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Amrita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#541

Hey, Loved this storyyy... Waiting for the next part

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riafna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#542

Congrats Juhi... Zehra 's post had ...
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Divya Bharathi S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#543

Awww no pbm, waiting 😉

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#544

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#545

OHMYGOD! I don't believe this! I actually did this! *fistpump*

But I have to run to class now and will come back and read and edit. Ciao for a few hours!

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HO HO HO! Party time. 🥳

Well obviously not because ASR is hurt but because I was bang on!

I KNEW there had to be a serious reason for him to have dropped her and in all probability it was a sniper.

That said, I honestly had no idea about the rest of it!

The hospital part was exceedingly well written in terms of Khushi's stark terror, her restlessness and sheer need for him to be alright.

I had also had a feeling that the sniper would be related to the story that Khushi wanted to investigate more thoroughly. But AMAN MATHUR? Et tu Brute? (I'm having a Julius Caesar flashback here despite this being an AU story)

You know J, I actually love how in your stories you don't paint Shyam as the villain. It's incredibly easy to do! But you shy away from that and make his and Anjali's relationship as meaningful as Arnav and Khushi's!

And I have NEVER read as many separate explanations for why Shyam calls Anjali 'Rani Sahiba' as I have in your work!

Now coming to the scene in Khushi's apartment, mashallah it was so beautiful! Them coming to terms with what is important for them both AND realizing that they have more in common than they had previously thought... It was lovely. And throw a shirtless Arnavji into the fray and it's a BIGGER 🥳.

Damn, that is borderline obsessive behaviour though (ASR's buying the company and attending meetings to pursue Khushi)! And only pardonable because he's ASR.

No? NO? WHY NOT ARNAVJI? Get a fangirl's hopes up and then say no? How could you?

I bet this is about "doing the right thing by Khushi" isn't it?

Or knowing J, it's something unexpected like Arnav not carrying protection.

THANK GOD I won't have to wait for too long for the last bit.

Edited by Semanti - 13 years ago

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#546

"Do you know, I can't remember the last time we kissed? 'Cause you never think the last time's going to be the last time - you think there will be more. You think you have forever, but you don't."

Khushi was on the verge of losing him and that's when she realised that she loves him. It was beautiful. Realisation in a time of crisis.

"At some point, you have to make a decision. Boundaries don't keep other people out, they fence you in. Life is messy, that's how we're made. So you can waste your life drawing lines or you can live your life crossing them. But there are some lines that are way too dangerous to cross. Here's what I know. If you're willing to throw caution to the wind and take a chance, the view from the other side... is spectacular."

How she decided to give in to her feelings and embrace him without placing any restrictions on herself. Beautiful. Just wanted a chance at her happiness.

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drmj5612

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Posted: 13 years ago

#547

RES

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OMG.. that bullet was meant to shot her..?!?!?! 😲

so, that was d reason he dropped her..

well, he certainly is lucky.. it only went by rupturing some blood vessels...

n i knew he must have gone to her apartment.. 😳

glad, they talked over the thing between them..

but, y now he is refusing to take things further..???

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Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 13 years ago

#548

my 800th one here...!!

so he was shot that too because of that news,,,,he should really had listen yo khushi but...what happens is good in some ways...finally khushi realizes that she loved him and she loved from the start and she is ready to grab the the very first oppurtunity to be with him...be it means spending nights with him or giving herself fully to him...!!!

and he realize that she is more than just a object of lust for her...she is not indeed his lust...there is something more...something which he cant explain in words...something which he is not getting what is it...so he say a plain NO...!!

lets see whats this "no" leads to...??

its a passionate kinda story...and u write passion and desire mixed up with love so brilliantly juhi didi...!! superbly written...awesome...as always...!!!

anjali also found love of his life...or i can say...shyam of his lige...and shyam found his RANI SAHIBA...!!

i love happily ever afters...!!!!

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shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#549

I could see your Res and i am waiting for it 😉

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aquagal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#550

UnRes

Sorry for the late Unres..

So the crimson was blood actually. Surely you don't write anything to just be there, the opening scene with the argument of telecasting a news was hell important.
But I would like to see the positive side of this shooting - Arnav & Khushi realized that their feelings run much deeper. Its not a casual liking or attraction or lust, its pure.
Khushi ran to meet him in Shantivan & he came to meet her after the realization. They had to, don't they? We all know that life is unpredictable, we all keep on saying kal ho naa ho but we still keep ourselves under check, hold back ourselves. But the moment when we experience it first hand and that too when its concerned with our loved ones everything changes.
Anjali & Shyam meet too.😊
I was thinking last night how it could be completed in just another single update especially the way first part ended and got to know there is going to be another update too.😊
Amazing update...

Edited by aquagal - 13 years ago