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Posted: 18 years ago
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okiee im baq wid more..temme if u lyk it 😃

Sneha smiles and goes off to share this hot piece of gossip with Kasak….She could tell that the coming days were far from peaceful…with Prem and Mukti around anything was possible…She went downstairs and narrated the whole incident to everyone and they were still laughing over this when they were joined by Prem and Mukti who were still scowling at each other……they sat down facing each other and tried to avoid eye contact……they were half way through the meal when Mr Bajaj came home…Mukti gets up and takes his aashirwaad

B: jeete raho…acha Mukti beta mujhey yea batao k tum kab aaye??mujhey kisi nay tumhare aanay ki khabar nahi de….and he looks at Prerna reproachfully……

M: main bas abhi abhi aaye…chalein ab aa key khana kha lijiye

B: kal tumhara college main pehla din ho ga…I hope key tumhein koi pareshaani nahi hogi…If u need anything just tell me…aur college main tumhare saath Sneha Kasak aur Prem bhi hoon gay…Agar tumhein koi problem ho tou u can ask them….Mukti looks at Prem disdainfully and gives Sneha a mischevious smile….Actually uncle eek prob hai…Yahan aate huye meri car kharab ho gaye….so ill need a ride 2 colege tomorrow….

B:tou iss main kya problem hai…Prem tumhein apne saath lay jaye ga aur wapas lay bhi aaye ga

Prem who had been drinking water spit it all out…What main?? But Daddy Cool…who main….i hav plans wid my frndz…but one look from Mr Bajaj quells his stuttering…he gives Mukti a contemptuous look and continues eating…Mukti thoroughly regrets asking Mr Bajaj for help and gives Prem a side glanceHe has a scowl on his face and although Mukti was not happy about going with Prem, causing him misery was very satisfying to her….
She goes upto her room and comes downstairs bearing gifts for everyone….


Mukti: I brought gifts for everyone…chottima yea aap ke liye…and hands Prerna a parcel aur Sneha yea tumhare liye…she gives out presents to everyone and finally she takes out a huge package and hands it to Kasak…yea laein madam…I bought everything you wanted…all the clothes, jewellery and costemetics are in here….She tosses a packet to Prem who accepts it reluctantly
Kasak gives Mukti a big hug and runs off to her room…She then takes a letter to Mr Bajaj..

Mukti: papa nay yea letter aap ke liye diya tha…he wanted me to give it to you as soon as I reached here…issliye aap yea parh lijiye ga

Mr Baja reads the letter and shows it toi Prerna….this is what the letyter said

My dear friend Rishab:
Main apni sab say keemti cheez apni baytee tumharay pass bheej raha hoon,main janta hoon ke tum ous ka poora khayal rakho gem agar agar ous say koi bhool ho jae to bachi samajh ke maaf kar dena..Jab tak wohtumhare saath hai mujhey ous ki koi fikr nahi.Aur issi bahanay who aur Prem eek doosray ke saath samay beta leen gay uar agar ounhoon nay eek doosray ko pasand kar liye to humara barsoon purana sapna poora ho jaye ga..Main yahan per bahaut busy hoon issliye wahan per khud nahi aa saka..
Acha ab bhabhi jee ko mera pranam aur bachoon ko mera pyaar dena
Tumhara dost Jeevan

Mukti heads towards her room but is intercepted on the way by Prem…

Prem:Miss Basanti tumhare waja say kal main party pe nahi ja sakta…Why on earth cldnt you go with Sneha or Kasak tumhein meray saath jana hee zaroori hai kya?

Mukti: for ur kind information mujhey tumhare saath janay main koi interest nahi hai who tou uncle nay keh diya warna main khud mar ke bhi tumhare saath nahi jaati….She gives him a haughty look and walks away with her head held high….

