OS: Khoon Chala Part 4 (last) updt... 28/04 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Sorry fr very late comment .


U really tried a very good attempt against this inhumanity n i feel the same as you.
So you expressed the feelings of a mother after such incident .and it really reflects , what is her pain , anger, n frustration,
mostly the guilt tht every family member felt fr the victim..

Godd attempt.
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Thnk u so much... In a case like this, not only the girl, but her whole family suffers... i just wanted to get that feeling out!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

that was really heart touching...riya's pain ...u made me cry.


update soon


thnk u so much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

I understnd dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: zebbie

U made me cry.
Any girl,in the place of Riya,would have felt the same.
Please continue.


Thnk u Zebbie dii... Aapko nhi pata k aapse ye compliment paa k mujhe kitna acha laga!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Amazing os.
It was an heart touching dear.
Finally ariya reunited.
Last part was emotion and hot update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
really a heart touching os.

u vry nicely potray each n every emotions, pain n sufferings of such victims n their families.

👏👏 great job dr.

after such a roller coster ride finally ariya try to move on in life.

superb ending to such a superb n excellent os.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
This was a very emotional and heart-touching story
It made me cry 😭
Poor Sanjana was raped
I wish I could kill that man who did that to her 😡
Loved the way Arjun was supporting Riya but equally felt as bad for him as he was keeping his feelings to himself
Thank god that Riya let out her pain while saving Sonia
Finally Sakshi said everything out to Riya and reminded her about Arjun and her responsibilities 😊
Riya's apology was really sweet
Ariya's kiss was really good ☺️
I'm glad that Ariya are back together
The story was really real and I loved to read it
Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
very well written and a very nice message sent across !!!
Hats off for dealing it with so well
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
ohh wow..
What an OS dear..
Jus lovd it to bits..
Very-wel wrtten...
It was so emotional..thumbs up :)

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