OS - Safe in his arms P75

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: saru143
azzu its truly romantic and 18+ ..u wrote it beautifully hun!! Gosh i felt the heat reading it..😳..cant express anything else in words👏..🤗

thanks a ton Sweetie🤗

I hope I don't get a warning from MODs😆

You told me to write a hot one, right? So fulfilled your dream😉

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-Claptrap-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

wow superb how romantic loved it👏this is for u🤗keep writing😊

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: ..Rish..
OMG , this is WOW !!!
Simply wow !!! I am in complete awestruck right now ! This was so fantastic that I almost shivered when the kissing part came ! <3 WOW!!!
It was as if everything was happening in real , it was so beautiful and so pure !! I loved the way Saras said that you talk a lot , awww , lovely !!! Keep writing more , I am you fan now 🤗

ahahaha thanks a lot Rish🤗

so glad you loved it, wrote this on request of Bonu, Saru and Toni.

I don't feel like writing because people here doesn't bother to read and comment

I am so happy that I achieved my goal, sending you to SaMud land😈

My fan😲thank you ji😳😃

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Tishana
Beautiful...

Thank you!😳

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: poorvika
wow superb how romantic loved it👏this is for u🤗keep writing😊

Thank you so much dear 🤗

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-bornalee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

AWEEeppp,so romantic...

will edit it again,let me read 2-3 times more☺️

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Mrs.Toni Rode Vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

haaa ... haaa ... haaa

let me catch my breath ...

what the hell sasu ma ..sedhe sedhe bolo na toni maar ja . aise kyun 😭

OMG .. i saw it in my head ..n he kissed me 🤔 i mean kumud 😃

now thats what i call an OS ☺️ ..last part ...kya bolyun main

bonu n saru ko hataoo .. ah meri sasu ma n meri story hai 😡 . 😭 i m not sharing 😭 😭

n the name ''whispers in the night ''☺️☺️...gaya meri saturday n sunday 😆

Edited by -B.N.K- - 12 years ago

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TheMogambo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Azzu...kiss in the kitchen...

saras dikhra aaj kal kuch more bold hai...kumud ke bhi ek step aage...sshusshed her with his mouth...😳😳 bahut accha kiya..😳

Loved the kiss...😃

Monday aisa hoga na...

Azzu, i want more hot, hotter, hottest OS from you...

meri weekend special edition...

PM maat bool...😃

Edited by lakhy - 12 years ago

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: -bornalee-
AWEEeppp,so romantic...
will edit it again,let me read 2-3 times more☺️

hahahaaa!

kuch samji nahi gaya?😲

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-

haaa ... haaa ... haaa

let me catch my breath ...

what the hell sasu ma ..sedhe sedhe bolo na toni maar ja . aise kyun 😭

OMG .. i saw it in my head ..n he kissed me 🤔 i mean kumud 😃

now thats what i call an OS ☺️ ..last part ...kya bolyun main

bonu n saru ko hataoo .. ah meri sasu ma n meri story hai 😡 . 😭 i m not sharing 😭 😭

n the name ''whispers in the night ''☺️☺️...gaya meri saturday n sunday 😆

ahahaha! Toni🤗

You need more Oxygen?😆

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting.

I was thinking about what to write as they were only talking about date in the last episode...First I though to write on first date, but you took the title😆

And then I thought to write something hot, and I thought careless whisper, but it didn't suit as it is😆

phir bhi tu ne like nahi maara, meri OS par😭😭😭