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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmamember

Awesome update.

Plz update soon.
Plz pm me.

Thanks...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
nice stry...
sharon consoling taani ws really touching...
plz continue soon n plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AMAZING!! LOVED IT TOTALLY!!! Please continue soon and please pm me when you up[date!! Please please please please please!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cntinue plzz wld love to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start! Please update soon and do pm me about it! Sent you buddy req!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Dear...
Truly Heart touching yaar!!!!!!
I hope the real one is like this also...
Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing yaar ... update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
continue soon and pm me please
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
aww that was amzing...

i desperately wanted my shani(sharon +taani) back...

i really loved their bonding...

this os is amazing espicially its name...

luved it...amazing...fab...

thnx fr the pm update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks every one.. Thanks a lot for giving me this much support.. I am really very overwhelmed..
I can't believe that you liked this story... I really thank you all from the bottom of my heart.. All your comments and likes have really encouraged me to write further...

Now, I am going to post the second part... Plz. don't hate the characters after reading it.. It was important to show like that according to the story.. But, it won't be like that in the further updates...


PART 2---

Taani and Sharon reached Sharon's house…

In the parking area-

Taani- Sharon, you go inside.. I have an important call to attend.. I will join you in a few minutes…

Sharon- O.K Taani, but be quick…

Sharon went towards her house but she was surprised to see Rey already waiting for her..

Rey- Where were you, Sharon.. I have been waiting for so long…

Sharon—Is everything alright, Rey.. You seem to be really worried…

Rey—No, Sharon.. Nothing is alright.. I really need to speak to you…

Sharon—O.k,,, But firstly let's go inside…

They went inside the house…

Sharon—What happened Rey?? Tell me…

Rey--- It's about Taani, Sharon… I don't understand what's wrong with her… She has changed so much.. She has become so selfish….I mean, how could she ask me to choose between her and dance when she very well knows how much important dance is for me… She has become so selfish that she cannot see other's feelings other than hers… She is so self-obsessed now a days… If she doesn't have any aim in her life other than becoming my wife that doesn't mean that she will drive me away from my passion too… She should know that I can't live without dance and my friends.. She will have to understand..

Sharon(shocked)- How could you say that about Taani, Rey??? You love her, right???

Rey—No, Sharon. I don't love this Taani… The Taani whom I used to love is missing… Taani has completely changed now.. She is no more the one who was so selfless, who always thought about others happiness before herself and most importantly whom I loved.. But, This Taani is totally opposite… And, I just hate it.. I hate such things so much… I don't know what to do..I think, I will definitely have to teach Taani a lesson by breaking up with her…. That's the only way I am left with..

Sharon was shocked by listening such words from her best friend's mouth…She really didn't know what to do..

On the other hand, Taani had heard everything… She was completely numb… She was rooted to the ground… She just couldn't move..Tears made way out of her eyes even without her knowledge.. She felt so weak… She felt everything around her becoming dark just like her life… She did not have strength left within her…She felt like killing herself then and there itself..She just thought that she lost him…her love, her life..

Taani(herself)—I lost him.. I lost Rey,, I lost you Rey, my love… he hates me.. Rey hates me..But, why am I crying.. No, I should not cry.. I should be happy..At last I am successful in what I wanted to do.. Yes, I should be happy for Rey because now his passion will not have to suffer.. he will not have to face any problems just because of me.. I am so happy for you Rey that now no one can stop you from achieving your goal…

She wiped her tears and tried to compose herself. It was impossible, but she had to do it for her love…

Taani(herself)- Now, the last step.. I am sorry, Rey that I am gonna hurt you, but I have to do this so that you can easily forget me.. I don't want you to blame yourself for whatever is gonna happen now.. I am so sorry…

Taani(loudly)—Excellent job, Mr. Reyaansh Singhania, excellent…

Rey(shocked)—Taani, tum kab aayi???

Taani—Jab aap meri Tareef kar rahe the…

Rey—No, Taani. It's nothing like that.. You are just misunderstanding…

Taani – No, Rey. I am not misunderstanding anything.. Today, once and for all you will have to choose between your Dil and dance and just end this topic here itself…

Rey(Angry)—What's wrong with you, Taani?? How can you ask me that??? Fine, you want me to choose between You and dance, right??? O.K, then I choose Dance and I know my friends will also support me in this…

Taani—Thanks, Rey, Thanks a lot.. At last you proved it…

Rey—Proved what???

Taani—Proved that I was wrong about you.. Proved that your friends were right… Proved that you are nothing but a big Casanova and a heart-breaker who doesn't care about others feelings… I was such a dumb person to believe you…

Rey(hurt)—you mean to say that I used you??

Taani(shouting)—Yes, you did..

Rey(frustrated+shouting)—Fine then…Taani. Go get a life for youself.. I don't even wanna listen to this nonsense anymore,,,

Taani(shouting)—Yes, I am leaving right now.. Good Bye, Mr. Reyansh Singhania.. Have a good life ahead with your friends and Passion.. Good Bye…

With this Taani left…

Sharon(shouting)—What the hell did you just do, Rey?? What was that??

Rey—Sharon, you still think that I am wrong, even after witnessing what just happened…

Sharon(shouting)—Just shut the hell up, Rey… How could you do that.. How could you behave like that with her… You didn't even think twice before calling her selfish… You claim to love her right??? Then, how is it that you failed to see the pain hidden in her eyes.. Pain of losing you…You behaved so rudely with her… You called her selfish..after what she has done for you, she is the most selfless person you could ever find.. Infact, you are a selfish person who couldn't think of anything other than your own passion, not even about your so called love…

Rey—What do you mean, Sharon?? What has Taani done??

Sharon—Why do you care, Rey???

Rey—Of course I do because I love her God damn it…

Sharon—Where did this love disappear when she needed you the most… Where did it go when you were shouting at her… Where was it when she sacrificed the most valuable possession of her life just for her love's happiness.. yes, Rey.. whatever she did till today was just a mere act, just for you.. Just because she didn't want you and your dreams to suffer because of her.. She wanted you to hate her so that it would be easy for her to go away from you and you can fulfill your dreams without an obstacle called Taani.. She loves you so much that she was even ready to sacrify her love for your happiness…

Sharon narrates the whole truth to Rey…Everything about rude comments and Tauji's proposal..

Sharon(crying)—How could you do that to her, Rey?? How could you??Answer me God damn it….

Rey----

So, here is the second part... Hope you like it... You will have to wait for the next part to know Rey's and Taani's reaction...

Plz. do hit like and comment... You all really encourage me a lot...

NOTE: All those who didn't receive the pm, I apologise because i can send only a limited number of pm's.. I am really very sorry..

Thank you..


Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago

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