Prem: ab tou tumhein meray saath hi jana pare ga ill make sure of tht aur main tumhein itni aasani say nahi chooron ga Basanti…u wait and watch
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow i love it! Prem and mukti fighting 😃 continue soon hun!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnkss...for a second dre i was worried tht u ppl didnt lyk it...
ill continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its wonderful i love it pls continue sooon yar pls 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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im a new reader and i like this fanfic.. continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Meanwhile Bajaj and Prerna are discussing the letter…

Prerna: Mukti meri beti jaisi hai…Agar ous ki aur Prem ki shaadi ho jaye tou mujhey bahaut khushi ho ge…mera yehi sapna hai ke ousay iss ghar main bahu bana ker laonn…..bus gar who aur Prem eek doosray ko pasand kar leen tou oun ki hu msagai karwa dein magar jab deekho tou yea dono lar rahay hotay hain….khuda jany in ka kya ho ga

Baja: tum fikr kyun krti ho…dono ko waqt do who khud eek doosray ko pasand karma shuru kar dein gay…aur bhir aap ous say hi jhagartay ho jis say aap duniya main sub say zayada pyaar kartay ho…issliye tum fikr na klaro sub khudbakhud theek ho jaye ga..he kisses her on the forehead and they both go to sleep…

The next day there was a great flurry of activity since it was the very first day of college…Everyone rushed around looking for things and last minute touches ….However both Prem and Mukti slept on oblivious to all the ongoing…

Sneha: Wakeup sleepy head…it's the first day of college and I want to introduce you to all my friends…Hurry up and get dressed

Mukti:Kya Sneha mujhey soonay do na…mujhey bahaut neendh aa rahi hai…

Sneha: theek hai but I think u shld noe thts its already 9:30…..if u want 2 reach college on tyme u better get moving

Mukti:OMG….im sooo late..main nay nahana hai…tayar hona hai…Thnks for waking me up….i better rush off….ill se u downstairs and rushes off to take a bath..
Meanwhile Kasak has been trying unsuccessfully to wake Prem up but he was dead to the world..After several fruitless tries including setting off numerous alarm clocks, Sneha and Kasak resort to their last available option…they pour a pitcher of cold water down Prems neck…He is jolted back to reality and wakes up muttering curses…Prem rushed of to get ready and came out wearing his usual this



he sat down for breakfast and waited agitatedly for mukti to come so that they could leave for college…..He is halfway between his meal and raises his eyes and spots Mukti approaching him….His hand stops midway between the plate and his mouth as he stares at the vision of exquisiteness she presents dressed casually in dis



He averts his eyes and gets up…
Prem:Miss Basanti tum kitni daer lagati ho…bu I guess u need hours in front of the mirror to make urself look presentable…waisay aaj tum buri nahi lag rahi….and plz dnt try 2 tlk 2 me in front of my frndz…..i mean I hav a rep to protect….and saying dis he walks out widout waiting for an answer
Mukti is seething with rage./..She runs upto Prem and stoops him…

Mukti:now u listen Mr UD…mujhey koi shock nahi hai tuymhare saath jane ka…college main hum ajnabee ki tarhan rahein gay…v will talk only if it is nessecary nad another thing tum nay kabhi apnay aap ko mirror main dekha hai??/bilkul Bandar lagtay ho…I wldnt be caught dead tlking 2 u…now v can go…l

Prem sits in the car and drives off….He drives rather carefully as Mr Baja had warned Prem tht Mukti was afraid of speed ever since her mom had died in a car crash…They reach the college and both of them step out of the car….Everyone looks in their direction as they make a very striking couple and a bunch of Prems friends cum upto him to congratulate him on such a find

Friend: WOW!! Wah Prem you hav outdone urself…She is by far the most beautiful girl uv ever dated…Wonder if she has a sis…

Mukti: Xcuse me…main iss Bandar ki girlfriend nahi hoon…id rather date a monkey thn go out wigd him…saying dis she stalks off haughtily to find Kasak nad Sneha leaving Prem fuming in rage…

