You Hold My Heart- Arhi OS

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow that some strong emotions portrayed by the two of them
his jaa rahi ho was so touching the heart strings and almost making you cry right
well what he said is so true and am glad she is staying back
quit sacrificing every time dear you dont have to do so sweetie
well i hope you will continue and soon so we know how they deal with sheetal together
cheers for pm

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Originally posted by: chavvi16
wow that some strong emotions portrayed by the two of them
his jaa rahi ho was so touching the heart strings and almost making you cry right
well what he said is so true and am glad she is staying back
quit sacrificing every time dear you dont have to do so sweetie
well i hope you will continue and soon so we know how they deal with sheetal together
cheers for pm

I know. Khushi needed some sort of a wake up call because Arnav really loves her. Thankyou for the lovely comment, hun😊 that was very sweet of you!

Well you must wait and watch about the Sheetal bit, hehe😆

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Piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was wow...loved it...jus amazin...

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toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was really beautiful, all emotions, khushi's selfless love..isn't she a great personality, only giving but expecting anything in return!!

great work 😊

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Abi

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Posted: 12 years ago

really awesome... update part 2 soon! thx for the pm...

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fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it. Please continue and pm me for next part.

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please6

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Posted: 12 years ago

love it, it was beautiful and sweet

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Lavanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Grt thought disha ji.. Loved it.. Thnx

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Shay

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I'm so sorry i didn't comment before Disha...

But my oh my i have so much praise for you right now!
You have undeniably possibly created, in my eyes, the most beautiful re-telling of that moment between them.

You've prolonged it, tweeked it and made it so much more passionate then how it is originally portrayed in the show. Hats off to you completely! 👏

I just love how you've echoed Khushi's thought whilst she merely stared at his sleeping form... You made it seem do deep and precious - You've managed to illustrate the raw emotion that should have been there.

I keep repeating myself but it's honestly just that good.

AND THAT KISS! I have no words, that was just intense and oh-so passionate... A real Arnav and Khushi kiss 😉

I loved it the the core Disha! And I'm glad to know you'll be carrying this on!!!

And one final comment... I commend you on your song choice. Maroon 5 are my ultimate favourite! 🤗

Fantastic 👏
Shay X

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