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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shay1990

I'm so sorry i didn't comment before Disha...

But my oh my i have so much praise for you right now!
You have undeniably possibly created, in my eyes, the most beautiful re-telling of that moment between them.

You've prolonged it, tweeked it and made it so much more passionate then how it is originally portrayed in the show. Hats off to you completely! 👏

I just love how you've echoed Khushi's thought whilst she merely stared at his sleeping form... You made it seem do deep and precious - You've managed to illustrate the raw emotion that should have been there.

I keep repeating myself but it's honestly just that good.

AND THAT KISS! I have no words, that was just intense and oh-so passionate... A real Arnav and Khushi kiss 😉

I loved it the the core Disha! And I'm glad to know you'll be carrying this on!!!

And one final comment... I commend you on your song choice. Maroon 5 are my ultimate favourite! 🤗

Fantastic 👏
Shay X


You just know how to set me giddy and reeling with happiness😆
Check inboxxx!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
that was beautiful
loved it
looking forward to them dealing with sheetal
plz continue soon
take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is nice,👍🏼
do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
wen s part 2 cmin up...???? wil u pm me...??? plz plz plz...???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ahhh I loved this!

It was just perfect <3

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