My First Attempt- Bilingual Poems by Suhaani

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zindagi ek safar hai.
Har pal aage badna,
Har pal chunauti ko aamna saamna karna.
Yehi hai zindagi, mera dost.


2.
Love and friendship are two sides of a coin.
You love and respect a friend.
You befriend and respect someone you love.
There is an invisible line between love and friendship.
True friendship leads to true love.
True love leads to true friendship.
Love and respect can be either platonic or mutual,
Friendship and trust is the basis of all relationships.
Love and Friendship are two sides of a coin.



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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice attempt di👏
loved the second one specially
Posted: 12 years ago
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Suhaani Suhaani Suhaani! You are amazing! WOW! 😳 These poems are sooo touching and are a treat to read! I loved every single line of these poems but especially this one:'Friendship and trust is the basis of all relationships'. It's sooo true...a very truthful and clear poem!👍🏼 Well done and keep writing more dear! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one suhani di...!!!😃
loved it...🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wah wah kya likha hai di😃
mast ekdum😊👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good attempt 👏
specially second...
Keep writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice attempt suhaani👏👏... loved the second one!!!⭐️..Keep bringing more!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pushing up for some ppl who hv missed it😉😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You attempted Two Different aspects of Life in Bilingual way...
First Poem is Very Short but Good if U add some more Lines too...
2nd Poem based on a hair line Difference between Friendship and Love but both merges to each one at the End...
Good and Nice one...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Suhaani

both the poems r

loved the 2nd one a lot
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