OS: Khoon Chala Part 4 (last) updt... 28/04 - Page 4

That was emotional...
All the feelings were beautifully potrayed...
Song also suiting the situation too well:)
nice ending..
Hope that no girls should go through such kind of pain again..

I m cryinggg cryinggg cryinggg i cant stop my crying...
u made me speechless...
awesome work...
i m stil sobing dont not how to explain what i feel...
i read all story one to go...
its realy heart huching..
i dont know..
humans etana niche kaise gir sakte hai..
i wanna to kill all that type of man..
blady bus****
i can feel riya n arjun pain..
soryy i cant write more then..
lv u dr n thank for grate story...ups sotry its not just story...
its realty of present wold...

Take a bow dear
pls
beautiful sng
very well writen
so emotional..!!

painful story yaar bas isse jyada kuch nhi keh skti

First of all hats of to you for bringing in this cruel topic through your story.This actually brought tears in my eyes reading it.With this story,you actually made me think about how much not only the girl but her parents suffers seeing their daughter in such a state.You have beautifully portrayed the story.But i hope &wish that this is the last story of yours to this topic becoz i cant handle this more&even pray that no child suffers or go through such a horric incident.Lastly hope&wish the government atleast now opens up their eyes&pass on a strict law to this instead of just moaning,giving sympathy fulled speeches& discussing the matter which at the end is without any conclusion.Once again thanks for bringing up this topic.Thanks for the PM😊.

awesome.
you have described emotions very well. esp in the last part.the way riya was recalling the precious moments she had spent with sanjana, it touched my heart.
the scene where liza reveals what had happened to sanju brought tears in my eyes.
sakshi's outburst was beautifully written.
i guess it was the only way to bring riya out of her shell, by reminding that even arjun has suffered and he needs her.
👏

very touching OS, you actually portrayed the rape of that 5 year old girl😭

Originally posted by: amanarjunkaran

thnx dear for writing a story on such a bad concept
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

owww 😭...

cant even imagine such a state for any girl!!! poor sanjana..

poor riya... anyone in her place will be the same!!

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Dear
firstly u chose a very sensitive topic
i knw u do justice to it...
all d best fr dat
d title was awesum
sng itself was a very nyc msg..
grt start..