Prem: wht does she think of herself…iss ko sabak sikhana ho ga…ill make ur first day da most memorable one ever…soon ull regret ever picking a fight with Prema Bajaj…and grins evily

Mukti finally spots KAsak and Sneha ….Kasak is busy flirting with the guy while Sneha looks around bored..She brightens up as soon she spots Mukti and excuses herself…

Sneha: Acha hua tou aa gaye….main Kasak ke saath reh ke bore ho gaye thee…Acha chalo main tumhein campus dekha doon…She turns around and bumps into someone and is about to fall when the guy hold her and brings her back on her feet

Sharad:hi Sneha….Tumhare dost kaun hai??

Sneha has turned a deep shade of purple and she blushes as she replies…

Sneha:Oh hi Sharad…yea hai meri sab say achi dost Mukti aur Mukti yea hai Prem ka best frnd Sharad….

Mukti:u mean to tell me ke ous Bandar ke dost bhi hain…I admire u for putting up with him

Prem hears the caustic remark and bites back his tounge to stop himself from saying sumthing…he'd hav his revenge later….y spoil her fun

Prem:whtever…I'll c u during break be prepared for ur doom and walks off with Sharad…

Sneha:oh no….dis means trouble…every newbie has to perform a dare in front of the whole skool…if the person is successful he/she gets off but they are unable to do the dare they hav 2 do whtever they r told for a whole week..nd since u hav now managed to agonize Prem he will deliberately giv u a difficult task so that u loose

Mukti Mukti Deshmuk never backs away from a challengeacha forget Prem I am more interested in his friend Sharad….u shld hav seen the look on ur fae as soon as u saw him…u turned as red as a tomato…u fancy him dontcha….

Sneha: Oh Mukti…aisi koi baat nahi hai…woh Prem ka aur mera acha dost hai..thts it

Mukti:so u wont mind if I ask him 2 da welome dance then??

Sneha:acha theek hai…I admit I kindda sorta like him…..and blushed…..but he already has a date…tht Tanisha

Mukti:ab bus ab tum deekho Mukti ka kamal…who tumhein dance per le k jaye ga…yea mera wada raha

During the lunch break everyone is sitting in the cafeteria…Sneha and Kasak are really apprehensive about the dare however Mukti was least concerned about it and was thoroughly enjoying herself…making new friends and spending time with Kasak and Sneha..A spell of silence fell upon the noisy cafeteria,,,Mukti looked up to see and a bunh of his friends standing in front of her…

Mukti; tumhein koi kaam tha kya??

Prem: iss college ka eek rivaaj hai k har newbie ko eek dare karni hoti hai…im sure k Sneha nay tumhein rules bata diya hoon ge…so lets move it on…we then see everyone standing arounf a pier…Prem points to a reef bobbing in the water….

Prem;ur dare is tht u hav 2 beat me in a swimming race…seethat reef the 1st person to reach it and comeback wins….If I win u will hav 2 bow down and salute me everytime I pass by…

Sneha:look Prem this is'nt fair…you are a swimming champion…this race is very unfair…we know that you will win…plz change your dare

Prem:My dear sis hav'nt you ever heard tht everything is fair in luv and war??and dis is WAR

Mukti:I accept your challenge…But lets make It a little more interesting..If I win, you hav 2 chauffer me around for a week..You will hav 2 drive me wherever I want and whenever I want…bolo manzoor hai??

Prem: manzoor hai and they both shake on it

Then they both change Prem changes into his swimming trunks (hot hot hot….imagine him in his trunks :P) and someone arranges for a costume for Mukti…
Prem stares at Mukti,admiring her body in the lycra material but snaps put of his revere when the whistle is blown…Unknown to Prem Mukti turns out to be a swimming champion herself who is a fast as Prem
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!i love ur fanfic hehe i wonder who will win, i hp its mukti!continue sn!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!just caught up! do continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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as fast or faster.. llolzz.. great part and continue sooonnn

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