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Mukti Deshmuk: Only daughter of leading industrialist jeevan deshmuk…a plucky and courageous girl but has fixed adarsh and principles but is modern in her school of thought..will be starting her 1st yr at college in india…has just arrived from America
Prem Sharma: Son of prerna and rishab baja…spolit brat and a huge flirt…has no values however he is very caring especially where his sisters are concerned….also in his 1st yr
Sneha bajaj: A serious caring and sensitive person…an obedient daughter …the apple of her mother's eye…a yr older thn prem but is very close to him..in her 2nd yr of college
Kasak Bajaj: exact opposite of Sneha…a complete party girl not too different from her brother….fun loving and hyper
We see a very happy and excited mukti driving her car and talking on the phone to her father…she has just reached India from America and is on her way to her to her chotima's place
Mukti: yes dad ill call u when I reach there…ofcourse ill give u their message…dnt worry I noe how to take care of myself..im not a kid u noe…yes..i promise ill call u if I need anything…
she hangs up the phone and sighs in relif..she loved her dad but he wa a woory wart..like she cldnt take care of herself…she is jolted out of her thoughts when her car comes to a sudden halt…she gets out of her car…we get a full view of her wearing a tank top and jeans and finds the source of her problems…a nail is stuck in her tyre
She looks around hopefully but noone is nearby…she calls up the garage and waits for a taxi to go by….she spots a jeep heading her way and looks up hopefully but her hopes are dashed when the jeep passes her by…the jeep reverses and we see none oder thn our beloved prem looking adorable in his usual style…he looks at mukti and says
Prem: hello beautiful…u need a ride..
Mukti looks at him and shakes her head in frustration…hes obviously a hooligan she thinks…so far her experience in India has been a bad one
Prem:come on I promise I wont bite….he gives her a wolfish smile
Mukti: dekhiyae mister…if I accept ur offer its possible kay rastay main tum mujh say flirt karo yea batameezi karo…phir main police ko bulaoon gi …..thn well have to go to the police station aur wahan pe mujhey report darj karni ho ge and iss main tyme lag jaye ga phir main late ho jaoon ge aur meri chotimaa pareeshan ho jaein gee issliye thnks but no thnks
Prem: woah!!…basanti tumhare zaban yun hi kya 24/7 chalti rehti hai kya…sorrie main ne tumhein help karnay ki offer ki…I didn't know kay mujhey tumse bhashan sunna parega
Mukti:wht did u call me??
Prem:with a grin..basanti!!..sholay ki basanti ki tarhan tumhare bhi zaban rukney ka naam nahi leti…chaltay he jate hai
Mukti: whatever…dekho I'll take a taxi u can go…
Prem:sure…..and drives off widout another look in her direction…he looks in the review mirror and thinks…dekhnay main buri nahi but bahaut ghamandi hai aur bolti bhi bahaut zayada hai
Mukti finally finds a taxi and arrives at Prerna's house.. she rushes inside and hugs prerna…
Mukti:chotima...she bends and takes her ashirwaad
Prerna:mukti beta…tum aa gaye..itni late kyun ho gaye…main kitni pareeshan ho gaye the…
Mukti: sorrie chotimaa but meri gari kharab ho gaye thee aur koi taxi nahi mil rahi thee…issiliye main late ho gaye…
Prerna:acha upar ja ke fresh ho aao…mein khana lagati hoon..
Mukti:jee choti maa…per uncle, Sneha, Kasak aur Prem kahan hain??oun say mile huye bajaut tyme ho gaya…
Prerna: Sneha aur KAsak upar hain…per Prem ab tak ghar nahi aaya…tum ja ker oun say mil lo..woh tumhara intezaar kar rahay hain…
Mukti runs upstairs and hugs Sneha….Sneha squeals in surprise…..
Sneha: mukti!! OMG kaisi hai tu…kitni bari ho gaye ho aur kini hot lag rahe ho….how are you???i missed you SOO much…magar tum itni late kyun ho gaye??
Mukti: I missed you too…aur kya bataoon….main yahan aa rahi thee tou meri car puncture ho gaye and raste mein mujhey eek pagal larka mil gaya..she narratesKAsak kahan hai
Kasak: tumhare peechay!! She hugs mukti
Mukti: wow!!u look great…lekin main tum say bahaut naraz hoon…mujhey chortimaa, uncle aur Sneha nay call ki and they kept in touch with me but I didn't get a single call or letter from you…
Kasak: sorry babes…wo many men so little tyme…main bahaut busy thee…acha tum Prem say mile???tumhare aur ouski kabhi nahi banti thee…I wonder how u both will get along now..
Mukti: haan per who hai kahan??
Kasak: he came back a few minutes ago…who apnay room main ho ga..tum ous say mil k neechay aa jao..dinner tayar hai
Mukti approaches Prems room…there is no one there..she turns around to leave his room and bumps into him….she recognizes him as the guy who offered her a ride and nearly has a heart attack
Mukti: U!!
Prem: D…array basantii tum tou bahaut fast nikali…meray ghar tak pahaunch gaye…
Mukti: Oh shut up!! Main yahan tumhare peechanay nahi aaye…yea meri chotimaa aur Rishab uncle ka ghar hai…By the way tum yahan kya kar rahay ho??
Sneha: Prem Mukti kya hua?? Dnt tell me kay u guys are fighting already…tumhein mile huye 2 min bhee nahi huye aur tum log abhi say larh rahay ho..
Prem: Sneha… yea pagal larki kaun hai??Aur yahan kya kar rahi hai
Sneha:don't tell me kay tum Mukti ko bhool gaye….yea papa kay bestfrnd ke beti hai…tumhein yaad nahi kay hum har saal jab America jatay thay tou inkay ghar main thaer tay thay…aur tum dono har waqt lartay rehtay thay…. Lagta hai ke aaj ke bad ghar mein kabhi peace aur shanti nahi ho gee.
Mukti: yea!!yea Prem hai…..isse tou main janti hoon…Sneha yaad hai na main ne tumhe eek pagal insaan ke baray main bataya tha jis nay mujhey lift offer ke thee…yea wohi tou hai
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