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Posted: 12 years ago
I read all d updates n they r awesome
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Originally posted by: Suni1986

I read all d updates n they r awesome


Thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice update
feeling bad for sharon😭
update soon plz
n srry for late comment i was little busy this week

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey! Dear! it's O.k. We understand... And you concentrate on your studies...
All the best...
Love you...
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its very exciting can't wait for the update... 😲
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Clarifications: All my lovely people out there don't assume that Swayam doesn't love or care for his mom. He does in fact a lot but he has his own reasons to live the way he lives. He would have known about his mother's health, he would have definitely gone to see her without wasting a single second. Also, he rejected the girl without even knowing the name of girl. So he rejected to marry but not rejected Sharon in particular. Okay guys all clear. Good.

Guys this part will show after effects of the conversation that happened in last part. Hope you all like it.

Part 4

Sharon enters her bedroom and goes directly to her restroom. She then opens the shower and sits under it and cries her heart out. She cries loudly but there was nobody to hear her cry. If someone would have heard it even then wouldn't have bothered to come to her and console her. She was in pain, her heart was broken. She was totally shattered. He said no to me without even meeting me once. Am I that bad? Don't I deserve love? Since Bari Maa first told me from that day I imagined being your wife, Swayam. But you didn't care. Why? Why did you do this to me? Why? She clutched her hairs tightly.

She stood up and looked herself in the mirror. Pain and loneliness was apparent on her face. Her mascara was also spread due to tears and her hairs were totally spoiled. She washed her face hard. She was able to remove all the messed up make up from her face but that pain and loneliness was not going. She tried hard but it wasn't working. So she grabbed the showpiece and threw hard on the mirror and CRACK. It broke into pieces but the loneliness and pain was still visible in those scattered pieces. She walked out of her restroom and changed her dress in to this:


She takes out her mp3 player and put earphones in her ears and played the song. She started dancing on it letting her all pain flow out through her dance.

She starts dancing remembering the moment when BM told her that she will be her daughter-in-law and the moment when she informed her that Swayam rejected the proposal.

Sab Ki Baaraatein Aayi Doli Tu Bhi Laana
Dulhan Banaake Humko Rajaji Le Jaana
Sab Ki Baaraatein Aayi
Chaaha Tha Maine, Socha Tha Maine
Kya Kya The Armaan Dil Nadaan Ke
Aankhon Mein Aansu Aaye
Ho, Aankhon Mein Aansu Aaye Par Koi Na Aaya
Ab To Kisi Ko Bhi Apna Ke Hai Bulaana
Sab Ki Baaraatein Aayi

She imagines herself being the bride and Swayam coming to make her his. Tears were constantly rolling down from her eyes.

In Aankhon Mein Thi Ek Raat Saji
Haathon Mein Kabhi Choodi Si Baji
Par Aankh Khuli To Aaya Nazar Na Raat Saji Na Choodi Baji
Mera Toota Tha Dil, Uski Jhankar Thi
Saara Voh Rang Tha Mere Khoone Dil Ka
Yeh To Hai Rona Dil Ka
Haan, Yeh To Hai Rona Dil Ka Kaahe Ka Taraana
Ab To Kisi Ko Bhi Apna Ke Hai Bulaana

Then she remembers her BM asking her to move on and forgive her son for breaking her heart.

Sab Ki Baaraatein Aayi Doli Tu Bhi Laana
Dulhan Banaake Humko Rajaji Le Jaana
Sab Ki Baaraatein Aayi
Aa Aah, Aa Aah, Aa Aah
Chalo Jo Bhi Hua, Voh Khoob Hua
Ab Har Koi Mehboob Hua
Hai Sab Ke Liye Yeh Raat Meri Ab To Hai Yehi Aukaat Meri
Haske Bheege Palak Chamkaana Hai
Sooni Baahein Ada Se Laheraana Hai
Gham Khaake Aansu Peeke
Ho, Gham Khaake Aansu Peeke Mehfil Mein Gaana
Ab To Kisi Ko Bhi Apna Ke Hai Bulaana
Sab Ki Baaraatein Aayi Doli Tu Bhi Laana
Dulhan Banaake Humko Rajaji Le Jaana
Sab Ki Baaraatein Aayi
Aa Aah

She finishes her dance and fell on ground helplessly. She was crying and screaming but nobody cared. Tring Tring her phone rang and she wiped her tears and looked at the caller id it was flashing Rey's name, her best friend.

She picks up the call and the voice from other side says "hey girl what's up? I am calling to ask you for the last time are you com'" before Rey could finish Sharon interrupt him "dude, how long is this event for? "It is a one month long event in Goa" he replied. "Well count me in" she said and inquired about the departure. "Okay dude then cya tomorrow at airport. You need not to pick me up. I will manage. Bye gotta go" she says and cuts the call to avoid any further conversation.

I need some time alone. This is the best plan. I have to go. I have to move on and fulfill Bari Maa's promise. I have to do this. I will inform BM in the morning tomorrow on phone to avoid coming face to face to her. She thinks that and goes to her bed. After staying up for long and crying she fell asleep when her eyelids got very heavy due to crying for so long.

*Part 4 Ends*

It was sad, right? It was needed for the story to develop. I hope I explained Sharon's pain well. Do comment and let me know.

So guys here is the thing Grand Promo is ready which will give you the glimpse of the story ahead. So 20 comments and it will be out. So gear up, guys.

Love

Tasha

Edited by TaareynSwaron - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: taarey05

hey nice update
feeling bad for sharon😭
update soon plz
n srry for late comment i was little busy this week

It is okay dear
as long as you read and comment
It is perfectly fine 😃
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Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Hey! Dear! it's O.k. We understand... And you concentrate on your studies...

All the best...
Love you...

Thanks a lot dear
Love u too dear
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loved it really awesome update 😊
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Originally posted by: radhu-taarey

loved it really awesome update 😊

Thanks a lot dear

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