her lips, tongue and even her teeth. She felt that she supple as the desire took over her mind and soul as she heard him murmuring his desire with his eyes closed in concentration. She did not realize how her hands moved, pulling his head towards her, touching and exploring every inch of his neck and shoulders.

Slowly he let go off her lips, as she gasped for some air but nipped her neck with his lips, teeth and ran his tongue along the throat. Kumud moaned in response to him and wound her arms around his waist reaching up to his shoulder blades. He bent her head behind to get better access and rained kisses on her neck and found his way to her ear and whispered 'I love you.'


Very nice and very romantic.

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