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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update dear
But everyone are in their own grief sam maan and geet
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
me wide awake today ...waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 19

Little maanav had grown big. He had so much to talk & yap with her. It filled her heart when he called her ma. Her eyes actually poured all the tears that she was holding back. Maanav called meera mummy & meera ' Dev taught him to call Geet as bedi ma.. & eventually it became ma for the little boy.
After the call. She set her place on the floor & slept with a the sweet voice of Maanav ringing in her ears. His words..maa.. touching a new string .. a new side. She didn't let the thought she could never become a mother overshadowing the joy she got today.
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Mk woke up early with a splitting head ache. He opened the eyes & couldn't make out where he was. He closed it again & tried to recollect. He remembered vaguely getting angry at some one for coming close to him.. he closed his eyes tight.. then her fragrance.. her closeness splashed in front. He opened his eyes at once & looked around. He had her duppata draped around him. It was like a fight with in. he didn't know wat he was angry at & why.
He dumped the duppata in the floor angrily & walked into his room only to triple over her again. This time he didn't fall.. he balanced himself waking her up. She got up at once. She had slept longer with the effect of medicine & late night chatting with Maanav.

She tried to leave.. he held her elbow & turned her to face him painfully. She snapped her hand ..but his hold was forceful.
He greeted his teeth tum yanha kya kar rahi thi
tum jaisen ladkiyan bus mauka doonthi hain
wat do u think u could take advantage of my drunken state
Geet looked at him puzzled. She didn't like his demeanor, his anger, the way he was holding her, the way he smelled of alcohol.
Chotiyen mujhe she spoke trying to free her hand
he angrily turned her hand pulled her dangerously closer.
U came to my room, when I was drunk
aakhir tum chahati kya ho?
His free hand held her hair & pushed her face closer to his


Geet turned away in disgrace. Now why r u pretending to not like it
her eyes spat fire hating every inch of him.
Kal raat tho .. he tried angrily to force himself closer. She put her wit together & pushed him far away.
He was mad.. he had no clue wat had happened last night.. but he knew he was not happy abt something. He felt she had come to his room trying to take advantage of his condition & he probably pushed her away & went into the other room. His splitting head ache his surrounding made him only to react worst.
She didn't even feel like slapping him this time. She just left from there only to be spotted by Pari's aunt. Soon they began to speak abt Geet spending the night at Mk's room. They kind of concluded Geet was coming between Mk & Sam.

Pari's mom got concerned & began questioning Pari abt Geet.
Pari's mom '
yeh ladki kaun hain? Iska family back ground kaisa hain?
Pari '
mom.. she is Geet!! I have told u everything abt her
pari's mom '
lekin beta she is not wat she seems.
Pari ' kya matlab mom
pari's mom ' Mk aur Geet ke beech kya chal raha hain
Pari fell off laughing ' r u mad. They both can't stand each other.
Pari's mom ' then wat she is doing in Mk's room last night. I am sure thats why Mk is delaying marriage with Sam
Pari '
there is some confusion. Geet aisen ladki nahi hain
pari's mom '
phir kaisen ladki hain wo?
Pari '
I know her better. Please aap log ussen kuch mat kahna
pari's mom ' get ready fast mehendi person will be coming soon.

It was mehendi function that day, the mehendi lady had already come. All the girls were choosing the design. Pari was surrounded with frds & relatives. The mehendi lady was beautifully decorating her hand.
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Geet didn't come out of the room the whole day. The morning incident had made her very angry & upset. She wanted to leave at once from there but didn't know wat to tell Pari.
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Sam got up late too... & was shattered seeing herself in Azaan's arms. The memories of last night came flashing down at her bitter but true. Wat did she do.. she just got carried away at the first touch of love.. did he love her!!! or was it just a drunken state.. the stained sheets.. his body marked with her passion & hers with his. She held the sheet close to her & ran to the washroom. She spend a long time under the shower trying to make sense.. & nothing did. She didn't have in her to face Mk.. or Azaan or any one!! she avoided speaking to any one. Latter at mehendi she dressed up & came down. It was girl function.. so guys were all hanging in the garden, occasionally peeking at their girls.
Azaan was restless.. he wanted to speak to Sam, & she had been avoiding him since morning. He didn't want her to feel guilty. He didn't want her to be sad ever again.
Mk had sobered by evening. He was in the kitchen helping Pari's mom & other ladies. It was getting busy with grooms side people joining for the function.
Pari's mom ' Mk .. she paused thinking
he looked at her hesitating
Pari's mom '
I feel Geet is not a nice girl
he looked at her wondering why she would say something like that, without knowing abt her
Pari's aunt could make out her reluctance '
beta aap hi socho, she knows very well u r with Sam & still she was with u
he clenched his fist ' wat did she tell u?
Pari's mom & aunt looked at each other lost of words


mk ' did she tell u all that
is that wat she is been upto
dam this b****
he walked out looking for her losing all the sanity he had.
Thanks for the lovely comments
lots of love
muskan
- PART 18 PREV NEXT PART 20 -
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me ist
vry painful 4 geet,evry 1 misudrstud hr,nw vil maan blast on geet???me happy sam s out😃
geet kya karegiii???agar geet pari ka ghar shor de latr on cm 2 india aur maan uske peeshe india aaye...m i dreamning???
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Not again geet is again in problem due to MK ..Cannt he once act reasonable and this stupid aunties ufff typical Indian one i guess just need gossip and add fuel in fire
god knows what more geet had to face know
loved the update but quite short one
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely emotional update.. te way geet felt tat she cant be a mother was so emotional.. te way my maan shouting at geet, and te way his hurting words and te way geet felt hurt was so painful... te way ladies gossiping abt geet was so painful.. oh god geet came from mk room so they all are taunting her but no one saw sam from azan room,..te way geet shutting herself in her room to avoiud te function was so emotional.. te way pari mom taunting geet to my maan and my maan got angry tat geet said something abt him and now going to hurt geet again..i love te update
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Posted: 12 years ago
What rubbish he was in her room can't he get till now ... Nd what wrong with these aunties too much yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wht hw cm mk think like tht abt geet
n pari mom

hw cm she cn say like tht abt geet
nw dont no wht he does ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
what will happen now
god i hope now mk and evryone comes to know she is a widow and what she went through and stop torturing her
how much she is gone through

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